Lu Mingfei: This Panel Is Too Fake!

The idea is very good, and the writing is very touching. After all, the protagonist in the original work brought his own tragedy. Look at Kamijou-kun next door.

No, why did someone wash those two births? It's not enough for a vampire family to suck blood, but they also break bones to suck out marrow. Just by calling them twice, you were cleared?        20（），，，，，20？ A group of vampires think about Concubine Ming every day if she gets out and get the child support card. Don't tell me what she said about all the alimony and not spending it arbitrarily. It must be that all the money has been spent and there is no money left inside, so they kicked the person out without paying alimony. Isn't it just that the money has run out?         ，，？ Will you die if you wait too long to pick up more people? Let a second grader walk home without even an umbrella (although it doesn't matter if he has one or not). Can this thing be washed?          ，chusheng，， Then in order to save some money, he asked Lu Mingfei to work for him. All the senior brothers fell into silence.          ，，          （），， I went to Lu Hui's private restaurant. The fat guy looked at Hui's thighs. Are you worthy of being as fat as a square? That CS aunt still thought that such a young lady would be the best match for a fat boy. I match you. Unexpectedly, the leader noticed the vampire family at a glance and stopped talking about the "marriage". Then the clown acted like a bitch and rolled around on the spot, oh no, he was a bitch in the first place. Concubine Ming has been trying to cooperate with her to reduce her sense of presence. She poured chili powder on it with one hand and scolded Concubine Ming for being deliberately against her.             ，，， She still wanted to be silly, but Hui kindly settled the bill and passed it on to her own house. She gave him some money that she couldn't even pay for the meal, and she said she was kind. It made her laugh so hard. Not to mention Long Si's dungeon and experience that replaced his senior brother, the two css still didn't even give them a good look like sb, and any random person could fool them. A person has been admitted to a mental hospital without even thinking of making a phone call.

When Dragons 1 first came out, it was called the Chinese version of Harry Potter. It was obvious that Lu Mingfei's uncle and aunt's family were the rival Dursleys. The difference is that with the gradual increase of later patches, the characters of the uncle, aunt and family and the Dursley family have undergone earth-shaking changes. The biggest difference here is that Lu Mingfei's parents are alive, while Harry Potter's parents are dead. So although they were also treated harshly, beaten or scolded, their images were as follows. The Dursleys: The younger sister and brother-in-law came to the house and used magic to do something very excessive to them (the specifics were not stated, only the extent to which James later regretted it and wanted to go to them to apologize). He also knew that his sister-in-law had been murdered. Without any fees, they adopted Harry. Although they beat and scolded Harry and let him live in a cupboard, they also gave him adequate food, clothing, housing and transportation. He went to the same school as his own son, and there was no difference in education. Uncle and Aunt Lu's family: I felt that Lu's father and mother were living abroad, and they used Lu Mingfei's child support to live and drink, and provided Lu Mingfei with minimum living security. After Lu Mingfei was bullied at school and fought back, he pressed his head and asked him to apologize. The family was also beaten and scolded, and all the money that should belong to Lu Mingfei was spent on his own family. An ordinary family would be able to let their son get the title of "Prince Ze" in an aristocratic school, but Lu Mingfei was so depressed that he had to find someone to pay for the Internet fee in an Internet cafe.

I'd like to give you some advice. It's completely feasible not to go to Kassel. Why do many authors write well about Shilan Middle School, but start to fall apart as soon as they arrive in Kassel? Because middle school life is grounded and immersive, and life in Kassel is fake and empty. Moreover, none of the exciting chapters of the original novel are set in Kassel, and the three beauties of Shilan and a group of dragons such as Zhao Menghua are used to set off the protagonist. Sets are also very useful, but the characters in Cassel are very important, so my suggestion is to let Lu Mingfei show extraordinary power and be discovered by Angers, but he does not want to go abroad because he has nostalgia in China, so Angers is forced to open a Sino-foreign joint venture in China. This will bring all the mixed-race characters to China, while retaining the high school characters and the sense of domestic substitution to the greatest extent.

"The deal is done, you take 1/4 of the table." The player whispered. "Are you going to exchange for the resurrection of this kind-hearted Mita? I have already said that I can't do this. I can only change the future, and I can't do anything about the past." 360 Scratched his head. "Then change the future and help me kill that bug. 360, Use that, I want the fusion of the bird wallpaper." The player turned around and looked into 360's eyes. He was so calm, but there seemed to be a lion about to jump out of his eyes. "A little bird wallpaper can't kill the evil Mita. Mita has already got your cassette, which is more than double the previous one?'' 360 Shrugged. "It's okay, you do your best, and leave the rest to me. The player looked at the head, "That person said she bet on me to win, so she gave her life to me, then I... Also bet on myself to win." "Awesome! These are my users! What are evil bugs? You are the one who is qualified to roar the world. Monster! When you roar, the graphics card and hard disk can only kneel down!" 360 Opened his arms and hugged him fiercely, "Hot-Blooded Jianghu Yimeng Legendary Skeleton Fighting Gold Server, 100% fusion of the entire screen..." The next moment, Wang Congtian descended with anger and ferocity!

