Simultaneous Time Travel: Becoming a Superstar in All Worlds from Su Qing

It's so awesome that I couldn't write it out within three chapters. I'll write it after releasing 27 chapters. You are also a talent.

This author is simply stubborn. He was so angry with the previous book that he was pissed off again and again with this one. Why, you can't write a book without pimping, right? I'm not even going to talk about the clever girl. Now that I've written a harem story, popular characters like Rem and Emilia can be given to the original male protagonist. Let's not forget about these. What's even more bizarre is, what has the protagonist been doing all this time from scratch? Paving the way for Natsuki Subaru? I laughed out loud. It was obvious that I could just push the girl over to cheat. If I couldn't get Echidna's support or get Beatrice, I chose the most anthropomorphic way of playing. Who are you going to show off such a bitter feud for? ? What's funny is that there are so many chapters that accomplish nothing, just follow the original plot, and treat the readers like monkeys. The more I talk about it, the angrier I get, and I directly block the author. You'd better not let me see your next book!

There is a real sense of fragmentation. Either start writing a time-traveling stream or not write it at all. The protagonist Suqing is well established and suddenly switch to another protagonist. This is a joke to me. If the spirit is separated, it is better to go to the Bankai-stream. The protagonist can travel to other worlds.

I think it's better not to cross-travel together. The same-travel flow will lead to a dead end. Now that Su Qing has written it very well, just arrange to get a time-traveling artifact and just use it as a normal time-traveling flow.

Currently 118, Su Qing only has 36 chapters, accounting for less than 30%. And Zhan Chi has 37 chapters, which is longer than Su Qing. Currently, the author is still digging holes and starting from scratch. It is visually estimated that Su Qing cannot be written before 150 chapters. This is purely a title fraud. Moreover, the author did not listen to the advice and pretended to be dead in the comment section, completely immersed in developing his own world and unable to extricate himself. The poor performance of this book is really entirely the author's fault.

The first one was Tongchuan Sharing, which was released after more than 20 pictures. Suqin's writing was obviously so good, but you, the golden finger, came so late and switched to other perspectives not long after. How strong is this sense of fragmentation? Do you know the author? And Demon Slayer, because Demon Slayer doesn't have any plot, you just make the protagonist of Demon Slayer disappear. This standard is to dig a hole but not fill it, leaving a hole. I can only say that the writing style is pretty good, but the writing ideas are a mess.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I feel like I should give up the book. I feel that this book is very strange and the rhythm is wrong. As a time-travel novel, there is no so-called main world and no focus. The harem is not a climate, the emotional scenes are not delicate enough, and the world of Suqing becomes the world. Zhanchi World is the first world to be cleared, and it is completed in about 40 chapters. , It's a bit useless, Esdeath is more or less a tool, the world view of the clever girl is okay, it feels like I haven't watched it since I watched it, the gimmick of hugging Reinhardt's thigh is not written, the most criticized daily world is the civil servant, a little out of place, the Demon Slayer World mentioned from the beginning can not find this person.

How many chapters are you traveling through at the same time? ? ? No matter how you look at it, he is an unlucky guy who has no golden fingers and no Suqing to choose to travel through time.

What kind of things are there in the plot of the doppelgänger manga written by the author... Your own doppelgänger's personality will be quite different. This is all written as another person. Look at Duke and Lao Liao's doppelganger's personality. There is not much difference.

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Isn't this protagonist pretentious enough? He can only say one sentence when he opens his mouth. They can do it. Why don't they just sew up his mouth and put a repeater on his head?

Trash doesn't mind reading about the main character's strength for more than a hundred chapters. I've never seen it before. I haven't seen it when Demon Slayer talks about turning into ghosts. The one written in Zero is also a piece of shit. First of all, the heroine is too weak. It's Felt, and it's not Felt. Damn it. Emilia and Rem just fucking let them go. From Zero, the protagonist can be said to be an NPC. They say it's to intercept profits, but her mother, Moby Dick, is about the Sword Master's sword. As soon as the protagonist of the plot can be said that there is no plot problem between watching the original work and watching this.

