China Entertainment 2000, This Star Is a Bit Subversive

Make a suggestion. When writing copy for film and television dramas, you are quite harmonious in terms of conflicts and pretentiousness. Writing is very natural, writing entertainment articles is too indulgent. And he is very restrained personally. Immature thoughts. The strokes are too shallow. You dare not write about galloping horses. Entertainment literature has been half abolished. When I saw it on the shelves. There is no center to your story. There is no theme. There is no main line. Aren't you tired of writing it yourself? Half is written for readers, and half is written for myself. You decide for yourself, it's 2:30 and I'm going to bed. You are talented, but your three views and personal logic are still relatively immature. You can still write in a relaxed way, but I feel like you can't write in a realistic way. This is not a disadvantage. It just suits other writing styles. Other literary streams. It is recommended to change the track, maybe it will have a different style.

You are not good at writing entertainment articles. Have you considered copy genre. Celebrity face. Team up, level up, complete tasks, etc. Have a little fun. As long as you don't abuse the master, that's fine. Your opening story is too out of the ordinary. Very light. The entertainment is there, but the rigor of your story is not.

I finally understand why this book has been on my bookshelf for at least half a year. I read it all every month, but I can ignore a book with hundreds of chapters that can be read for several months. It's not his fault that the author said he likes Stephen Chow, and it's not his fault that he wrote Chinese entertainment stories as nonsensical. The fault lies in the fact that the author actually thinks that nonsense is part of life and daily life. Everyone who can't even fart from Stephen Chow knows that in reality, doing this is a bullshit behavior. The author actually thinks that it is nonsensical and will attract a lot of people on a daily basis. Although writing books is everyone's hobby, it is difficult for a normal person to feel immersed in reading a normal book. People can be slutty, but they can't be arrogant. It can be seen that the author's reading volume and writing style are not bad. I hope that the male protagonist of your next book will be more exciting, but don't be too nervous. Four words to you, never let the male protagonist be a "grandstanding" person in society. The second time I read "Shaobao 2", I died of poisoning where I randomly changed the lines.

Except for the main character having a brain problem, everything else is pretty good.

The appearance of pig's trotters in the first chapter is amazing. If you think about singing a crematorium song during the art exam, it will make people feel that pig's trotters are unrestrained, unrestrained, bold or crazy! Immediately stopped the protagonist! But the more I write about it, the more disappointing it becomes. I suggest the author think about it and revise it.

It's a bit nonsensical, but it's too self-deprecating. The plot and jokes are quite funny. The other details are hard to describe. The situation of the protagonist at the beginning is not clearly stated. It's foggy If it matches the brain wave, it's like a top-notch book. If it doesn't match, it's just a mess...

The songs that the queen sings for big names are relatively niche and are not commercial pop songs, so ordinary people don't know about them. That song should have been written by Sambo.

A pure, self-motivated novel by the author. The protagonist is completely inconsistent with the thinking logic of normal people.

This novel gives me the feeling that it is too pretentious, and it is a relatively distant kind of pretense, that is, the other people are all NPCs, and only the protagonist is a player. Everyone is drunk and I am alone, and the sense of superiority and contempt when facing NPCs. Reading Chinese novels is indeed for the pleasure of reading pretentiousness, but the prerequisite is that the reader has a sense of substitution. I can only say that this novel is relatively niche, and I am afraid that ordinary people cannot relate to it. It must be People who can keep up with the author's rhythm and match the author's brain waves have nothing to do with whether they have a sense of humor. If this novel becomes popular and the author makes money, then think of me as farting. If the novel is not too popular, or it is a blockbuster, it is recommended that the author writes entertainment novels. The personal style should not be too strong, and the reading threshold should not be so high. At least it can match the brain waves of most people, at least not until you become a master platinum. Of course, it is just a suggestion.

Although the world is a huge grassroots team, but you are writing a realistic story, then at least you have to tell a story that fits the setting. I saw that I went to Hengdian to shoot Bao 2 and played six supporting roles. I really couldn't stand it. Who is filming and letting the supporting roles play freely? The director just watched the supporting roles perform, and then waited for the lead group to take over the scene, and praised him for taking it. Why, the filming can't be blocked? I made a mistake with the prop, can't I try again if it gets stuck?

I only read Chapter 8 and wanted to ask if I should read it later. I felt that the protagonist was mentally disturbed and had an abnormal name. Did Shen Nong tell me?

There are no plug-ins to improve basic skills. Even if you go back in time and haven't learned it, you still haven't learned it, and if you can't do it, you still can't do it. Just like Lei Jun, when he was at his lowest, he only had 40 billion in his card.

Now you know that Yiyuan is so crazy, influenced by Godfather Meteor 😃

Is this book on the shelves? I was hooked when I saw Chapter 5, the writing was so messy! It feels like the author's mind was filled with mush when he wrote it! More than one million words! Talent

There are so many poisonous points. It cost 300 million to make Sword and Sword 3 in 2006, other TV series cost hundreds of millions, and movies only cost several million. The assets of female stars in 2004 and 2005 reached tens of millions and hundreds of millions. Sometimes the financial figures in novels are very real, and sometimes they are too fake.

It's super obvious to force someone to be smart, and then everyone pretends to be stupid and doesn't know who the 'Meteor' is. It's like your family is all at home. When you get home, you see your family members, and then you look around like crazy, and you tell them that you don't know where your family members are. Aren't you trying to force someone to be smart?

Brother, it's a bit too crazy. No matter how nervous I am, I was shocked😥

I can watch it without Liu Yifei. I don't know why, but it seems that I can't write it if I don't write about Liu Yifei.

Not much wrong with it, just a little watery.

When do you call teachers "adult" in Chinese examination rooms? Call the exam teacher the presidium? And when will the art exam be in English? The first two chapters persuade you to quit

For the first time, every woman should collect it. If she is good-looking and has few things to do, she can keep it. If Brother Xing has such a big industry, the more women he has, the more children he will have.

What kind of mentality does the author have to write more than 1 million words? Listen to my advice and you can't grasp the entertainment novels. The poison starts in the second half of the first chapter.

Isn't there Fan Bingbing? What a pity. Can anyone recommend some novels with the heroine Fan Bingbing? Thank you.