Naruto: a Bizarre Adventure Starting from Kirigakure Village

For those who have never played MapleStory, it is really impossible to know what Xemose is.

What does this say? 😳Who can explain it?

There was a book published some time ago. The protagonist said that as a time traveler, he also wanted to appear in front of others as Santa Barbara, but he felt it was pointless. At that time, I wanted to post a comment to complain. You all know that readers like to show their holiness in front of others, but you deliberately did the opposite. The same goes for this book. It also has an Asasi male protagonist, but he doesn't have much initiative or goals, and he doesn't specify what he wants to do. The Japanese light flavor is almost overflowing. There is no system or those messy modern move names. I think the protagonist is a native, so it is better to write a native. In fact, the author should know very well what everyone likes to watch, Guan Gong fighting Qin Qiong, but it is a pity that he has to be gentle (at least he has to pretend to be gentle)

After reading the introduction, I thought there was some kind of mastermind behind the scenes, but it turned out that the protagonist personally guided him, which is boring.

After reading Chapter 50, I feel that the protagonist's route is very bland, and I can't find what he wants to do. Is it to change the plot to obtain a deviation point? But I didn't do anything. What impressed me most was the 100 Ninjutsu of Life. After looking at it and getting several rewards, I couldn't feel any difference from before.

After reading this hodgepodge, I still thought it was well written. I just didn't understand the latest chapter. I mentioned before that I wanted to get my own Zanpakutō, and now I'm giving Asaida to Konoha. The most important thing is that you are a member of Kirigakure in the Water Country.

Holy, I miss Allen Walker so much. Are you a rancid hero? The new hero is the former Allen Walker

The beginning is very interesting, but the enemy is a double, a Zanpakutō, and the main character is going back and forth with those original ninjutsu with nonsense, and there is no sense of expectation at all.

The writing style is okay, but the creativity is average. The author has a great heart and wants to describe a complete world. But the selling point... Or the appeal to readers is not good!

I roughly read it, but I didn't read it in detail. I left a little bit of my personal feelings. This is a hodgepodge. The world of Naruto is used as the underlying blueprint, but there is no original plot of Naruto or related derivative plots. Instead, the mastermind behind the scenes spreads a large number of extraordinary system powers from other worlds that do not belong to the Naruto world, polluting and confusing the entire ninja world. And the pig's feet... As a time traveler, the second son of a daimyo is inappropriate, and he must become a ninja, a black glove toolman of the daimyo. Then, under the assignment of the village, he went to various places to experience adventures... Stories. Disadvantages: 1. Naruto plot is basically non-existent. Naruto is just the background of the world, and the focus of the plot is also on the powers that do not belong to the ninja world. The readers attracted by the title of the book basically want to read Naruto... 2. Pig's Foot White has traveled through time. The most important thing about a time-travel novel is that "it makes sense to travel with pig's feet", or in other words, "the plot will be completely different without the pig's feet". As for the pig's feet in this book, how should I put them? The existence value of pig's feet is low? No meaning of existence? Removing such a pig's foot does not affect the plot at all. It is like this if you don't travel through time, and it is still like this after traveling through time. Wouldn't it be a waste of time traveling? 3. Is there a target for pig's feet? First, he was the second son of a daimyo, but he gave up on taking the political route and insisted on becoming a ninja... Being a ninja, but he did not work hard to strengthen his combat power. He felt that he was being pushed by the village to become stronger with tasks, rather than what he wanted... Being a ninja, he did almost nothing, relying entirely on his identity as the second son of a daimyo to shoulder the pressure from all parties. And all kinds of hidden murderous intentions... As a time traveler, after becoming a ninja, I have no urge to change the plot. Instead, I do tasks, and slowly build a bond with the ninjas. The friendship with the genin companions is so youthful, and I follow the jounin teacher to fight monsters in exchange for some mission rewards in the village... After pig's feet time travel, what on earth are you going to do? 4. Are pig feet a time traveler? It is clearly written that Pig's Knuckle is a time traveler and knows a lot of the plot, and then when he sees those extraordinary powers that do not belong to Naruto, Pig's Knuckle has not expressed anything... Blood Demon Technique... Magic... Zanpakutō... You can probably guess the author's idea: to describe a new ninja world that is polluted and confused by the mastermind behind the scenes using various extraordinary powers from different worlds that do not belong to Naruto's world? The idea is very good, but the selling point is not enough...

Great mix, I haven't written much now, so it's hard to comment.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a behind-the-scenes video. Even though it's not, it's still pretty good.

Brother, are you still writing, generating electricity for love? I took a look and ordered just one of yours. You provided it yourself! Come on! But I still advise you not to write it.

[Naruto World]: Can sacrificing Uchiha maintain peace in the ninja world? If my last name wasn't Uchiha, I almost would have believed it! You can call me traitor or executioner behind my back, but in front of me, you have to call me clan leader, or Hokage-sama! [Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba]: Mukai, I don't know what you regard life as, but I regard the blue Higan flower as a pickle! [Giant World]: It's not Jike or Allen who realizes his wish, but me! Titan power? Oh, Susanoo! [Inuyasha]: Kikyo, your biggest weakness is your kindness towards human beings. Now I want to forcefully kiss you. If you can, beat me to death! [Pirates]: Pirates are not allowed in the world of One Piece! This sea belongs only to navigators and adventurers! [God of Death], [Magic Forbidden], [Red Eyes], [Conan]...

You can post some opinions about the work in it, and I will work hard to improve it. You can even post some people, objects, and stories you want. Under appropriate circumstances, I will arrange for their appearance. In addition, I want to say something: this article is not a slow-burner, but it is a small theater with ten or twenty chapters. If possible, I hope that everyone will not read the book, but read it if you can. Chapters 20-70 are the critical period. If the author does not follow up, there will be no new readers and it will fall into an endless loop. Please (^人^)!