Monkey King in the Zhongzhou Team

It's over, I've been feeding you to death again, and I'm adding another to the poisonous milk list. Why is it that the more I like the book review, the easier it is to stop updating it?

Why do authors always like to release poison as soon as it is released? This plot of Chu Xuan is completely poisonous. In order to show how smart he is, he arranged a plot that almost killed the entire team. At the same time, the character of the protagonist who was finally established with a clear mind and decisive actions was also destroyed. The protagonist was led by the nose throughout the whole incident. What is the solution to the final incident? It's the protagonist's on-the-spot breakthrough, a deus ex machina. What about the punishment for Chu Xuan? Pick it up high and put it down gently. I engraved a thought stamp on him, and the content was actually about loving life. Did you mean to continue to make him an uncontrollable factor? The previous writing is really good. Whether it is the entry point into the world of dragons, the way the protagonist is destined to be dealt with, or the bond cultivation of F4, it is all very well written. The better the writing is in the front, the worse Chu Xuan will be in the back. Didn't the author realize it himself? The character you most want to portray now is not the protagonist, but Chu Xuan. It's okay that you love the original character Chu Xuan very much, but if you love the book so much that he takes over the main role, you are ruining your own achievements.

For the skills of the protagonist, can you refer to the Sun Wukong from Dream Journey to the West? That Sun Wukong should be the strongest among all the Sun Wukong settings.

Which monkey does the protagonist inherit the luck of, the High Saint Monkey, or the strongest Sun An in the ultimate game?

What is the portal at the beginning? Doesn't the main god always send you in to get a vegetable cover to cover you? Do you act directly at the beginning of the plot? The portal only has the light beam of the main god's space 😰

Without Chu Xuan, it wouldn't be possible to write, right? You are the author, you are the greatest

Chu Xuan almost killed the entire team, so he just got beaten? You said that he is needed in team battles. If the reward points are not rich now, then they will definitely be enough after the team battle. Then give him a team battle assessment time. After the team battle, if more than 60% of the teammates think he can survive, let him live. There is a price to pay for living, either handing over the proceeds from the entire team battle as team funds, or producing a total of B-level items equal to the number of people he killed (although it is the same as what he said and played, just one Green Goblin skateboard is enough for each person to rub it)

Isn't it the author who has to be a monkey and not a human being? Especially when the main god's space is still based on human supremacy...

The writing is okay, and it can be read as an original text, but if you read it through unlimited streaming, the pace is slow and a bit headline-grabbing. Wearing the infinite skin, holding the Great Sage as the title. But it has more than 80,000 words, and it is neither infinite nor a great sage. There are several secondary settings that conflict with Infinite, and the protagonist now has a name that is somewhat related to the Great Sage.

How about changing the author's introduction. Instead of saying it is an Infinite Horror fanfic with many private settings, it is better to just say that it is "similar to Infinite Horror, with some Original Ancestor characters". This is much better than changing the main god, changing the exchange, and changing the dungeon, and saying it is an Infinite Horror fanfic. It is equivalent to readers looking at the introduction as saying that it is Infinite Horror. Horror fan, but readers only know after reading the article that this is not an infinite horror fan, because many of the articles are portraying non-original infinites. For example, the exchange is "non-mutated" and directly transforms into non-humans. The main god is so targeted that it does not prompt the death to come, and the dungeon does not matter whether it is Iwo Jima or a dragon. The main thing is that Zhan Lan is dead and a certain person has just come back to life to distance himself from the Yuanzu. The armor is folded, but the main text can be seen to be crooked.

Author, please explain why killing people strengthens the body. What, is this a game?

Monkey King's combat power is really not as good as Sun Wukong in Dragon Ball. After all, the imagination of the ancients was just like that

Huang Fengling's volume makes my brain hurt when I read it. The author owes you for writing that the main character is a monkey with enhanced strength. You don't understand the plot of this black myth at all, as if it's cloudy. Let's not talk about the wrong location of Sihari and Huang Fengling. Even Tiger Pioneer can be 60 years old. This is a ridiculous bug.

Why not exchange weapons and hit people with your fists?

Other changes don't matter, but try not to change the characters of Zheng Zha and Chu Xuan. Their character traits are very interesting in the original work.

I think it's well written, but why are there so few comments?

There are a few minor flaws, but it's pretty good. As long as you can accept part of the second hypothesis, it won't be a big problem if you can justify it. The protagonist can overlay the hymn in the later stage. Of course, it depends on the author. I won't teach you how to do it.

To be honest, I haven't read any of the books in your introduction. 😅