Shi Potian Travels Through Linghu Chong

Why is the protagonist written like a mentally retarded person? His innocent heart is not that of a Tang baby. What the hell is going on?

I can't write this book, not because I'm not capable, but because there's only so much scope for a martial arts novel, and there's only so much space that a martial arts fan fiction can hold. This book writes the story of Brother Dog in Xiaoao well and then ends it. I can give an evaluation of Liancao+ or even Xiancao-, and I am willing to support the author's next work. If you switch to martial arts or even become an immortal, you may not be able to read it. The eunuch is actually not a bad choice, but I still hope that the author can come back and finish the novel well.

Before reading this book, I didn't expect that Shi Potian had so many fans, nor did I expect that Linghu Chong had more negative fans. "The Swordsman" should be the most scolded among all Jin Yong's works, firstly because of his stance, and secondly because he wrote in a field that he was not good at, which resulted in a very confusing and nondescript story. This book is not the work of a master. If you don't read the readers' comments, the experience is still very good. The readers' comments are confusing to me as a reader. It is the first time for an author to write a long article. I don't know if I can maintain my mentality.                                                                                               Brother Gou relies on his superb talent and super righteous views to save Xiaoao, a world where people are killed at will. In fact, the character in it that I feel most emotional about is Yue Buqun. Yue Buqun was written by the original author as a hypocrite, not even a true villain, but in fact if he had the chance, even if he was a hypocrite, he would become a true gentleman if he could remain so for a lifetime. It's a pity that the original work didn't give him this opportunity. Yue Buqun's dream is to revitalize the Huashan Qi Sect. He was an ordinary disciple before the split between the Huashan Sword Qi Sect. He survived that incident because he was not taken seriously because he was ordinary. This shows that he actually has mediocre qualifications. After years of hard work, Linghu Chong, the successor he trained, parted ways with him, just like parents who hope that their sons can inherit their ideals when they cannot go to Peking University. As a result, the child ran away to join the underworld on the way to school. Not only did my grades not improve, but I also spent the whole day eating, drinking and having fun with those gangsters, treating fights as brotherly loyalty, and I would be pissed off to death. Then someone actually told him that he did not need to rely on others, he himself could be admitted to a university for the elderly and become a top talent, and the cost was only to commit suicide. For Yue Buqun, who is already over 40 years old, there is no need to consider the price of concubine. The only thing to consider is the issue of face after others find out. But it was his dream to carry forward the Huashan Sect, but now it has become a demon in his heart. I hope this thing is very strange. When it is weak, it can be a pillar of support in the heart, but if it has been supported for a long time and the pillar is broken and the person is still there, it is likely to become an inner demon and do things that ordinary people can't think of. In fact, what Yue Buqun did is really nothing in the world of Swordsman. Today I am particularly touched because I am an ordinary person who cannot be more ordinary and constantly warn myself not to put pressure on my son. But when I reach middle age, the past few years have indeed been difficult. I can convince myself that it is because the general environment is not good. As an ordinary person, I cannot go against the current, but I am unwilling to go against the current. This hope of persistence, I hope that I must persevere. It would be great if I could meet a dog brother at this time! Brother Gou is Yue Buqun's savior. I don't have a savior, but I can definitely hold on!

There are really not many martial arts fandoms to read, but this one is pretty good. The writing is smooth and the characters are not too OOC at the moment. However, I feel that Brother Gou's qualifications will be invincible after just practicing in gold-type martial arts. How to transfer to Zhutian (labeled Zhutian) in the future should be the key to whether this book can go smoothly: 1. Judging from Gou Ge's personality of attaching importance to friendship, he is not suitable for fast travel. He will inevitably have deep friendships with characters in every world. If not handled well, it will produce huge poisonous points 2. If there are cultivators in the heavens in the future, the collapse of combat power will be a problem. If the world chosen is too niche or too novice, it will also affect the popularity (like Doubo, I will definitely abandon it) Above, in fact, if it is really difficult to handle, I think it will be over after writing Xiaoao like "Sword Out of Hengshan". It is a good choice to complete other worlds with extra chapters or simply use the popularity to open a new book.

Very interesting, looking forward to the next content

From about 50,000 words to now, I really like the author's wonderful ideas and the subject of Brother Dog's time travel. As for the recent chapter talks and the controversy in the comment area, I personally feel that it is a problem with the amount of updates, or that the rhythm is not well controlled. It's like breaking one sentence into three sentences, which is annoying. (Refer to the magical senior brother of Guangu in Love Apartment) If you change the map later, it is recommended to change to a world of mechas and superpowers. No matter how high your martial arts skills are, you are still afraid of "chopping knives". The power of ten dragons and ten elephants can't withstand a slap. In terms of subject matter, you can refer to Tongmao Ni's "Jianke". I believe the author can bring a different story.

