Achievement Department Martial Saint

I have read Chapter 36 so far. The background is similar to that of the Book of Troubled Times, except that the protagonist's cheating is very powerful. I hope it will not be as bad as the Book of Troubled Times in writing about women Summary: It's still good enough for now. Book friends can try to watch it

It's really good, but I hope there is no female protagonist, or there is only one female protagonist

This book is well written, but there are too many things about children's love for each other. 🙂 There is no woman in my heart, so I draw my sword to the God of Nature.

Qi training is divided into early, middle and late stages. The upgrade is so slow that you will die if you encounter an unreasonable master

Starting from Chapter 130, what the hell, inexplicably, the good heroine suddenly turned into a careerist with great ambitions.

You are not as good as the entire system, and you actually created the Heavenly Book. Since the Earthly Book and the Human Book are in this world, why did you create the Heavenly Book?

I only raised you for a few days, and you became a eunuch. Isn't that funny?

Good looking^ω^

This kind of article suggests two female protagonists fighting each other. Everyone wants to see rivers of blood flowing! Slow down the pace a little and focus on the world view, there is a lot to be done

The plot of the first time I went into the mountains to suppress bandits was too confusing. I can't understand the logic. I want to be the Shilipo Sword God. But suddenly they have to go into the mountains to suppress bandits. Originally, no one else needed to lead you, but Coach Sun, who is close to you, wanted to lead the team. Then I wanted to go into the mountains (for protection). Just looking at the outline is nothing. The content inside is really messy. At the beginning, the protagonist does not have a good impression of Coach Sun. Simply grind NPC achievements. It was also at this time that the goal tone of Shilipo Sword God was set, and learning martial arts only took one night. After that, it's a regular plot of joining the team and being slapped in the face. The problem is that there is no plot about Sun Daxing during this period. Coach Sun inexplicably grew up to be like a brother and a father. So much so that the protagonist is allowed to break the development tone he set in the early stage (why is this, Coach Sun)? The protagonist is emphasizing his fledgling status in the middle of the game. Suppressing bandits is very dangerous (the original meaning should be that those rookies suffer a lot from group fights. Instability is dangerous). There is another logical contradiction here. One is that one is very strong. Bandits posed no danger to him. Then where do you get so many psychological dramas. Just go and suppress it. The other is that it is dangerous to him, in order to protect the people around him. Decided to go up the mountain to suppress the bandits. That comes full circle. Why is this Coach Sun? Is the protagonist good enough?

Qidian comments can only be upvoted but not downvoted. Even if 20 people agree and 80 people disagree with a comment, it will only show that some people agree. It is good to see this alone without being led into a pit.

Written by the author of One Chapter a Day

Author, you don't want to fail to get perfect attendance, right?

The book is good, and there are actually almost no poisonous points (it doesn't matter if you are persuaded to leave the realm at the beginning, it doesn't affect anything, it is not the kind that relies on realm hydrology). Because I was hurt by the author cutting the book, I stopped pursuing it and raised it. The brothers of Shuhuang went into the trap on their own

What the protagonist wants to do is not clear and firm. If you really want to move forward quickly, you should not seize the resources around you, such as the seniors next to the heroine, and buy moves to learn whatever you can. You don't have to be stupid just to leave resources. The learning of moves is also very difficult. It should be taught and studied. Now it is completely a "skill". If it is not taught, you will not know it. Moreover, the creative connotation of moves cannot be understood, and martial arts cannot be studied independently. The protagonist is completely a master of using skills, and the logic behind the skills is not studied at all. A large number of descriptions of the heroine are history within history. Can you concentrate on practicing martial arts and rise to the top! Are you writing female-oriented romance novels? Are you a female author? Are you targeting female readers? The plot is slow and the strength is slow to improve. Keep the romance going. The plot is also illogical, which is a huge poisonous point. In a world with force, it is not a universal concept of the supremacy of force. It is just like force is just a kind of work ability, which does not distinguish people, like writing an opera. As for the character creation, each one is either a good person or a bad person, black and white, childish. To sum up, the author's writing is not good, what an innovative idea "achievement" and "game", written like this. I am not a troll. Who would pay to slander you with the amount of traffic your book has? I just felt disgusted after seeing part of the paid chapter.

What I wrote before is really to my liking, but after entering the army, it felt really strange. The protagonist did not improve. It was as if he had changed the system to fight monsters and upgrade. The achievements had no sense of existence, and there was no iron-blooded feeling like the army. He was neither a martial artist nor a passionate person.

It's very well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch

The writing is very good, you can tell the trumpet at a glance

This dragon is attacking the moon, fighting against the odds, is the author also playing with the sword from the sky?

The plot feels a bit like the martial arts novels written by Zhuge Qingyun, Liu Canyang, Xiao Yi, and Wo Longsheng at that time.