Ocean Lord: Begin by Becoming a Fisherman

1. Why not set up the protagonist's data panel? I still haven't figured out the protagonist's specific combat power level. I suggest the author sort out what is available at this stage. To prevent the group portrait chapter from crashing later. 2. The description of fish products is too prominent, and there is a suspicion that the number of words is too low. It is recommended that you just write it once for each type of fish you want to catch, and harvest it with one click later. A separate copy for special items. 3. Special supplies are in short supply, and most of them are for one-time use. It is recommended that the author write about an adventure with a special fish school to relieve the pressure on supplies. 4. Why are there no aerial units such as birds in Sea World? They are all seafood. Detection is a problem. 5. The crew is small and the protagonist almost becomes a polished commander. Can a purifiable polluter become a crew member?

Come on, author, from personal adventure to tower defense, to lighting up bases and opening bases, they are all good ideas, and there are also many loopholes. But there are too few people writing this kind of articles now, and big authors are reluctant to write because they are too tired to write well. Novice writers are not good enough and have low entry barriers, but if they want to write well, they have to waste a lot of effort. Author, you deserve encouragement, come on! ! !

After reading dozens of chapters, I'm a little confused about the protagonist's character... I'd say he's the kind of character who "looks for trouble when nothing happens, and dances around the grave". In the early stage, the protagonist was described as being cautious, and even looked like a mother-in-law. He always looked like a lot of things, but to be honest, He must have the kind of character that "avoids interests and is far-sighted." Later, he went to other people's hometowns and tried to kill them in their faces, especially when trading water. After others bombarded him first and then boarded the ship to search him, a cautious person must have chosen to stay as far away as possible. The other party stayed far away, and would not meet him if he could. However, the protagonist refused and took the initiative to contact the other party. He also took out the things that the other party wanted to search before and brought them out for trade. Then there was another wave of crazy price reduction. If the water the protagonist wants to trade is something the protagonist particularly wants or even needs. In other words, this operation is not incomprehensible, but the article adds another sentence, this water is not necessary, it belongs to the category of "it's good to have it, and it's not bad if you can't get it now, you can look for it elsewhere." Then what was the protagonist doing to commit suicide and looking for trouble this day? ………

Generally speaking, the protagonists of this kind of time-travel novels are quite anthropomorphic. The protagonist of this novel is the most human-like one I have ever read. People are really good and they will think of other people without harming their own interests.

Personally, I don't like it very much. It's human nature for the protagonist to make many mistakes and be stupid, but I personally prefer the protagonist with above average intelligence.

It feels like the local docks are all covered with melon skins, and the extraordinary polluters will break into pieces at the touch of a touch. There is no reasonable combat power system. I used extraordinary waves to kill a fleet of thousands of polluters in seconds. The native extraordinary output will give you a large ship that can share the damage and it will take half a second. Other players have no sense of presence. To describe the game, the difficulty is that of a simple human-machine game. I am still playing in developer mode.

Can it be normal?

The author needs to check more information. 1: The ratio of ships is 2:1. The ratio is inappropriate; 2: Ship battles can easily involve tens of thousands of people. The 100-bow battleship on Earth's Shanghai is an epic battle example. How can a battlefield of 10,000 large ships be 1 The sea area of ​​0 million square kilometers can only be used; 3: Aircraft carrier air superiority is really useless for your fleet with more than 100 bows. An aircraft carrier formation with more than 10 bow frigates can control the airspace of the fleet. Aircraft carriers really have no threat to battleships, but are effective against transport ships and small fleets. They pose the greatest threat to immovable facilities on land, and they do not fit in with your world structure.

Follow-up reading is very important for new books. Whether they can be recommended or not depends entirely on follow-up reading. Please readers and adoptive fathers, please don't keep it forever. At least read the latest chapter on Monday and Tuesday. Thanks! Grateful! Grateful!

The solo battle in the early part of this book is quite attractive, but it starts to go downhill towards the end when you open the dock by yourself. Especially when the Sea Tribe calls the player a favored person, it is so ridiculous that I have no desire to read further.

The overall plot is too peaceful and has no twists and turns. Rather than a novel, it is more like a beautiful fantasy that a hoarder rat has before going to bed with the theme of how I would develop my power if I had a dock in another world. It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away 😴

The writing is so messy, and it makes me even more messy when I read it. There are planes coming out of nowhere, and I can't stand it anymore 🙂

It feels too fast, the development is extremely fast. The world view just started from a few docks in remote areas and ended directly. Those powerful docks in Middle-earth directly became decorations.

