Great Sun Lian Shen: I Proved My True Martial Arts in the Old Land

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Did Xinmin appear out of thin air? Are the old people the same race?

1. Wuxia, have you read martial arts? Do you know the core and system of martial arts? 2. Have you read Xianxia? 3. Have you read science fiction? . . . When you write this, do you know your readers' cognition and accumulation? . . . From the beginning to the present, your novel. The system is unclear and confusing. Applied too much. I don't know which direction you want to develop. Martial arts, fairy tales, science fiction, etc. Your outline does not have a naturalization system of more than 100,000 words. Write a chicken feather? A sea of ​​flowers or a pile of cow dung. Don't you know the difference? Many big guys have a complete system and have written dozens of books. In order to complete the system, it took several years and more than ten years to build an illusory world. Why are you so proud of writing an outline of several thousand words? The more elements there are in the design system, the more complex the combination will be. Some second-rate writers either apply reality or online games. . . If you modify the concept of Xianwu at will, you are teasing public perception. No matter which aspect you want to write, it is wrong. . . If you want to redefine Xianwu, are you ready to become a god? 5,000-Word outline ready to become a god? . . Martial arts, gods, magic. Fantasy, science fiction. These are all complete systems, and there are many classification systems. Do you know any masterpieces? The reincarnation of the heavens and the worlds was originally written in a cool way, without a specific system, and is commonly known as brainless. Hodgepodge. And hodgepodge is not easy to write. And everything continues with reality and basic logical cognition. You are all floating and have no sense of identity at all. And you did not add your own cognitive definition. Repeat the definition instead. But the system is unclear. It's ok even if the system is unclear, you haven't paved the way for the problem. . Pig's trotter or wooden man has no emotional changes. The audience has no sense of picture. It's fun for others to fight, but it's necessary for the plot for you to fight. . When you say the world's environment is extreme, you just mean extreme. The earth still has a good population, what to eat, what to live with, spaceships or ladders. Wait, nothing. Too pale. How can pig's feet survive in this world. . Your world is not a traditional reality. Can't be applied. How do you want readers to feel. Feels like a piece of shit. You go somewhere else, how do you get there? Just run, bring it along in one sentence. Are you asking readers to apply reality? . . I don't want to talk anymore. How much is a 5,000-word outline? Writing prose is not enough! Have you finished writing your timeline? Is it enough?

The introduction looks similar to The Other Side of Deep Space?

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

The preface does not match the postscript. The protagonist was already dead when he was found. How did the protagonist survive later?