Wizard: Overturning the World Starting from Connecting Planes

It's so messy that I don't even know what to write.

There are many disadvantages. The appearance of the first character is like going to the market. Somewhat abrupt. This sudden feeling is like a beggar next to you, and the next moment he is a god. Reality, can you become a rich man in the next second? Of course, what we are looking at is not the reality, but the real reactions and reasonable events. 2 The appearance of ability is unreasonable. Weird ability, but emphasizing level. Although this is also a way of writing contradictions, the incompatibility with the overall literary flow creates a sense of distortion. 3 and so on If this is a book written by a person with different ideas in mind. I don't think it feels out of the ordinary. The author has the talent to write books on this psychological aspect. You can specialize in this area. It may be easy to achieve success.

The plot is so confusing that I can't recall the order of what happened. Moreover, some things in this book feel like a prose novel, and the author expresses his literary youthfulness from time to time. I almost thought I was doing reading comprehension. It didn't look like I was reading a fantasy novel.

Please write a story first, and then show off your literary youth!

Can't the author write something that normal people can understand? I can't understand what you wrote.

Between 100,000 and 120,000 words, the plot may be a little out of line; To be honest, Aries, Aries is a very immature guy, and it is his first time writing a book. There are too many things he wants to express, and his ability is too poor. He writes here and there, and he doesn't know what he is writing, and it doesn't look like an online article for the public; But Aries will make progress. Yes, starting from today, in the following chapters, Aries will use more rational words (I used to like to use some incomprehensible words, but now Aries understands that this is a very bad habit); the perspective of the work will be more single; Aries will work hard to serve the readers, and try to abandon boring plots that try to explore certain things, retaining only a few central themes. To be honest, these days, because I know that this book will not produce results, and because of the heavy academic work in college (electronic information, it is 8 a. M. Every day, and coding is slow for novices), Aries is a little out of the ordinary, thinking about this book to practice and find direction. But Aries now feels that this kind of behavior is sorry for the readers who clicked in, and also sorry for the editor who originally signed me. This book will still be written until it is on the shelves and then full attendance, but next, Aries will work harder to complete each chapter to make it more popular and smoother. I am very grateful to every reader who can click in. Aries has too many flaws, but Aries accepts this. I hope everyone can find their own direction.

Let's talk about my feelings about the first three chapters of this book. The first two chapters of this book gave me a strong feeling of a movie. However, the third chapter and the first two chapters have a very bad feeling. It feels like the Marvel world has suddenly been transformed into a two-dimensional love story. It's too cliche. Oh, man, a man covered in wounds and armed with weapons suddenly entered the locker room. You were thinking of the person pursuing you. You must be stupid. You said that woman loves fantasy. I have nothing to say, but substituting fantasy into reality is pure stupidity. But in view of the performance of the first two chapters, it is still worth reading, but I hope it will not feel pulled by the sudden change in the style of painting. If you can't write about the heroine, don't write about emotions.

Indeed, there is a big problem with the first photo. The content in your profile makes me think that your world photo is to flip the gravity of the entire city. But from your behavior, I did not see the relevant situation. I can only say six

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

First of all, thank you so much to every reader who clicked in! This is a pure new book. The new author has never written anything like this. The editor took advantage of it and suddenly started to feel overwhelmed. Therefore, there are really many, many, many, many areas for improvement in this book! Aries (I will call myself "Aries" in the future! Because the pen name is too long and difficult to pronounce, you can call it whatever you want!) I really, really thank you all! (Compare your feelings!) (Compare your feelings again!) Aries will carefully read all the comments about this book, and Aries is also seriously correcting some problems! We also welcome everyone's active suggestions and guidance! Aries will work hard to improve these problems, such as the "chaos" caused by perspective switching and scene changes. Come on, come on! There are many stories that Aries wants to tell, and there are also many flaws; so, whether you like it or not, it is a kind of fate that you can click in! Aries is really grateful to everyone! If you think this book has merit, please pay attention to the update at noon every day. There will be many, many surprises later! Finally, Qiu Yiqiu pursues reading; Aries will work hard to keep writing the story, because this is what Aries likes. I also wish every reader can find something they like! ! !

It's a pity that such a fascinating book has stopped like this.