Living Too Long and Trying to Have Some Fun Is Treated Like a Dragon

It's okay, but after reading Chapter 18, I still can't figure out the forces in this world, the combat power system, etc.

The idea is good, but the setting is too dramatic. A sister who is hundreds of years old and a sister who is just 11 years old. Give me a space ring, which is my sister's savings of hundreds of years. Red Dragon, who has been working hard for thousands of years, suddenly wants to be a salted fish. The conversation between my sister and the dragon was also very awkward. All I can say is that it's a little bit erotic. It's a bit of a shame that the introduction was so creative.

It is indeed the author's first book. No wonder the plot is a bit confusing and the sentences are a bit deliberate, like a primary school student's composition. But as a first book for practicing, it is already well written.

The writing style cannot be read carefully, the syntax is sparse, and the plot is worth reading. I can only tell the author to take it seriously 🌹

After reading the introduction, I have no desire to read it.

I saw 40 pictures. The role of the protagonist is to provide the backdrop. Then the overall look is too boring and uninteresting. Although it is said that it is to read some ordinary novels, but you are too ordinary.

The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth, AI text

The plot is bland but not boring, like a fairy tale. It has both advantages and disadvantages. The intention to pursue the decision is not very high.

I can't understand. There's a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. It's confusing.

The writing is very straightforward, jumpy, and incoherent. How should I put it? It's a bit like a children's book, but the wording and sentences are not as good as fairy tales, so it becomes a bit nondescript. To say it is like AI is a bit too much. I can only say it is a pure novice.