I Asked You to Write About Persistence, but You Wrote About Great Love Immortal Lord?

Too much nonsense, just a few chapters about Dragon God, maybe Dragon God. Gu Zhenren is a god-level novel. But are you sure you are not the real Black Gu? People who know Master Gu feel that you are trying to discredit him. People who have not read Master Gu think that Master Gu is some mindless novel. It feels like you have to stop, otherwise you will be criticized

It's too watery. I haven't pushed much of Gu Zhenren's plot. How many chapters are there? Just go on TV and have tens of millions of fans. It's too exaggerated. There's also the copy of "Jian Jin Liquor"

For those who have never read Gu Zhenren but have heard of it, it is quite interesting. It is not like the book about the mysterious resurrection that I read about the competition. I added random things when I started writing. This is not to say that this is bad, but the key is to mess around. What is written in the front about the five turmoils and troubled times? , There is no god in the world (I don't know if it's a chaotic world of five turbidities, Chunyun). After the name of Yang Jian, there is also the Erlang Shen Yang Jian, the person who ends the ghost era, a lot of prefixes, all spoilers are over, I can't stand it anymore, and Yang Jian's school is added with "The dream begins" "Place", "Knocker Ghost" is also mentioned in the front. It is directly said that he is a top ghost master, and even the name has a prefix. Not only does it appear in the drama, the sense of mystery is gone, but also looking at the plot, the time travel about the mysterious resurgence wants to talk about the Republic of China at the beginning. I doubt that this is the author's idea, and then he wrote it. There is a beauty of not caring whether the reader lives or lives. I originally admired the characters of the mysterious resurgence, but now I feel that those few are just like that (I haven't read the original book, so I improved my impression based on the fans)

I have never seen Master Gu, but I have always heard the legend of Master Gu. In this novel, I realized the charm of Master Gu. It is a pity, and I finally understood why Master Gu was banned. As the saying goes, everyone is drunk and I am awake alone, just like the frost and the strange trees. You might as well send lonely roots to the hills, and the autumn wind will be accompanied by the cold wind. Life is sometimes confusing.

I didn't feel like it was good at the beginning, the text was meaningless, too watery, and the plot was too slow and uninteresting. I just skipped through it, but I was really a little surprised when I saw Chapter 38. The protagonist writes a novel, and then a lot of people praise it too much, and even come up with all kinds of tricks, such as light screens, memory extraction, and live broadcasts. They are just pretentious, but it is really tired of aesthetics and it is difficult to feel happy. But someone learned to be brave and persevere because of a story, and tried to get rid of the buffoon and become the protagonist, which was really touching. I used to read Gu Zhenren, and it was a strange feeling. On the one hand, I had a strong sense of discomfort, and on the other hand, I couldn't help but read it. I read it intermittently. Later, I read many, many novels, especially youth love novels. The story was not true, but the protagonist's passionate, frank and sincere life really attracted me, and I also wanted to change myself. The romantic life you want to live is not to make life ups and downs like a story, but to pursue the heart's choice and live the way you want and hope. But self-transformation is really difficult. Persisting to the end is just a matter of talking but not doing it, not working hard. You have to jump out of your comfort zone again and again, and you have to face the unknown again and again. In the end, you are still weak.

Identified as 🍅wen, it smells like a novice and brainless article.

Everyone knows the level at which I want you to flow (let you XX, you XX). To put it bluntly, just rub it in one word, rub it to death, whatever. The writing style is either that of a primary school student or generated by AI. The author is probably someone who has never watched Gu Zhenren. Even if he has, he will definitely have watched "hundreds of hours" of commentary videos.

I recommended it on the Internet today, and hundreds of favorites came up. I was very happy, but it was accompanied by a lot of criticism from friends. I feel it is necessary to explain it. I read it, and there are two issues everyone mentioned. The first question is "ancient poetry". Many people don't like the previous one. After careful consideration, I think this is indeed my problem. The main plot and interesting point of this book is Gu, not the text. I am deviating from the main line by writing this way. I'm sorry everyone. I will pay special attention to this kind of mistake in the future. The plots about Gu have been cut out in several outlines, so I probably won't make it again! The second question is "water". I am actually very eager to write something original, so I originally planned to use more than half of the plot to write about various disturbances caused by poison in the real world. For example, ancient poems, the various praises aroused after the publication of Gu Yue Qingshu's "Theory of Family Forest", the comparison of human ancestral biography and the Bible, the establishment of the Zhentiandi Family Alliance sect, and then the friction with Christianity, etc., But it seems that my level is not enough, everyone does not I like it very much. I received the criticism and will change it. I will concentrate on writing Gu in the future. In fact, I have already changed it. Starting from about thirty or forty chapters, everyone should be able to clearly feel that there are obviously more plots in Gu than before. I have realized that this is what everyone likes. So it should not be so "watery" in the future. Of course, because of the barrage comments and judges' comments, there will definitely be some criticism, but this is really important. It is impossible to say that someone has been copying the plot of Gu all the time. That is outrageous. And I understand that there are two main points for everyone to read this book. First, follow the plot and enjoy the charm of the Immortal Lord again. The second is to see the reaction of people in the real world after seeing Gu, and some interpretations of Gu that people may not notice at ordinary times. These will be shown through barrage and judges, so it cannot be less. That's it. I accidentally wrote a long and stinky article, please forgive me. I don't delete comments. I can see everyone's criticisms. I should be able to see every comment, chapter and paragraph comments. I hope everyone will continue to criticize me. Finally, someone said in the comments that I am a cloud reader, which is pure nonsense. To be honest, since writing this book, I feel that I can be regarded as a Gu P leader (it is undeniable, an iron-clad fact), so please stop talking nonsense like this, brother, and read a few more chapters. Is my understanding of Gu Whip in depth comparable to that of Yun Gu P? The article is really a bit long, so not many people will read it. Anyway, I just want to show my attitude. Brothers, I will pay attention to your criticism! Hope to support! Your reading is my biggest motivation, thank you for reading!