Regarding some comments on the post, I have no objection if it is a serialized version of Yue Buqun, but if it is a three-part version of Yue Buqun, then I have to wonder if you have read the book. When the Huashan sect was not so bad in the early stage, he was already deliberately plotting to ward off evil swords and kill the British. He was not soft-hearted when Bai Luo was there. He was also the one who accused Linghu Chong of stealing the evil-repelling sword manual. The Songshan sect was so strong that he must be thinking of ways to fight against it. No, he was still looking for the evil-repelling sword manual. No one in Fang Zheng Chongxu believed Yue Buqun's so-called gentleman sword. As for Linghu Chong, let me make it clear that I think there are big problems with Linghu Chong's character. For example, when he saved Xiang Wentian, Yue Buqun was not qualified to laugh at Linghu Chong. Linghu Chong and Tian Boguang only became friends when the two were near death and Tian Boguang spared him twice and asked him not to be a prostitute.

Liu Zhengfeng made friends with Qu Yang. Zuo Lengchan: Kill his whole family, destroy his whole family! Gou Ge befriends Qu Feiyan. Zuo Lengchan: Kill him... Songshan Thirteen Taibao: Senior brother, you heard wrong. The great disciple of Huashan is trying to persuade evil to do good, and his merits are immeasurable. We want to come to congratulate him!

I just read Chapter 314. Axiu and Yue Lingshan are fighting for husband. As a result, Ahuang transformed. I don't dare to watch. Can anyone kindly tell me who the heroine is?

At first glance it is well written. But it's really annoying to watch this kind of idiot protagonist all the time.

I remember when Brother Gou and Zhang San and Li Si were sworn sworn brothers, in addition to their internal strength of Yan Yan Gong and Luohan Demon Subduing Gong, they also knew the 72 Snow Mountain Sword Techniques, the 36 Ding Family Capture Masters, the 73 Golden Crow Sword Techniques, and Xie Yanke's palm technique that was specious. If nothing else, the Snow Mountain Sword Technique and the Golden Crow Sword Technique were very powerful! Not to mention the Arhat's magical skill of subduing demons!

Is Qidian lacking of fairy tale novels? It's almost overflowing. Why do some people always want to make characters in martial arts novels fly and become immortals?

This book is very good. Because it is about the heavens, I speculate that Brother Gou will continue to time travel to other people in the future, such as Xu Xian, Fa Hai, Sun Wukong, Zhang Xiaofan, etc. I will probably die laughing by then. It's true that Brother Gou's character is so unique that he overwhelms the protagonist. [Wukong in Time Travel: It is estimated that the Patriarch Bodhi will be angry to death by Brother Gou's mouth, and the Monkey King, don't even think about it. If you want to promote the plot, you will probably need Brother Gou's mouth to help. For example, to be honest, after all, most gods have weird shapes. If Brother Gou speaks sincerely, he will always make the villain unhappy and frame him]

What the hell, why did the treasure book I left become so popular all of a sudden? I can no longer watch secretly

It is unrealistic for a person like Gou Ge to write a long novel. It is much better to rewrite Xiaoao and finish it directly to accumulate fans than to change it into a full-length novel. The people who are clamoring to watch Zhutian Ryu are not many, but their voices are loud.

It's relatively new, that is, Brother Dog is too kind and is kind to his enemies, but Swordsman is not the kind of environment in Xia Ke Xing

Later, Brother Dog, let's do some air-control flying. I'm a cultivator, I just want to see a kind world. Anyone who doesn't like it will be punished.

I haven't watched Knight Rider and Swordsman, and people in the comment section say that Shi Potian is just innocent, not a fool, but I don't see how the author is innocent. It feels like a pure person with an IQ problem. Others have killed people in front of him, and he still wants to compete with others?

The logic of today's chapter is still weird. I reviewed the plot. From the time I saved Hengshan, the author has no control over the plot. I'm afraid that Zuo ➗ will be offline early 😰. After that, the Five Sacred Mountains Conference was a collective wisdom of the five mountains. There can be conflicts, but I ignored the logic of the plot and made it the most boring arena. I originally planned to wait and see about raising books, but now the author is bye.

This latest chapter is a bit funny, the plot has a childish flavor, I was speechless while reading it.

I see that other authors have started copying ideas, copying protagonists, and copying introductions, hey. It's hard to agree with everyone, so don't let the author dictate the pace, just write well according to your own plan. Come on! !

I was surprised that I couldn't write 500,000 words.

It's so stupid to play a bad hand with a good hand.

😅 The first book by a new author was a hit, and the result was an eunuch. Later, "A Chinese Ghost Story" was indeed a bit self-defeating, but "Swordsman" actually still has some writing to it.

The writing is really good, the characters are basically fine, and the chapters are good, but the updates are too slow. But the force surges too fast. I don't know what to do next. Will I go to another world? Anyway, this is my favorite book to read recently. I'll give you all the monthly passes I saved from reading other novels. Come on, author

The entire Swordsman is that others see the protagonist as a young boy and look down upon him. The protagonist pretends to be a good boy, but the bad guys sneak up on him, and he is forced to fight back with his strong energy to protect his body. Compared with the popular movie Pretending to Be a Pig and Eat a Tiger a few years ago, the protagonist is a true, kind and beautiful person, but he falls into a big cesspool of rivers and lakes, attracting countless flies and mice. It will make you feel tired after watching too much.

Let me know when the author has published a new book.

Too cheap!

Writing and thinking are like rivers flowing, so why have you stopped writing for so long? The hall is full of old friends who are looking up at me, hoping that you will wipe out your sad face with your pen.

I just want to raise it, and it will die. . . . .