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First of all, it's too watery. Maybe the author doesn't think so, but Chapter 26 hasn't entered the professional team yet, so it's a bit slow for me. Then, can you get a lot of negative fans by playing on the ladder? No point at all. Since the author relies on the title of the book to attract readers, he should be careful about the title. There is also the experience card in Chapter 26, which is a huge poisonous point. What age is it? Don't write an experience card 😡 Any awesome operation is based on ability, rather than an epiphany of invincibility. You were just blinded, and then you blinded others in the blink of an eye? Maybe you, the author, think it's cool, but I just think it's poisonous. The other status cards like Brave/Fiery and so on are not that poisonous In addition, it's normal for Pig's Knuckle, a perennial C+ kid, to have an epiphany that is "unquestionable" 😥 Finally, I would like to provide the author with an idea. Pig's Knuckle can be written after the Green Dragon Donk. If you lose, it will be lost, and the black fans will increase. Then add the Weibo King character to accurately point out the topic. It's no problem to win a few more S-class championships. Reality is a template. After all, which top player will not go to jail! Then the major overturns, the protagonist changes teams, wins the major, etc. It depends on how you write it, the author But no matter how you write it, you must click on the topic! 😐
To be honest, don't write too much space to explain specifically about plug-ins. It's very procrastinating and a waste of time. I also saw another book about csgo that wrote about the influence of plug-ins. I wrote more than 50 pictures and it was self-certified and a real SB in an Internet cafe competition. After more than 50 pictures, I kept playing the piano and saying I loved it. I was really convinced by that b 😅 I hope the author will seriously consider the next content.
I don't want to read the plug-in when I see the self-certification. It's just disgusting. The update is too slow, making readers sick along with it. There's no climax yet.
Briefly describe the current situation
This book was published yesterday to 30,000 words, and a kind-hearted editor asked me to sign it. After signing the contract, I naturally had to write it well. This is the first book I signed as a newcomer. No matter how bad the results are, at least it will have an ending. After I wrote the book, I realized that it is not easy to write even a simple text. I conceived in my head what I thought was a very exciting fragment, but the effect of expressing it in words is not satisfactory. I can only say that I need to continue to practice my writing, otherwise I will really fall into love. If you have any suggestions in the later period, feel free to give them. Mengxin's main thing is to listen to advice. If you want to keep writing in the future, it is important to collect opinions from everyone and know what everyone wants to read. At least in the next book, it will be greatly improved and many pitfalls will be avoided. Currently, I have also read the same type of CSGO literature. I don't know what everyone thinks about anchor memes. I have read many books about interacting with Masisi, Danking, and playing with machines. The results have been good. It's just that I don't expect this book to cover a lot of live broadcasting. In addition, the setting is a bit abstract, and it feels weird to interact with the anchor too much. Therefore, the focus will be on polishing the game and the stories that happened with professional players, and I will try my best to write exciting points. Regarding updates, because I am a part-time writer, I don't have many manuscripts saved. I try to keep about 5,000 daily updates. I will write more during holidays. If there is no update on any day, it is either stuck or dead. Kawen will notify you in advance. If you die, there is nothing you can do.
Looks good, please update more, please update more!
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