The Years I Raised My Daughter in Tokyo

The plot of Jinguji Temple is inexplicable and spans too much. The writing is completely incomprehensible. I can understand that you write the protagonist to save people, but I don't understand that the protagonist should be suppressed as a rescuer. Not interesting

When writing daily, you need to make choices, write well and finish decisively, and don't make a running account. Furthermore, there are too many supporting roles.

I like things that are a bit perverted, and I am not interested in the happy and healing life of Japanese high school students. I am attracted to a dark and mysterious high school student who becomes the father of a beautiful girl and completes various tasks issued by the system. The teasing, misunderstandings and illicit feelings during the period attract me even more. So don't write about your daily life.

This Richard might as well become the heroine too

The subject matter is good, but the plot is too tight. The current content has been expanded to about a hundred chapters, which is the rhythm of writing a light novel. Now it is more like an outline.