There are too many stories about everyday life, and it is a completely ordinary day-to-day life. The protagonist keeps saying "They can do it too" to everyone they meet. If you say it once or twice, it is to emphasize the protagonist's inferiority complex. If you say it over and over again, it is just to show off. Of course, being too pretentious is a minor problem. The biggest problem is that there are too many daily stories that are completely devoid of demons. When I first started reading, I was still wondering if supernatural powers would pop up later, and the protagonist cried with joy. However, it turned out to be just ordinary and bland daily stories. Writing daily articles is fine, but in front of you, Su Qing and Zhan Chi suddenly banned their supernatural abilities, and they banned them all the way to the shelves. Isn't this wearing down the readers' patience?

Is this time traveling at the same time?🤔

Darkness is good. She has a good physique and a good figure. She is also an aristocrat.

It feels more like a Suqing fan novel that suddenly changed its outline, forcibly added a world setting, and then changed the title to attract readers. The sense of fragmentation is too severe.

It's a pity that I don't even watch the same dog.

Tongchuan Liu is not explained at the beginning, but is explained after more than 20 chapters, and then the map is suddenly changed. The change from Suqing to Zhanchi is also very disconnected Finally, you said that your protagonist is neither a eunuch nor impotent, but his teammates are too troublesome so he didn't take action. Then why did you skip the succubus plot? There are still too many eunuch authors

The useless world is full of props, with weak values ​​and low mechanics. If you were a girl-killing style, chopped up Esdeath, and extracted the Teigu for your own use, I think it would be about the same. However, after writing so many chapters, the protagonist still hasn't made any progress. Do I have to drag it to the shelves before changing the world?

It's not that the author needs to change the outline or anything. The author must have his own plan after writing for so long. I just feel that the 99 articles written after Feng Chaohuang are not interesting. Of course, if there are any that you think are good, please recommend them. I will leave a vote here to record whether you like 99 with multiple protagonists or Su Qing as the main protagonist and treating 99 as a plug-in

My key point is too similar to other people's. Suqing World feels like the plot is the same and there is nothing interesting to watch. I feel that the daily world is better. Of course, there are many shortcomings there, but at least it is original and does not follow the plot.

Hehe! The background of the clever girl is the same as reality! The protagonist actually got together with a Japanese! I can only say that I should not be a Chinese for the sake of women!

How can I put it this way? Dou-chuan-ryu should be a genre that is growing very fast, but the protagonist is always worse in performance than the original male protagonist.

Personally, I feel that the author wanted to write about 99-stream. Although I personally have not read many 99-stream books, but based on my superficial experience, the author did not write about the characteristics. The first is plug-in sharing, that is, all the protagonists share a backpack. This is true, but it is not in place. The first plug-ins that are reflected are the Teigu Heavy Eyes of the Red Eye World, the cross knight physique of Su Qing World, and the team ice attraction that the Red Eye World obtained from Esdeath, and then they disappeared. It can be said that most of the plug-ins are collected from the world of Zhanchi. The problem is that many readers come here for Suqing. If they want to escape from their comfort zone, there are not so many people who write Zhanchi's opinions at the beginning. Now it feels like it is a bit of a trick to get in and kill. Secondly, there is no reflection in other worlds. There is no protection from the Zero World, so it seems that there is no gain in the Zero World. Then there is the Smart Girl World, which shows the importance of plug-ins but basically no gain. Finally, there is the daily world, which is completely outside the main line. Deleting it will have no impact on the plot. There is also the Demon Slayer World. The author means that readers have objections, but you have mentioned it before writing it. There is room for manipulation in using the blood ghost technique as a shared plug-in.

Some of the wrong places were written incorrectly, and someone pointed them out. I'd better change them in the end.

If you write specifically about Su Qing, it won't be like this.

Re: The 0 part is really not well written. You can skip it and switch to Su Qing, who is the author's best. The creator's daily comics can also quickly go to the non-daily parts. I'm looking forward to this

Which chapters are Suqing, right? I want to subscribe, but I'm afraid I subscribed wrongly. I feel that other worlds are not interesting, so I like to read Su Qing's

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