You Have Done Me a Disservice.

You added a double penetration plot, you really think your results are too good, right?

Say it in advance, double penetration 🤫

The writing is good, and the plot is interesting, but as a storyteller, what do you mean by spoiling it yourself, because you are afraid that I will be blinded?

Is it interesting? Is it interesting to wear someone who is bound to succeed? Boring

I can see that you want to use the similar cultural souls of these two time travelers to make sweets, and let Lou be the assistant to open cheats. But have you ever thought about how to arrange a woman with modern thinking to adapt to ancient patriarchy? Do you want to be like Queen Dugu and have two saints come to the court? I hope your pen power can shape it

Your introduction should mention double-wearing. Those who want to see it come in and those who don't want to leave. I don't mention it in the introduction, but it pops up in the text. Isn't this looking for scolding?

Why are historical time-travel novels almost all about soul travel, and many protagonists still have systems or personal space? It is better to write that the protagonist can travel between modern and ancient times through time and space channels. After all, it is based on Einstein's theory of relativity. It is very interesting to write about the protagonist traveling between modern times and ancient times through time and space channels. This can show the direct collision between modern times and ancient times. There are already many stories about the protagonists rebelling in the early Qing Dynasty, including the Kangxi Dynasty and the Yongzheng Dynasty. It would be interesting to write a book in which the protagonist rebelled between Kublai Khan and Yuan Dynasty in the Yuan Dynasty or Zhu Yuanzhang and Hongwu Year in the Ming Dynasty.

I read in the comment section that it is for both men and women, so can this harem still be open? Can this wife still sleep with her? If you don't have these, what else would you call Gao Huan?

The author still uses as few Internet terms as possible, which destroys the sense of immersion. Even if you want to use it, be careful not to appear in character dialogue.

Discuss heroes over wine, but this is the post-Three Kingdoms version

There is a picture

I first read the author's Destiny to Be a Man, and then I read the A Dou and Fu Su books one after another. Overall, they were okay. The historical novels written by the author are different from other authors. Most of the protagonists in his novels are based on productivity and unite their subordinates by making a big cake. This is quite different from the intrigues in most historical novels nowadays. But this is also a very interesting perspective. After all, we are all time travellers, so it makes no sense not to develop some technology to develop productivity. When it comes to engaging in intrigues and political struggles, most time-travelers would definitely not be able to defeat those people in ancient times, so I think this angle is very interesting.

Is this a detective story or a hegemony story? Why are there so many crime-solving plots?

Isn't Gao Cheng also a time traveler

If you really want to give birth to Gao Cheng and Gaoyang, your family will last for decades. You are a bunch of lunatics.

Will there be Gao Cheng? Can you drive a big car?

If Gao Huan unified the north and the south, he would be another Zhu Yuanzhang. The Code of Northern Qi is the highest code of achievement in the Three Kingdoms, Two Jins, and the Southern and Northern Dynasties.

I still like to watch Han, Ming😍

The author writes so cutely that it warms my heart ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈

Speaking of Gao Laojiu and Gao Zhan, I have an idea. It's better to let him be reincarnated as a girl and let his parents and three biological brothers hear his voice. Turning into the woman who once had no choice but to be bullied by him, I personally think it is the best punishment for him.

After reading Bei Qi's book, I feel that Gao Yang's transformation into a mental young man is probably caused by being bullied by his brother Gao Cheng when he was a child and his mother not liking him. Otherwise, why would Gao Huan, who has used his brain to rule the world all his life, say that he has a better brain than me? Gao Yang, why did he suddenly become a fool from then on? Gao Yang still has some gold in the heroic emperor. Reading the book of Northern Qi, I feel that Gao Yang is a weakened version of Li Shimin. In terms of strength, Gao Yang should be the strongest among Gao Huan and others.

Congratulations on the completion~(o^^o)♪

Are there any new books? It's already there, I'm just writing it in a different account

It's quite fun to write. I liked Liu Ying's book very much. Come on, author!

Doesn't the current situation of the Erzhu family look familiar: the talented and powerful father has died, leaving behind a son who needs his cousin to assist in politics, and his sphere of influence is still in Kansai...

What are you wearing? Nondescript

You don't want to accept all cats and dogs, just accept those that are famous in history books.