Red Mansion: Betrayal at the Beginning

Well said. It is true that some "Dream of Red Mansions" fan fiction writers are a bit schizophrenic. On the one hand, he always said that these pig teammates couldn't take care of him, but on the other hand, he worked hard as a nanny for Rong Guofu. How low is your hero? Working as a maid like Qingwen in Rongguo Mansion, working as a cow or a horse, she still feels that she possesses the modern concept of equality. It's too cheap to be a licking dog in the 21st century and then to be a licking dog for a maid in the 18th century. A maid is a domestic prostitute, one tael of silver each, the more expensive one is 5 taels of silver.

Brother, do you have no idea about ancient silver? Ordinary people only spend 600 taels a year. If you give a centurion 600 taels a year, you are really awesome.

Watched for a while. . The author's writing skills are really not good enough. There are various vernacular descriptions and there are many historical writings in vernacular, but most of them are in a comedy style. But you have to imitate Red Mansion. Readers who are attracted by the tone of Red Mansion, to put it bluntly, will retreat immediately after reading a few chapters and see that the tone of Red Mansion is not there. .

Beijing Wang Shuirong is a person who dances happily in the early stage but dies quickly in the later stage.

The great trick of rebellion in the feudal dynasty is to conquer the rich and divide the land. It is useful regardless of whether he is in prosperity or chaos. It is also useful under the eyes of your eternal emperor. You may not be careful. An emperor will die in one lifetime. In ancient times, as long as the farmers were divided into fields, it was easy to talk about anything. Without the fields, it was difficult to talk about anything. No matter what the prosperous times are, they belong to the upper class, and it has nothing to do with you shitty people. As long as you lead them to fight against the local tyrants and divide their fields, and there will be chaos in one place, others will follow suit.

I once wanted to write a book about Red Mansions for fun, but found that I had nowhere to start. There would definitely be irreconcilable contradictions between the readers' requirements and the logic of the story. If you want to write characters that meet the characteristics of the original work, you have to open up the harem, because The Red Mansion does not have the kind of main plot required for online novels, and can only be advanced through emotional drama. If you create a second design yourself, the status of the original characters will be greatly weakened, and the smell of the Red Mansion will be gone. Nowadays, except for some Ming Dynasty writing methods that are in line with Western modern times, most of them are illogical imperial writings that do not understand the historical context and social conditions at all, and mix in some superficial so-called advanced inventions. Is this kind of thing really rare in the long river? The general trend of the world is that long-term unity must divide, and long-term division must unite. This has something to do with the orders of princes and generals. It does not seem to be what the general public recognizes. The underlying background is power enslaving rights, equal obligations under the world, and the prince who serves one person's selfish interests. What is often seen are those protagonists who can only sing high-pitched songs. The emperor's core cannot be understood. A touch of lip service is too light. China's two thousand years of imperial power are no different from others. Just look at Huo Guang and Wang Mang. The endings of the two are obvious, not to mention the changes in the system of provincial governors under the Three Gong Shangshu. It is more to encourage officials to be greedy for money and lust rather than to be honest and close to the people. They would rather sacrifice their foundation to ensure absolute control of power. The people are leeks and officials are slaves. This is a fact. Isn't the so-called constitutional monarchy a joke? I have almost never seen a book that meets my expectations on this platform. If you just tell a story, I will accept it. There are too many private stories that I don't understand, which is very off-putting.

I haven't read it yet, but after reading the comments, I can see that the author is really stubborn about the salary issue and refuses to correct his mistakes. People are always greedy. No matter how much money you give, they will be grateful at first, and over time they will get used to it. They will not think it is you who gave it to you, but they will think it is what they deserve. Not to mention the collapse of the financial system, do you only want the army? Who doesn't need money to develop territory and appease people's hearts later? No amount of money is enough. Let's not talk about ancient times. Let's just say that when our country was first established, it was very poor. I won't talk about the disasters later. Controlling your subordinates has never relied on money, but on comparison. Even if you are a direct descendant, as long as you are better than other troops, no matter how much you thank them for their sense of honor, it is enough. A word to the author: Don't let people eat too much. If they are too full, their thoughts will become complicated. Since ancient times, why can a large group of people be brought out? Do you really think it's all the fault of local officials and landlords? No, no, no, these people are very smart and know not to push people into despair. So when the rebels joined forces, most of them destroyed their fields and their families. I took away all the food from your family, and your life is in my hands. If you don't follow me, who can you follow? In the final siege, he was pushed as cannon fodder, survived and got promoted and became a winner, but he had no way out in the court and could only become a thief. I have said so much just to let the author understand a little bit. These people cannot be fed, they must be put in danger at all times, and their spirits must be tense, but they must also be given a little hope, thinking that there is a way out with you. The core figures must cut off their escape if they have conditions, and if not, relevant systems must be established, such as family members, and supervision units. A representative figure, Song Jiang knows, although his methods are poor, he understands this. You can package better and use smarter methods, but you must not understand it. Anyway, kindness must be there, but power must be sufficient.

If you want to get gold hairpins, you should develop them carefully. After the Jia Mansion is confiscated, you can take them all if you are rich and powerful. Even Mrs. Wang with taste can do it.

The main plot is rebellion, and the branch plot is the Red Mansion. Is this just to make dumplings out of jealousy? There are also places where weeds fall. Why choose Jiangnan and not be a water bandit? Or you can be a salt dealer. There is no future at all if you choose a mountain bandit.

You can't rebel in this water town without boats, and you can't rebel on land without horses. If you don't have a space, you have to have a spiritual treasure and a space to protect yourself, hide things, treasures, weapons and food. Please refer to Red Mansion: Stone Abyss

Isn't it written in the ending of Dream of Red Mansions that the end of the dynasty will begin soon after Jia's house was confiscated?

When it was put on the shelves, there was no Sister Lin. . The soy sauce is gone after a few splashes.

Falling grass is a bandit, it is better to write about Liu Xianglian. I started writing after Sanjie You died. My wife can rob that Miaoyu, Miaoyu is rich! If you have money, you can buy the female family members of the Jia family who had their homes confiscated.

You really don't regard silver as money 🙂