Great Qin: I Became Ying Zheng's Son

This book is suitable for quick browsing to pass the time. There are typos and typos, carelessness in word choice and allusions, and lack of careful proofreading after editing. It is too casual and makes the protagonist's words and deeds seem modern and out of character, without the sense of the times that other authors wrote. For example, I, a novice, all know that my parents are called grandpa and grandma. Your whole mother is my biological child. I will beat you to death for being an unfilial son. Like thunder piercing the ears comes from the Tang Dynasty, not like thunder piercing the ears. There should be no hydraulic drives in the pre-Qin Dynasty. Human-powered animals were used to grind mills and pestles. Wheat cakes made from wheat to serve as military rations were not shown and could only be enjoyed by nobles.

There is a problem with the introduction. How can the throne be given to the second generation if the throne is a pig's foot?

Why are historical time-travel novels almost all about soul travel, and many protagonists still have systems or personal space? It is better to write that the protagonist can travel between modern and ancient times through time and space channels. After all, it is based on Einstein's theory of relativity. It is very interesting to write about the protagonist traveling between modern times and ancient times through time and space channels. This can show the direct collision between modern times and ancient times. There are already many stories about the protagonists rebelling in the early Qing Dynasty, including the Kangxi Dynasty and the Yongzheng Dynasty. It would be interesting to write a book in which the protagonist rebelled between Kublai Khan and Yuan Dynasty in the Yuan Dynasty or Zhu Yuanzhang and Hongwu Year in the Ming Dynasty.

This is how it is for a child. He can't do big things, he can only play drums, and he's really procrastinating!

The writing is quite good but the pace is too slow. How many words does the author plan to write?

During the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, the prince and the king's sons were all called Mr. X. For example, Gongzi Fusu and Gongzi Gao.

Should I just keep writing history, or should I change it to fantasy with a spiritual revival or something later?

The main character's mother has never changed, she gets down on her knees at every turn.

In one cool sentence, all the unreasonable issues were resolved, which is all bullshit. Use modern words to write about the ancient Qin Dynasty, and then you say it is a cool article?