Is there something wrong with the introduction? Time travel to a writing competition How many words can you write? Eight hundred are often present, ten thousand are supported to death How many words does Master Gu have? From the birth of Fang Yuan at the beginning to the persistence of Ni Liuhe, Fang Yuan would still need hundreds of thousands of words even if he deleted it. Do the viewers have the time to read it?

It's really just a person who can write a book, right? As an author, you can't think about what's interesting before writing a book? I was clearly writing a novel that was copied by the public, but for no apparent reason, I ended up copying ancient poetry. Forget it, I copied the poem and also copied the author.

It's boring, it's boring, it's extremely boring, I skipped several chapters in a row, and he was still writing the same plot of Master Gu. Copying a poem can fill several chapters. Damn it, I went to watch Master Gu 😡

It is recommended that you go back and read the original article, so as not to ruin your own aesthetic appreciation.

Wenzhao Gong has evolved into this

Generally, it is inconsistent, causing society to look like it is too abstract, and the basic skills are average.

How to say it! I do not recommend this book to anyone under 25. It is too cruel, too rational and too inhumane. Just like reality. I watched it three or four times! I have different feelings every time I watch it. The protagonist can care less about everything, but the reality is that you can't let go of anything. Especially the front part was too dark, so the author tried to write as little as possible in the back part, but in the end he was banned from the entire network.

Dear author, your other plots (which have nothing to do with Master Gu) are too delayed. Everyone is curious about the story of Master Gu, but other people have written too much. Once the initial sense of excitement wears off, it feels a bit boring.

Those who didn't know thought they had entered 🍅 and the stove

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

It's poisonous, just copy the book, and pretend to be 13 if you have partial questions

The author can publish it on the free platform Tomato next door.

🍅 And Lu Zi are a hundred thousand times better than this

After identification, the author is Japanese

Five hundred years ago in the previous life. Fang Yuan leaned on the bamboo building, looking at the village, and then looking up at Qingmao Mountain behind her. Clenched his hands into fists, his young face was full of hope. "It's time to give up on the past." "It is my blessing to travel here! Because here, I can achieve immortality." "I must seize such a rare opportunity! Otherwise, how can I be worthy of myself and this opportunity?" "Of course, at this stage, It is to improve the living environment of my brother and I. After enlightenment. On the martial arts field, Fang Yuan lowered her head, with a look of shock and anger. "Who plotted against me? Don't want me to defeat my opponent? The answer is self-evident!" "Brother, give up, you will not be my opponent. Because of our different talents, we are destined to be different. "Gu Yue Fangzheng said with pleasure. Fang Yuan turned around and left, his eyes full of determination. "Since the village doesn't cultivate me, and my uncle and aunt even deliberately exclude me, what's the point of me staying here?" "Is it possible to become stronger and achieve immortality here?" In the caravan, the bearded Gu Master died, and Fang Yuan stood in front of his grave. The young man said with tears in his eyes: "Uncle Bearded, rest in peace. " "Thank you for the gift before you leave. "You said: When you were a child, you wanted to be an indomitable figure, just like the legendary figures of the righteous path." When I was young, I thought it would be good to become the leader of a clan. When I was young, it felt great to be the elder of my family. After middle age, he was exiled by his family and found that he could actually support himself and satisfy himself if he could feed the worms on his body. " "I will not let my dreams shrink with age. "The world is too big, and we are all small people... But I will work hard! I will keep working hard!" Childhood, boyhood, youth. Qingmao Mountain, caravan, walking all the way. Male, old age, finally get the longevity gu. Southern Xinjiang, Western Desert, East China Sea, Zhongzhou. After the rebirth of Spring and Autumn Cicada, Qingmao Mountain, Sanwang Mountain, Fox Fairy Land, Wangting Land, Yitian Mountain, and Niliu River! Step by step, he still moved forward without any emotion, despite the wind and rain. . I once cried, and gradually I stopped crying. I once felt sad, and gradually I was able to bear everything. But now I only have face. Expressionless, my eyes are as hard as a rock, and persistence is left in my heart. This is me, a little person, Fang Yuan's - persistence! The light suddenly shines, can't be looked at. Perseverance is perfected at this moment!!!

What does this say? No content of its own.

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns

This name feels like the author was born in a young age

I remember there was a variety show and writing book before.

This is the first time I've seen a book review circle where almost all of them are scolded.

No, I just read this book today

Dare to mention Immortal Lord at the starting point, you are a real warrior