Rebirth in 1981, I Sold Popsicles and Married a Female Educated Youth

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It looks very awkward and disconnected The protagonist looks like a scumbag He doesn't recognize his relatives, and none of the relatives in the article are good. According to normal logic, the protagonist's family is definitely not a good person in this situation. However, the article describes the protagonist's family as honest people, which is incredible. The protagonist hates all his relatives, awesome! Except for his parents, sisters and Sanmao's other supporting characters, they are all villains Can such people live long in reality? ! Let's talk about relationship issues I was cuckolded by my wife in my previous life. After my rebirth, I wrote my ex-wife as a vicious and scheming bitch. I wished my ex-wife was dead and she was tortured to death later. If cheating is unforgivable, then who is the protagonist? ! The reborn protagonist pursues a female educated youth, then has an affair with a widow from another village while his wife is pregnant, and even cheats on her, and finally takes her home to recognize her. What kind of birth is this? What is the difference between this protagonist and his wife in the previous life? How can he retaliate against society after rebirth? You are justified when someone cheats on you, but if you cheat, your wife must bear it silently. What kind of bloody plot is this? Country love, Siheyuan, you have seen too much The author should make short dramas, or write on female channels

If the author doesn't have this experience, don't bite the bullet and write. At the beginning, it is said that the protagonist is reborn in his 60s. But looking at the whole story, the character is completely broken. It doesn't have that old-fashioned feel that has been read by countless people. Even if you write about a rebirth in your 30s, you won't have such a strong sense of disobedience.

I found that this author has never figured out why so many readers abandoned the book because of the villain Chen Erni. When you write a villain, you must at least interact with the protagonist, and there must be back and forth confrontations to call it a villain plot. What the hell are you writing? The protagonist is passively beaten all the time, his wife is almost raped, and Chen's business is kept Erni arranged for someone to report it. If the protagonist hadn't been lucky, the protagonist would have been basically destroyed. If the villain hadn't revealed his flaws, the protagonist wouldn't have even known who was targeting him. If you write it this way, who would think it's not vicious? A small person can play around with the protagonist. Doesn't that mean that only one person can mess with the protagonist?

I want to read about many women in the era. The writing about many women in the era is really excellent.

The first 250 chapters are okay, but there are a few bad points. Constantly moving and having no fixed territory. The assets are not clear, and they become unclear from the moment the protagonist enters the province. The setbacks are all trivial things, but a person over fifty years old in his previous life has no experience and is always tested by trivial things. There is also Zhang Xiaopang, who suddenly lost his parents and was adopted. The plot twist was too sudden. After 250 chapters, I can't read anymore. I hope the author can sort out the outline.

There are so many villains in urban novels of this era, which are like fantasy novels and affect the desire to read them.

If you don't have a harem, don't be too ambiguous. It's not that you can't have female characters, but it will be uncomfortable if they are too ambiguous! Make it like a harem, either open it or don't write it too ambiguously

The characters are written very realistically, and the description of the widow is also the reaction that normal people would encounter. However, if you spend a lot of time writing these things, you will face an embarrassing problem. If the protagonist accepts this widow, it will offend some readers. At that time, if they report it, they will definitely report it, and the heroine's father has a strong background. Not accepting the Widow will also offend some readers, because the interaction between the Widow and the protagonist seems to have a follow-up. Neither end is flattering. (Obviously, maybe it's because I don't like this kind of plot very much. The author shouldn't blame me.)

The protagonist is too rubbish, selfish, and stingy. It's obvious that the author is just a wretched man from the countryside. Isn't it difficult for you to forcefully write it?

The author simply made the heroine Chen Erni, and the villains one after another were disgusting to watch.

Who did you write it like this for? ? ? Compensate, you spent more than 6,000 starting coins, spit it out, no matter how much percentage you took, I only want what I spent, this is the quality, do you want anyone to continue watching?

This is a great virtue, so write it down well to your parents.

It says it's okay at the front, but disgusting at the back. I don't know what kind of industry it is. You're innocent at the front and have a harem at the back. You just keep them outside and bring people in? Waste time waste money

Did he find a pig boy to fuck his sister in the future?

What you wrote about Zhang Xiaopang is really poisonous. Earlier, it was said that Zhang Xiaopang passed the exam by himself and met the protagonist's sister in Beijing. Now the plot has been changed.

Is it an illusion? Why does the protagonist's speech become so authentic as soon as he enters the capital?

After I wrote the title of this book, there was no outline at all. I just wrote wherever I thought. Are there too many trivial matters?

Please sort it out. I want to read everything.

Someone actually rewards monthly tickets! There are actually 47 votes left. It is indeed a potential, a rising firefly! Qidian is glorious because of you, and proud of you! Write well and work hard so that you will not stop until the earth is destroyed.

The author doesn't write anymore. If someone kicks me, I'll read it again. This book will be discarded for now.

How should I put it, the early stage was generally good, but I gave up after I went to Xiangjiang and slept with that star. I also read other books that were okay, but your book gave people a bad feeling. There are a few points. First, how did Zhang Xiaopang arrange it? Second, after sleeping with a female star in Hong Kong, you are still thinking about your twin sisters. Widow Pan, your husband still has a chance to take a step forward. Are you not afraid of being found out? How will you deal with it then? The plot arrangement is so poor that it can only be moved off the bookshelf. The initial expenditure should be regarded as a reward. Don't be too little, you are only worth so much.

I read Chapter 335 in one go, and I really couldn't stand it anymore. I took the industrial layout for granted, breaking off the corns one by one and throwing them away, and it only started at the beginning without going any further. The description of daily life was quite good at first, but later I found out that female stars were being promoted in Hong Kong? Do you have an outline? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Write wherever you think of it? ? ? ? Abandoned

The book is good, update quickly

After reading dozens of chapters, it's too watery. It's like a dog meat account. I'm pumping water into it.

This is written in running water, are you trying to catch up with the schedule?