I, Murong Fu of Gusu

Your march is too fast. It is 3,000 kilometers from the north to Dali. In ancient times, the distance was even longer. How could it be so easy to march a 1.5 Million army? From mobilization, assembly, and hurriedly on, it took less than two months to arrive.

In fact, there is no world where it is better to have one or two female protagonists. You can have none, but not more, unless you are already deeply involved with the male protagonist, such as Tianlong's two maids and cousin, otherwise it will be a stallion porn story.

Personally, I feel that if the male protagonist is a thief, he will have a mature woman by his side

Even if you travel through time and become Guo Jing and Huang Rong, you still can't become the heroine

If you want to get good grades, you can't do anything wrong. Duan Zhengchun in "Dragon" has so many lovers, young women and princesses, if he doesn't knock on the corner and get some pornographic things, and cuckold him, it won't be in vain.

In the article, the court of the Northern Song Dynasty was really awesome. Xixia bullied them when they were told to bully them, but they still had to pay a woolen coin.

Not all authors are included, but those who have value are included. For example, Dao Baifeng can help control Dali, Li Qiushui can control Xixia, Kang Min can control the Beggar Gang in some chapters, not to mention the aunt is rich, how can A'Zhu's mother make her an orphan

The plot has been very weak recently, the protagonist is too strong, and he even plays with Huang Rong to have a baby. I am a bit speechless. It feels too boring. I suggest you change the map.

It strengthened the Song court too much, especially at the end of the Northern Song Dynasty. Whether in history or in Jin Yong's novels, the Song Dynasty was always timid. Except for Zhao Da, the coward in history is barely acceptable (this is the throne that only bullied other people's orphans and widowed mothers). The later ones did not unify China and suffered repeated defeats and indemnities. They were all trash. They were not worthy of being compared with the Qin Emperor, Han Wutang Sect, and the later emperors sat at the same table as the emperor. Of all the dynasties in history, only Daqing was more trash than weak and cowardly. As for the cowards in Jin Yong's novels, they are even more rubbish. Hong Qi comes in and out of the palace casually, Tong Lao goes in and out of the Xixia Palace at will, and the coward can't even win Xixia. Don't tell me how high the economy is.

Personally, I would like to write about the swordsmanship in the snow, Swordsman Coming, Wu Geng Ji, God Beheading, Cangyuan Tu, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Perfect World, Covering the Sky, Eternal Life, Tomb of the Gods, etc.