Travel Through the Sky and Become the Protector of the Great Emperor of the Void

Well, what I want to complain about is how an ordinary person in the time travel managed to control the Holy Body, and how he devoted himself to the world of Zhetian just after taking possession of it, loving and selfless. Does it matter that you are not familiar with this world?

The author should go read Zhe Tian a few more times. The writing is contradictory

How should I put it? I feel like I didn't write the flavor of the Tietouzi who covers the sky 😃

The protagonist is like a loser. Look at how Ye Fan fights against the Supreme Emperor after he becomes the emperor. Even before he becomes the emperor, Ye Fan can beat the Golden Crow Emperor. It takes a long time for you to fight the Supreme Lord after you become the emperor. He is really like a loser.

I hope you will support me a lot, please vote! Please vote!

The writing is average, but keep up the good work.

Don't you think there's something wrong with the introduction? Doesn't the second sentence sound awkward to you?

Come on, once you become proficient in writing, you can revise the unfamiliar chapters.

Your Holy Body Protector is also Wu Shi or Ye Fan. At least they are from the same lineage. They will also be able to repay you in the future. What can an iron waste like Void repay to a supreme-level figure?

The protagonist's combat power is a bit too high, he can fight Emperor Zun. Do you think the protagonist can beat Emperor Ye Tian, ​​Emperor Wu Shi and Emperor Ruthless? Emperor Zun can hit three of them by himself

There's something wrong with you. Wasn't the fairy bell broken by a ruthless person?