I feel that there is no need to save Chu Tianjiao, such an abstract guy. Especially since Chu Tianjiao was originally the one who monitored Lu Mingfei, Lu Mingfei was like a sheep trying to save a wolf that wanted his own flesh. It was too difficult to catch him.

It's too childish, buddy, why do you have to limit the age to junior high school? At first, I thought that this age range was just excessive. I didn't expect that you really planned to write about junior high school love and the childish values. I'm really convinced. Adults are not hypocritical, they have just become mature. I am only twenty years old, but I can't stand this kind of kindergarten romantic comedy for junior high school students.

If we are going to fight each other, I might as well post a post after writing so much My comment may have been swallowed because I scolded him, but you didn't see it. Let me say it again, sentences without swear words should not be swallowed. First, the author personally admitted that Harry's aunt loved him, unless you say JK Rowling said it. jk Rowling revised it and published it, and the first version is the complete version Dragons is a serialized novel and has been revised countless times. I have said that inconsistency is a common problem in serialized online novels Secondly, your analogy of treatment under different circumstances is completely unreasonable. Let's talk about Harry's basic situation first: both his parents are dead, and the inheritance is either in his father's old house or in the Elf Bank. The extra story written by JK Rowling clearly stated that Dumbledore sent Harry there and wrote a letter. The general meaning is that Harry's parents were killed in a magical battle. It is dangerous to adopt Harry, but I want you to adopt him to avoid being discovered by the big devil and his men. Aunt Harry adopted him... And before that, you have to understand one thing. Harry's father is not a good person. Even if there are changes later, it cannot change the fact that he is a bully and has a bad personality. Why should I say this? Because when Harry's parents first got married, Dursley, who was Harry's aunt's husband, didn't know about magic. He thought Harry's father was a vagrant, so he introduced Harry's father to a serious job. Harry's father tortured Dursley, and it was miserable. After ordinary people were tortured, do you think Dursley would have a good impression of Harry and his wife? In other words, the Dursleys could not raise Harry at all and risk death to raise a child just to bully him when he grows up? ? ? We raised Harry because we are relatives, and we couldn't bear to see the orphans without their parents so miserable. We treated Harry poorly because he had an extra mouth for no reason, plus we were resentful of Harry's father. Isn't that enough? Speaking of the truth, I saw it on both sides of the screenshot. In 2000, the BMW cost hundreds of thousands, the aristocratic school, the money to lose playing cards, and the child being called the prince were all thanks to that money. You said that with BMW money, you would spend 100,000 to rent a two-bedroom apartment, and spend the remaining two to three hundred thousand to hire a nanny, and change it once a year to avoid being cheated. Lu Mingfei did not say that he lived a flamboyant and confident life, but he would never become so bad with money in his hands. Also, you have to know that Jiang Nan did not memorize or give a guarantee for the tasks in the book, but JK Rowling did speak out. In many interviews, she clearly stated that Aunt Harry loved him. Third, just talking about the Dragon Clan, Long Yi and Long San, Long Yi all said that he was blessed with the money, and Long San said that family ties are important. If you love him so much, why should you use his money? It's natural. You can use part of it. After all, you are borrowing it, but it doesn't seem to be a little bit. When you say Aunt Lu Mingfei is nice, you mean that Long Yi pressed his head and asked Lu Mingfei to apologize when something happened. Regardless of the reason, you mean that he wanted to introduce Eri to his cube-shaped son. Don't you think Long Yi has no foreshadowing, and Long San suddenly starts talking about how the family relationship is extremely broken? Isn't this a common problem in Internet literature? Fourth, just talking about Harry, why do I have to talk so much about Harry's background? If you have read the original work, you will find that Harry's bullying basically comes from Dursley and his cousin. Dursley has a grudge against Harry's father, and Harry's cousin follows suit. Although it is not good to bully others, to a certain extent, it is reasonable and the logic can be scrutinized. Fifth, that is, summary. Their basic situations are different. I admit that you said that Lu Mingfei's conditions are better than Harry's. Because they are not from the same country or generation background, and only in terms of material, Lu Mingfei is definitely better. But I have a question, If, I just say if. Harry didn't bring a penny and was in danger of death, but Harry's aunt still took him in (Dursley, who already knew magic at that time, didn't refuse) If he brought a large sum of money, Harry's mother said, "I'm on a business trip in the wizarding world. Sister, my son is coming to your house. If he doesn't want to learn that shitty magic, just let him go to school (Harry The aunt wanted to learn magic, but she had no talent... It was mentioned in the original book, but I am too lazy to write down the details) As for Lu Mingfei, his parents were killed (his parents also tortured Lu Mingfei's uncle and aunt), and someone wrote a letter saying that his parents were killed. As for the murderer, he may be dead, but he still has his subordinates. If you say he was caught, it must be true. If he hasn't been caught, you say he was shot. , I can't tell you secrets, but you definitely don't have the money to adopt Lu Mingfei, and his parents' enemies may also come to kill you, but in any case, you are relatives, why don't you adopt him? Okay, 1,400 words of explanation, if you still don't understand, I can only say. It is useless to say more. Reply to me later, after reading this.

