I Will Become a New Saint in the Age of the End of Law

The author really wanted to have a plot with a female protagonist, but as you can see, the author's descriptions of the female protagonist were unsatisfactory every time. Fortunately, the author stopped early and urgently shut down the production. It does not affect the perception of the full text. Personally, I feel that if the description is not good, it is better to do it alone, wait until you are sure, and practice on your own. Everyone is happy. Otherwise, if you think about it, the descriptions at the beginning are a cliched start, and the character is not very likable. If the plot continues, it will be a poisonous part.

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Looking at the introduction, why do all the gods in your book have special skills? Hasta Cthugha Cthulhu Nyarlathotep. Each has his or her own unique skills

Well, you can be resurrected so you become a dead soldier? It's not good to break into some dungeon by yourself. You have to be a dog for others. . . .

Wuyu created a spiritual root in real life, gave it away to others for nothing, and created demons, which is illogical. If you have the ability, start a sect.

I feel like the guy who listens to Feng Xue is annoying to death. He is still a chatterbox. Don't you feel that others are annoying him?

Maybe there's something wrong with the title of the book, and I don't have much desire to read it. Maybe a different title would be better? Personal opinion

However, there are too many female characters, the writing style is a bit poor, and the title of the book makes me want to point it out. But apart from these three points, it is a rare good book.

The overall story line is relatively confusing, the main line is not clear, and the protagonist's character is vague. These are all problems for newbies, and nothing else. The only problem is don't write female characters. New writers try not to write or write less female characters. If they don't write well, the look and feel will be bad. There aren't many veteran writers who write good ones, so try not to write them.

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After reading it, the setting is quite interesting.

Using one's own sexual fire as the core, using the Heavenly Immortal Lotus as the lamp, and using the body of an immortal god as the seat, cast a lotus magic lamp, and refine it into a natal magic weapon. It can not only protect the soul, but also emit the natural light. When the divine light shines, all evils can be warded off. The higher the level of sexual power cultivation, the greater the power.

The battle is not described. The plot has no tension. The settings are not clearly explained.

I can only say that what you wrote is good, but I can't say more. I have reviewed several novels now, and I just said that the writing is unreasonable, brainless, etc., And I don't criticize people. I can only say good things. Alas, I can't say bad things. I just said that the plot is unreasonable and they were permanently banned. I tried several times, but the result was permanent ban. The current environment reminds me of the political correctness in the United States, and now I am autistic.

As above, the author would like to know more about

Don't write about reality, okay? It's embarrassing if you do. Isn't it better to focus on the game?

At sixty, you start to get the feeling. If you don't do it well, you should be able to write a thousand chapters. Come on.

Now that it's on the shelves, don't you think about adding more chapters?

These chapters written in reality are completely different from those in the game, or is it that the real body has been unknowingly affected?

It's been a bit dull lately, without any tension. I can't feel the excitement, and my combat power is vague. The characteristics of the protagonist are not reflected 🙂