Konoha: Rain Ninja Village Unifies the Ninja World

I bet, I bet he will be a eunuch 🙂

Don't explain too much when you're fighting. You can supplement it in the form of narration, but not too much.

In fact, it's okay, but it relies more on dialogue to advance, and the combat is written dryly. Also, the B quality is not enough, the chants of the ghosts are too realistic, it should be more abstract and artistic like the Grim Reaper, not necessarily a life story. . .

It's too fake for Konoha to pile all its combat power here at Sunagakure.

What have you written in the last few chapters? It's a bad joke, it's sewed in some weird things, it's out of subject, it's just a waste of time, you don't want to be a eunuch, do you?

Don't be so wordy in character dialogue

It's bullshit that the author Hyakki Yakou can destroy the earth

The author: There are people who destroy planets in the Naruto world. They are the Otsutsuki clan. Even the Sage of Six Paths can't destroy the planet. Moreover, the moon was made by taking part of the land from Naruto's planet and condensing it. It can't be considered a real planet. It's a bit ridiculous that a single Hyakki Yakou can destroy Naruto's planet.

Come on, author The previous Hokages were all those boring black zodiacs They spent all day practicing and killing Either killing or engaging in porn I'm tired of watching them all, so boring The past two years have been much more interesting The richest man in the ninja world, the straw man leader, defection, the system is coming There are so many interesting and interesting works Monthly votes are given Come on author