Douluo: Huo Yuhao Possesses the Erlang Divine Eye

At the moment, I think it's really okay. When the number of words increases, the popularity should also increase. For me, there is no plot to persuade me to quit. I can see improvement in the writing style. I hope the author will stick to it. In time, it will be a good novel.

Suddenly I thought, Huo Yuhao is in Tang San's hands, can he call Pi San to save his mother in the future?

Breaking the sea to save mother Golden eyes break through obstacles to see the way forward, and the three-pointed spear kills the evil tiger. Destroy all evils with one sword, and the Eight Cold Hells will destroy the divine palace. The giant ax cuts the sea and the mother and son gather together, and the Taoist magic method fights against the Tang ancestor. Today I hail Huo Zhenjun, Douluo's destiny is returned to all people.

There is such a character who has three eyes on his head, and the third eye between his eyebrows can display great supernatural powers. His character is about love and justice, and the tragic experience of his mother was the fundamental motivation for him to become stronger in his early days. He has 6 very close brothers and sisters. One of his close friends was placed under some kind of ban by the Buddha. Once he violates the precepts, he will have unbearable headaches. Who is this character? 😏

Huo Yuhao, a disciple of Erlang, cut off the sea to save his mother. His honorific title is: The Great Sage of the Ice Realm, the True Monarch of Golden Eyes, the Emperor of Thousands of Machines and Soldiers, and he sent generals to benefit the people and kill the king.

Huo Yuhao worshiped Erlang Zhenjun as his disciple and joined the Taoist sect. With this support, Tang Fozu was completely out of luck, and it was useless to use his real body in the lower realm. It was just the difference between early death and late death. All those calculations and methods were useless. Without Tang San, the protagonist, as a son of fate, has a smooth future. Moreover, there are eight-nine mysterious arts, heavenly eyes, three-pointed two-edged spears, demon-slaying swords, mountain-breaking axes, etc., Plus the opportunities in the original work, the future is promising.

Is the second martial spirit still the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion? I haven't used this martial soul much in the later period, and I haven't used it since I arrived in the God Realm. Why don't I change it to a stronger martial soul?

Wrapped in the skin of an aborigine, his thoughts, emotional intelligence, methods and speaking skills are the same as those of a time traveler. Don't be too dramatic when writing aboriginal texts. Can having multiple Erlangshen in your mind increase your emotional intelligence?

My friends are ashamed to be friends with me, my nephews do not consider me their uncle, my sisters do not consider me their brothers, and my mothers do not consider me their children. Between heaven and earth, there is no place for me to rest. I have only one divine power, but I am unable to turn the tide. At this point in my life, I hate the water forever.

One of the most enjoyable aspects of this book is the upgrading of absorbing rings. It gives me a feeling of upgrading but not using my strength. There is no need to crush peers, seniors, and old ghosts. These are present but too few and the writing is too bland and boring. It also always feels like the author is writing something that is not there but I can't see it.

Shennong Before Chapter 40, it was high-quality food and grass, with smooth plot, reasonable plot, and good character creation. Chapter 40-60 begins, and 4-5 chapters are written on the auction, which is tasteless and boring. After Chapter 60, the plot flow becomes more serious, and there are problems with character creation and double standards. At the end, the front part is quite interesting, but it's a pity that the plot at the end is boring to watch, otherwise prepare to run away.

This level is not enough at the starting point. It is too rigid and immature. Everyone is like a robot.

Black Mythology also got involved in Douluo Continent and got a big IP

In fact, I think Huo Yuhao has enough troubles. There is no need for Erlangshen to join. Just give him the ability to see through destiny. There is no need to stay like a nanny all the time. The main reason is that Erlangshen is always busy and other characters have no chance to play.

According to the news revealed in Bibi Dong's extra chapter: Qianxunji=Yu Xiaogang=Incarnation of Douluo's Creation God=Incarnation of God's Seal and Creation God=Secret Chamber Douluo 😰😰 Brothers, give me your opinions

Well, the subject matter is okay, but the plot logic and dialogue are particularly awkward.

Can Mr. Mu and Mr. Xuan in the narration be changed? It's not like they don't have their own names. They obviously have nothing to do with each other and have become each other's juniors unilaterally.

To be honest, I read this book for a long time until it was finished. I remember when I was reading this book, it seemed to have been updated to almost 100. During this period, I used points to purchase a few chapters, and then directly purchased all of them. Then I waited for the update of this book, and almost all the chapters of this book were I bought it. After reading it, it was generally pretty good. However, the ending was a bit rushed, and some characters did not appear, or some characters were mentioned briefly, or even appeared once but never appeared again. Moreover, this book still has many pitfalls. I hope the author can make a sequel to fill in these pitfalls. As the author, what are you going to write about in this book? Are you going to continue writing Douluo fan fiction, or are you going to write a story about Huo Yuhao's journey to the world of Black Myth?

The part where I wrote about meeting Princess Vina for the first time is a little bit poisonous... How can anyone reveal all their secrets at the first meeting? You've written more than 200 chapters and you still don't come back to check and revise them?

Huo Yuhao

The people of destiny will eventually defeat Erlang Xiansheng Zhenjun Na Yigen. Do you think Huo Yuhao will finally defeat the Great Sage?

To save his mother, Dai Hao must be allowed to live longer. Huo Yun'er is completely in love, so it would be a mistake to let these two meet! ! ! !

By the way, is there anyone who can comment on this book?

I feel like the author may not be able to continue writing. I hope it won't be removed from the shelves.

It's a pity that Tang San didn't recognize the inheritance of Erlang Shen in the end. The Tang Sect is from Sichuan, he should know Erlang Xiansheng True Lord.

After reading the chapter names, I can roughly guess what I'm going to write about, but it's not attractive at all.

Are you really not going to write even one extra chapter?

When you meet someone, just say that you are the ultimate martial soul. If you don't have a good brain, you are the one.