Immortal Altar God Lord

Why is this author still at level one after writing seven books?

Open an altar to confer talismans, gather incense in the countryside, and share the altar on the Internet

So at this stage, does the protagonist want to be a beard? Now I have a few questions: What is the realm of the First Grandma? How much combat power can it exert? Will there be sacrifices later? What is the full name of the second evil glutton? What is the so-called concentrated liquefaction state? What level are the immortals in the 3800th century at? I basically know nothing about the lower limit of the protagonist, and using the corpse exorcism sect is too blunt. The news of the corpse exorcism sect gathering can be brought by the prime minister, and then exploited instead of being blind.

If I were to write up to 50 chapters, the barrel of the gun would have to be inserted into his throat. It's so frustrating to watch. I am neither strict nor stubborn. Always spinning around there, unable to catch the "refreshing point" What kind of plane are you doing!

Let me give you an opinion, you should either use the 24-hour clocking method, or else use the 12-hour clocking method. It's too ridiculous for you to put brackets on it.

I would like to make a suggestion. It is too slow. It has more than 400,000 words. The pig's trotters do not even have one or nine Dharma signs. According to the setting, there are still nine levels to break through. I asked the author if he planned to write more than 400,000 for each level? And how many times has the two-person robbery routine been repeated since it just started? Personally, I think each stage should be different, so that it is interesting.

That's right, let's not talk about fictitious things like Wan Ding. If you write well and keep it up, it is still possible to achieve the results of "The Legend of the Knife". Moreover, I think your story of the rise of the prince in trouble is more interesting.

I read the first few chapters and thought it was okay. Now that I have read more than 50 chapters, I have some thoughts. I remember the routine more than ten years ago. The protagonist was hunted down all the way, and then killed the younger ones and the older ones. It just kept snowballing like this. When you are in a crisis, you have to do things to get something out of the fire. Later, it is said that you have to do things to strengthen yourself and escape. I understand this is a plot design, but as a reader, I personally don't like this routine. Long Aotian is in the air every second, and he is suppressed and has a narrow escape from death. Most readers are not convinced by these two extremes. This kind of routine is depressing and unpleasant, so most of the protagonists in novels now either join a big force or become an outsider. Take the middle road, neither Long Aotian has a great tailwind nor Daojiandan Dancing has a great headwind. In the first few chapters, there is also the blood-sucking evil spirit and the evil god stealing incense. I don't know what the design will be in the future, but it is a bit misleading to take the evil route. Actually, the author's details are pretty good, but the plot design is not to my liking.

The writing is quite good. I am following the updates every day. When will it break out? Will it be released?

At least I've finished writing it. I can't read it.

Given the author's level, the comment section shouldn't be so quiet.

A new monthly pass arrived today. I'll give it to you first.

It feels like a combination of Swordsman and Twilight. It seems pretty good so far. Come on.

The writing is very good, the world view is grand, and there are many directions for further writing. It's a pity that the author can't stick to it.

Author There is a store next door that has updated 20 chapters. There will be five chapters updated daily. It's up to you.

Come on, come on

Booked, + monthly pass

I feel that the writing is good, and I have worked hard on the updates. The problem is still the rhythm, and there is no clear hook. You can go and watch Demon Slaying, a mindless novel with a cliched plot, but the rhythm is really great, each hook is followed by another, and you can't stop watching it.

The writing is good, but I feel that in front of the mage, apart from providing faith and being made into casting materials, the warrior seems to have no effect at all. It is normal for those who can't do as much as the master, but they still have to be able to jump twice. I hope to strengthen the warrior in the future, or the power system is too unbalanced