If you don't listen to the old man's words, you will suffer the consequences. The author said that your writing is childish and you don't listen. Now you are going to be a eunuch.

Author, you are not going to let Lu Mingfei go to Kassel to be a dog, you don't want that kind of thing

I thought you were in junior high school. I just read the book reviews and realized that you really wrote about junior high school Who will die if you don't die?

Just like this, I still hate writing everyday articles in a fantasy worldview. I really like this. 🤓🤓🤓

So we are taking the Su Xiaoqiang route? 😏

One group is the irritable old man who is the mainstream of the starting point. He mainly has a correct outlook on life, has a bad temper, and "explodes" any injustice on the road. Most of the books in this group are about the irritable old man who read Dragon Clan and the Three Views Exploded, and wrote the Three Views in his own hand The first group is the loser turtle school's "Wen Bu Chu Qing Qing", which focuses on an original work of empathy, which is particularly depressing, and the three views are equally awkward. The protagonist replaced Lu Mingfei, but he still looked dead throughout the whole process. If the protagonist is an original character, he will act as a nanny for the protagonist group throughout the entire plot. There is no intermediate state. Really I have read dozens of fanfics. The author's mental state is so fragmented. If any of you have seen a good quality one, please give me some advice.

Now I have read Chapter 12. The advantage is that it is bland and non-toxic, but the disadvantage is that it is too bland. These 12 chapters are nothing if not harsh, but the free chapters are not picky. You didn't really put forward what you wanted to present. In these 12 chapters, it was fun to drag the little goddess away, but it was not fun enough. Basically, someone confessed to the little goddess, and then they misunderstood that the little goddess was blocked and took her away in a surprise attack. Moreover, the follow-up whitewashing (I did not say that the logic of whitewashing this person was wrong), but the follow-up excitement was lost. Secondly, whether Lu fell in love with Xiao Tiannu, or Xiao Tiannu fell in love with Lu, these sections were too blunt. You can totally write that when Lu was bullied in junior high school, Xiaotiannu was outside the door and couldn't stand Lu's uncle and aunt, and asked the driver to investigate and mess with them. This is completely reasonable (this can be written as an extra chapter). Secondly, I read a g-rated author who wrote it and revised the reference. "It was also Xiaotiannu who was entangled, and then knocked the bricks. What is important is that Xiaotiannu gave Lu a candy, and Lu was reluctant to eat it. Then Lu approached Xiaotiannu, and the man's father The mother wanted to flatter Su's father, and he saw that the little goddess was good-looking, and Lu was close to the little goddess, so she asked people to clear the road. Then Lu was beaten, and the candy was taken away and trampled to pieces. Then he wrote Lu's heartfelt words, punched it away, picked up the candy and ate it with sand, and then said that I don't have much, but whoever robs me will die and will be beaten to death. " (The above is a personal suggestion, it doesn't matter whether I adopt it or not.) The content of your 12 chapters is too discouraging. Whether the title has been revised or not, readers don't know when the content will reach its climax. No one will read it after repeated readings. (I'll take a look at it later and make an evaluation)

I looked around and found that no one seemed to have posted about Shen Nong Tasting Poison, so I will post one. The progress we can see so far is the end of the first volume of v plus a dozen or so chapters. Except for some conflicts with some settings and logical flaws in the original work (the physical book version I read is from one to four), there is basically no big problem. The creation of the Eight Sheqi Family, the White King's bloodline, and Ange made me frown a little, but the daily love life in it made up for this very well. The author also mentioned that he mainly wanted to develop into a sweet love story. It is worth reading for those who want sweets and pure love.

The more I read, the more I feel like the melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya. Don't write a fanfic. Write a youth love story about a middle-aged boy with super powers, and you don't have to pay fan tax to Jiangnan.

I support Su Xiaoqiang's single heroine, she's quite cute.

The writing style is a bit immature and not very reasonable.

I haven't read much yet. When I scrolled back, your update frequency made me afraid to follow.

In terms of sweetness, I feel it is slightly sweet, but I feel that the author wants to write a love story, but cannot express the feeling. And for dragon fanfics, I feel that except for the ability settings, each character has lost his original flavor.