
Douluo: Reborn Davis, Zhuqing, Calm Down
斗罗:重生戴维斯,竹清你冷静
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 928k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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First of all, this guy must have never read the original work.
At most, I have watched the anime version. At this age, this level of strength is not enough. There is no point in competing with Tang San, unless you forcefully suppress Tang San. Although everyone despises Tang San, don't deliberately suppress his talent when writing a fanfic. After all, you have taken away all opportunities, and deliberately suppressing talent, level, and appearance are too ugly. It is boring. It is normal for the fourth ring of ten thousand years to be promoted to second level. Tang San can only be promoted to one level. You will know the reason after reading the original work.
Zhu Zhuyun looks like a village woman, and the protagonist looks exactly like a cliched old city guy.
I just read two chapters. If you don't have a brain, you can still consider reading it. If you are logical, then this book... Well, I understand everything. I can only say that this book is... Average.
6500 Level is not added, are you serious? In the original novel, Yakuza absorbed the crypt magic beads and reached level 42.
What you wrote is not that even Tang 3 fans don't want to read it. The most annoying thing is that they are clearly sworn enemies, and they just won't make a killing move. They are sworn enemies, and don't tell them that they have talents. They keep playing, and keep letting the tiger go back to the mountain. Fortunately, most of the male protagonists in Douluo fanfics are from the Qidian orphanage and have no relatives or friends. Otherwise, with the offline of Tang 3, your relatives and friends will not be neat and tidy, and you will be alone by then. It has to be Yang Jian. He is clearly a mortal enemy. He will kill him directly. Yang Jian is so awesome that he will be killed. You must be very wasteful.
The male protagonist looks like the male protagonist of an urban novel from 10 years ago
I also write Douluo fanfics, let's see what the big guys write! However, Davis is the villain to me! 🤓
The threshold for writing Douluo is too low, so most of them are just practicing.
Chapter 8 is written very clearly: Dai Mubai is 18 years old and level 39. One month ago, Dai Mubai obtained the second soul ring at 12 years old and level 22. Dai Mubai's original work is a 13-year-old soul master. The writing is like shit and the age setting is not good.
The author writes novels as if they are playing. The protagonist creates his own soul skill Aurora Divine Wind Claw based on the actions in the anime "The Adventures of Lolo". He also created a Storm Nebula Break earlier. Is the logic eaten by dogs? Is there anything special about the moves in the anime other than calling them names? If you imitate an action and use it, it becomes a soul skill? Does that mean I can blow up the moon by imitating the Turtle Style Qigong? Stop laughing your ass off.
Use some snacks, Tang San's dark clamor is useful to gods, Guanyin You Tears used the soul power bonus to hurt Qian Renxue, which included the power of the sea god. Black gunpowder can't even penetrate some concrete. The soul power of the soul guide in the fantasy sewer is better than gunpowder. How long do you have to engage in science and technology in fantasy? There is no foundation at all, and the most is a gun! If you can hurt the Soul King, you are worthy of being invincible. Above the Soul Emperor, you have soul power to protect your body, and you can also absorb soul rings to strengthen your physical body! Even Titled Douluo can be hurt, so he laughed.
The novel has been published on Daily Guide
I could barely read it before, but at level 60, I just couldn't understand the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger that is over 50,000 years old.
What a pity, now that he is an emperor, he only has three concubines.
The writing is like shit. Even though you have traveled through time, a soul bone that is so easy to explode when applied externally will not be as valuable as a 100,000-year-old soul bone.
I don't want to see firearms
Being too shameless is too powerful and does too much harm to the world.
Another "god" book
Novels that take the technological route in the world of fantasy, magic, and immortals are basically out of date. Generally speaking, novels are about technology transforming into immortality. If you do the opposite, you still won't be able to grasp the key. The emotional logic and thinking logic are also very confusing. It belongs to intermittent mental illness and treats readers as mentally ill. Come, let me take a photo for you
Firearms and the like are at most mass-produced low-level concealed weapons. Even if there are explosives that can blow up tanks, they are already top-notch before the technological content is improved. However, even if a tank is a high-level soul master, it can launch counterattacks. The real threat to soul masters in Douluo is the soul guide. There are also antimatter and the like behind high technology, but the protagonist will definitely not have that ability to develop.
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Does having a female protagonist in Soul Transmutation count as a self-love or not?
It was basically impossible to torture Tang San in the Killing City! You have to ask Tang Ritian about his sledgehammer!
I also write fan fiction, but it is semi-created, and I want to enrich the characters in the original work who have very few pictures. Can you come and see mine? I'm not afraid of being scolded.
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Qian Renxue
Why not write another book about Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex?
It's so funny. He's the eldest prince in a fantasy world and he's still making gunpowder. In the superconducting world, it's just a death penalty that's only effective for ordinary people. If this article says it's effective for soul masters, then what else are you looking at? It's an invincible finale. What a brainless author.
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