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The pace is too fast, and there is basically no logic. The people around me are too mentally retarded. It basically feels like the protagonist does whatever he says.

It doesn't feel right, it's too superficial, it's like the people around you are all NPCs acting with the protagonist.

There's nothing to say, it's a simple piece of writing. The author's logic is neither smooth nor self-consistent. His expressions are too plain and a bit retarded. His writing style is too strong for a middle school student.

There is no problem with the development direction of the novel, but the pace is too fast. This should be a problem with the author's writing skills. The daily writing of couples is not exciting enough, and there are no interesting idioms. It is a bit too procedural, and it is difficult to make readers smile knowingly after seeing the plot.

Don't fall in love. The protagonists are all capital tycoons. I don't need to say more about the market value of Miha Gaming's ByteDance in a few years. The protagonist's net worth is in the top dozen on the rich list. It's no problem. That's all. What can Li Qin bring to the protagonist? Let's fall in love with him.

Meng Ziyi arranged to go to Kazakhstan, and Wang Churan and Bai Mengyan also arranged to go to Kazakhstan.

If you have the ability to write good scripts, why would you have to participate in "The Legend of Ancient Swords"?

Li Xian's roommates are almost in a group. It's the beginning of the parents' sacrifice. Don't you have any ideas of your own? Just make it up.

Returning Xinbao and choosing a concubine were all screwed up

90 Flowers, 95 flowers, 00 flowers, all the little flowers are written on it. All the big sisters and little sisters are arranged on it. For example, Qin Lan, Zhang Xinyu, Bai Bing, Chen Shu, Chen Xiaojun, Cheng Xiao, Liu Yan, Xu Dongdong and other similar big sisters are all arranged on it.

The pace is too fast and there is no freshness. Let's rewrite it.

This book only gets updated a month ago

It's a bit similar to Huayu's "As You Want"

Gu Du invests in ByteDance and MiHoYo

I like it, it has a single heroine, Li Qin. I hope it will be updated more. This is the third time I have read it. There are not many novels with a single heroine, Li Qin.