This book is basically more than just food. It is quite interesting to see the protagonist constantly catching more and better fish. But the recent development trend of the protagonist feels a bit too fast. I understand that you want to highlight the protagonist, but other earthlings and the protagonist are no longer in the same class. It is best to add a little adventure system, or sea wonders and the like. The protagonist gets certain benefits and gives other people on earth a reason to make progress. If this continues, other people on earth will only be cheerleaders

Instructing the author to write is not good, but so many people have criticized it, so the author must change it. I have read Chapter 23 so far. 1. Chapter 123 has too many criticisms and is indecisive. It makes sense for the author to indicate at the beginning that the colorful fish scales are a daily fixed reward and that the protagonist will be indecisive later on. Later, when fishing, it is understandable that you use the most common one for the first time, but if you use ordinary ones for the second time, your mentality is wrong. (If you wrote that the reward is fixed every day, then most players will use the dungeon directly on the same day in order to move faster and faster.) At this time, the protagonist should think that this kind of pollution-free black iron bait is basically not available to others. The system cannot give a dungeon that has no solution in the early stage (or wastes profits without reminders). At this time, it can be attributed to luck. And why does the author not use black iron bait because the quantity is small? Do you have a mission that must be done? This mission requires high-level fishing bait? Since there is no such thing, why not bet on the bonus copy? Whenever the author writes about the inner activities of the protagonist and concerns about lack of stamina and other issues, I would say that the protagonist is thoughtful. 2. When I got a fish-man mask, I immediately thought it was useless and kept it in the warehouse, without thinking about why there was such a prop. From the moment you get this prop, you can tell at a glance that there is such a contaminated group in this world. This group may be mainstream or heretical, but it is always the protagonist's camp. Later, when the natives told the male protagonist about the strange expedition, the protagonist should immediately recognize the points to pay attention to. This is not to say how smart he is, but simply to consider every item he obtains.

Too little, not enough to see. It is worth mentioning that the anchor teleportation point for returning to the base in this article is set very well. The protagonist is not restricted by the base, and the most attractive adventure of the voyage can continue.

To resist the strange fish at night, you can still accept it if you give some blue coins. The top ten will be rewarded with copies every day. If you accumulate a certain advantage, the top ten will basically be determined (not taking into account the situation of not encountering strange fish or unexpected encounters).

It's gold before it's even released on the shelves, and it doesn't have a main storyline, so its development is reckless. If there is a secret place, you can rush directly, if there is a pier, you can directly lean on it, if there is an item, you can directly trade it, if there is an island guarding task, you can directly accept it, and if there is bait, you can directly make a nest. It's always just right, coincidence, otherwise, lucky, etc.

This is the best book for those who are tired of fishing.

It only takes an hour for a colorful scale to enter the secret realm. Why do you have to use black iron when there are better baits? Use black iron to attract small fish to play? Good steel does not need to be used on the blade? I don't understand how this is written!

One point to mention is that when the protagonist first met a local force, he snatched their lifeblood by chance and then relied on their good intentions to get through. Moreover, the leader of this local force was a woman.

This book has started to go downhill. The first thing that attracted me was the adventurous fishing secret. Now writing about the port is not interesting and I have no desire to continue reading. The author can develop the port, but can he streamline it and write it faster, or set up a deputy port master who specializes in building and managing the protagonist. Then he can go out and adventure and fish. The treasures obtained in the secret realm can develop the port. This way it will be interesting. I also want to see the protagonist fishing for the extraordinary fish king and the colorful fish king. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions for reference only

The beginning is very good, the setting is very good, and the world view is also very good. From the middle stage, it is all mathematics. Each chapter is about tens of thousands or hundreds of millions of fish coins, various materials, and then the endless repetition of synthesis, synthesis, and picking up materials is very boring.

I'll give you the monthly pass, don't worry.

Anyone who has ever fished in a secret place should know about Watergate, and I don't think Du Jiangang doesn't know about it. It feels like the other fishermen have been outwitted... There shouldn't be so much difference between the first place and the bottom nine. Since they are the same starting point, even if you don't describe other people's plots, you shouldn't have no estimate of what others will do. To what extent, intrigues, spreading news about non-natives, local ports wooing fishermen due to their special characteristics... Etc., Not everyone wants to hide it like the protagonist, and the other two professions are not unknown and have no advantages. I thought it was good at the beginning, but it is a pity now.

There are too many thunders, why not write the health value and replace the endurance with the health value?

To be honest, I wrote very well, but this subject is not very popular now, so it should be renamed.

I just saw the protagonist choose a profession, and I always felt that the protagonist's talent and fishing were not suitable enough. There doesn't seem to be much of a gap between 4:1 and others' 3:1. If others also have talent, they may even be better than the protagonist. The combination of talent and profession feels like it is more flexible, but not outstanding enough. After all, the protagonist is usually quite special and different. I still don't know if others have talent. If not, it's fine. If they do, I feel like the protagonist is not strong enough.

I wrote four chapters of a fishing novel on a whim, but I couldn't sleep anyway. I want to ask, do many people read this kind of book?

The author is accelerating the progress and it is estimated that it will be finished soon.