The Days When I Was an Undercover Agent at Liumen

As a martial artist, why don't you just make a magic machine and a hundred refinements, and then make a god-like mask to please the gods? I'll let you go all over the place with poison, so why don't you rush to the streets?

Look at the introduction, I've already been promoted and made a fortune, but I'm still sweating.

In the world of martial arts, if you don't practice martial arts well, you will dislike this kind of martial arts and dislike that kind of martial arts, and you won't practice your internal strength well. Not to mention invincible writing, at least your peers should not be scumbag. You have to let people know what is so cool about it.

I can accept the protagonist being undercover, but why don't you practice hard in this broken world? Lie down and kill yourself? Is there any conflict between your being undercover and practicing your martial arts to protect yourself?

In the world of martial arts, undercover agents don't care about improving their own strength and don't practice martial arts well. Goldfinger just chooses some miscellaneous things.

It's really frustrating to watch. He's the main character, but he doesn't deserve to be a supporting character.

The author wants to cheat but doesn't want to be invincible. If he cheats, he suppresses his combat power. The next day, he activates the divine machine and the Hundred Refining Skills, and in three years, he suppresses the complete internal strength. You wrote it well. We can all read the main character's basic sword skills. If the writing is not good, just open the big page and read the whole article, and you can still read it. As a result, you pulled a big one.

I feel like the biggest problem with this book is that I can't see the main character's goals, I can't see the long-term goals, and even the short-term goals are not very clear.

This plot is so familiar. Zhu Yipin comes first and then Taishi Hua, but the martial arts are different.

I read the same book, but I forgot the name

I didn't even see what state the male protagonist was in now.

If he doesn't practice martial arts, he likes some crooked ways. Even if he masters the Incomplete Sacred Heart Jue and is still rampant in mixed martial arts, Luo Xian won't be able to survive for many years after practicing it? Can one person be as good as Feng Yun?

Forget it about sunflowers, don't you even practice Tiangang Tongzi Kung Fu? Absolutely, you picked up an undercover 25-year-old

I don't quite understand the logic of Pig's Knuckle's behavior in these chapters. According to the character of Pig's Knuckle, a money-loving gangster, he didn't act like a wolf to get the treasure, and instead of just reaping the profits while Yu Huatian and Zhao Huaian worked hard, he entered the dark storm himself. . . Let the Thousand Blades of the Demon Sword take away the body? It's like a different person.

Is the male protagonist a little too afraid of the iron-courage god? Like sons and grandsons yes

I skipped after reading a few chapters. This kind of mixed martial arts does not highlight the characteristics of the protagonist. What is the use of blindly interspersing the original plot? What I want to see is the role of the protagonist in it. If you are invincible, push it sideways. If you are smart, you will burn your brain. If you are stubborn, you can develop quietly and secretly shoot. If you know the plot and still follow it, what is there to watch? Get rid of it.

Fuck, can't you just open a copy? Why don't you go directly to a world with wind and cloud in the far west? Farewell

The more I write about the worldview and combat power, the bigger and bigger it becomes, and the more I write about it, the more it collapses. Writing about the decisive battle at the top of the Forbidden City is too anticlimactic. And my writing power has dropped so much that I can't stand it anymore.

It will always be the five qi Chaoyuan realm, right? It's not like this to suppress the realm. Is the starting realm set high?

Are you not even creative at all? After getting the Shen Ji Bai Lian, I went over and over and over again, only the ones trained by the Horse Cult. How did the original work of the Shen Ji Bai Lian introduce it (the ultimate in machine skills, weapon refining, object control and chemical transformation.) There are even sharpened swords, and even a machine chariot. There are more tricks.

Welcome to taste it and see if it is good

Although the author makes the protagonist very powerful and can kill this and that, it always gives people the feeling that the protagonist likes external forces and does not pay attention to himself, so he is a pure waste. It would be fine if the author writes about a world with no extraordinary powers, or a low-demon world, but what you write is about mixed martial arts! Great power comes into one body! Extraordinary! Look at what you wrote?

I feel really uncomfortable after reading Chapter 29. A lot of the plot is very redundant. Not only is it meaningless, but it also makes the protagonist look like a loser and a psychopath.

It's the first time I've written this and it's been released. I feel the pressure is getting bigger and bigger, especially the plots of changing the map that I didn't handle well. Please understand. I'm really trying to find a way to make up for it. It's the first time I've written such a long article. I really don't know how to modify it. Do you have any suggestions? You can leave a message and say that I will try to change it according to everyone's wishes, but now I can only write it down. The pressure is really great. I am grateful for everyone's support. I will try my best to find ways to make up for the lack of good content. If new people write it, it will be put on the shelf. Please understand and I will slowly change it! ! ! ! ! !

There are seven or eight typos in Chapter 1 that people have mentioned but they still don't correct them. Some of them are not typos but just illogical sentences.

I can't read this book before it's even released on the shelves. There are too many flaws, so I might as well read it. The author just painted a picture and combined a lot of interesting backgrounds. The result is a mess. I feel that the idea is good, but the ability is limited.

You have so few updates🙂

Writing was pretty good at the beginning! Slowly upgrade the worldview and slowly spread it out, and you can keep writing. Later, when you get nervous, you mess up all of a sudden, as if the plot skipped hundreds of chapters and just collapsed.

? What's going on? No updates for a few days

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.