Su Qing: I Really Don't Want to Conquer the Demon King

The first discussion post is the one I left. I randomly searched Suqing Fans on the starting point and saw this one. It was almost updated to the point where I just picked up Yoyo. After reading it in one night, I still complained about Yoyo's emotional line in the chapter being too abrupt. I feel like this book really starts high but ends low (the author himself said that he couldn't write without an outline). Personally, I feel that the book is best written in the early stages before the long line is reached. The long line is too deliberate. It has started to decline since I got Luna. How should I put it, it has the illusion of being in a novel about the Miracle Doctor and Soldier King. The plot is all about preparing for the acquisition of girls. Starting a harem and being a stud are two different things. It became even more obvious after Kazuma arrived. He forcibly used divination to tie up several of the original characters, and the whole story behind them was revealed. I don't understand the Claire line. I feel like I want to include all the women in the non-Kazuma harem. In the early stage, the protagonist still wants to have a good relationship with the nobles but not to have deep friendships to avoid trouble. I don't feel the charm of Claire. Congratulations on the completion of the novel, but it is indeed a bit regretful. Obviously the writing is not bad and the updates are stable, but later on everyone really lost their wits. Maybe because you are not a senior writer and don't have enough writing skills, long-term updates make you tired of typing. However, Su Qing fanfiction is really difficult to write. Thank you for your persistence in finishing it.

Huihui

Bro, great!

It's a pretty good fanfic, and the writing is also good. If you keep going, it will become popular.

I just found it from the rankings today, it looks great! But why didn't you sign a contract? Are there any prerequisites for signing a contract? Of course, not signing a contract will not affect the good-looking 🙂 Full vote for recommendation

Since it's Suqing, let's add a bookshelf first.

Aqua and Kazuma, come quickly

After one chapter of introduction, three chapters of learning Wiz's skills, the two interacted for another seven chapters, living together, leveling up, and being sucked into magic. The protagonist said in his heart that he couldn't do it, and he was often attracted to Wiz, engaging in this kind of hard-to-get play. After nine chapters of interaction, the handling of lines and character details is worrisome, and there is no ups and downs in the plot at all. It is all anecdotes, and there is an anxious feeling of being forced by parents to go on a blind date and sit at the table to communicate dryly. Your writing is not that bad, but your journal has successfully brought you down to the level of a primary school student. High EQ: The two-person world of the protagonist and Wiz for nine consecutive chapters. Low emotional intelligence: The two people only chatted for nine chapters, and the interaction relied entirely on the protagonist's psychological rejection and physical integrity. Wiz was a nymphomaniac, sucking magic power, and selling welfare. There wasn't even a third party to act as a promoter, and the dead monster didn't even cry out. Even pure love-oriented works need to insert a few characters such as friends. Don't make the plot too dry. If you can pull off nine chapters, I can only say that you are a pure novice. But in fact, there is really nothing poisonous about it. It is just plain and too restrictive for readers. They are not fans of Suqing, and they do not have a certain amount of imagination to polish the work. It is difficult to watch it. I have only read Chapter 10. If you have an outline later and start to follow the plot, my suggestion is to change the front part, not to mention deleting anything, but at least move it to the back, not to mention the golden three chapters, at least give readers a sense of freshness, often carry what has been said to the next chapter, and repeat the psychological description again. Your plot rhythm is also terrible. Unless you drive a car, or your writing skills are so good that you can make these nine chapters beautiful and delicious, you don't have this ability, you know? It is estimated that 90% of readers will have a hard time being patient. Just stick with it until Chapter 10. Didn't you make a draft and revise it repeatedly before sending it out? During this period, you talked about a lot of bits and pieces of settings, which can be integrated. The first chapter is done, especially about the protagonist's abilities. It seems that you were thinking about it while you were writing it, and you didn't read it much after you finished it.

The author, hurry up and sign the contract. I have all my monthly tickets ready.

Don't listen to what other readers are saying, this is great writing! Keep it up!

Come on, if you sign the contract, I will give you a monthly pass

The writing is quite good. By the way, when will Kazuma and Aqua come? Will the protagonist accept Huihui?

Because of you, the comment section is full of people asking you to accept this or that. Isn't this a relaxing daily episode? Don't make it a sexy show

Ants ants ants! New book!

It is indeed a rare novel by Su Qing. Many plots are in line with Su Qing's nonsensical comedy.

The author can link up with popular otherworld dramas such as Labyrinth Rice and Buried Fulian, and see if it can be written as a main story or a side story. The plot is to take his wife to travel to another world after getting married. Moreover, there is a goddess in Frilian's world, and she can be set to be the goddess who controls this world like Eris.

Author, if your grades are really not good, you can write "Sea of ​​Death". After all, your daily writing is really good, so there should be more readers.

No, buddy, you confess your love to another woman in front of your wife. This is very explosive. Let's just say that although it is a funny novel, it should not be too explosive. Also, the protagonist's liking is inexplicable. He wants to accept the other person just because he feels pity for her. Nan Bang

Without Aqua, wouldn't Huihui Youyou be gone?

Rare Su Qing fan novels, are there any other fan novels that offer blessings to a beautiful world? Please recommend 🙏! Other websites are also fine, as are old books!

Happy Spring Festival! I have a small wish. If the author no longer updates the book at Qidian, can the book be updated on another platform? I don't want to see it discontinued😭

Suqing, new book, Ant, understand

It's been two months and I want to read your new book

Write another book, the ants are crawling