Myth: This Yang Jian Is a Bit Strong

According to the myth, Yang Jian is the Jade Emperor's treasure: Qingyuan is the Jade Emperor's insane nephew. He picked off the sun and the lunar moon and put them in his purse, so that there is no distinction between day and night in the world. The Jade Emperor didn't know what calamity had befallen the mortal world. When he found out it was Qingyuan's trick, he asked him to take out the sun and moon. Qingyuan rolled on the ground and refused to take it out. The Jade Emperor coaxed him and said that the sun and moon placed on the body can make people grow old. Qingyuan was afraid of old age and cried anxiously. The Jade Emperor said: "Take it out and I will allow you to celebrate two birthdays every year until you are eighteen years old." ' So, Qingyuan's birthday is now June 23rd and December 23rd. Of course, you can also say that Qingyuan Miaodao Zhenjun is not Erlang Shen.

There seems to be no system in Baolian Lantern, and it is not recommended to spend too much time climbing to the top. Yang Jian, Sun Houhou, and Agarwood will reach the sky directly after just a few years of learning.

Now I feel like this book is messy here and there, and each world is so short that I don't know how helpful it is after reading it. Moreover, it's a waste of time. I won't be able to finish this book unless I revise it.

I don't think that Yang Jian, who has not suffered any suffering, can achieve great achievements in later generations. I feel that Tu Zhu's journey through so many worlds is just a patchwork of words. The lotus lamp has no passion and is suitable for a romance heroine. It is perfect. The Supreme Humanity is vigorous and vigorous. Any little character can write his own story.

This book says that the Immortal King is equal to Taiyi, the ultimate Immortal King is Daluo, the quasi-immortal emperor is Hunyuan, and the Immortal Emperor is Pangu. You are exaggerating too much. Taiyi is unique in time and space, Daluo plays with time at will to open up the world, and the Immortal Emperor changes history and affects the future, but will be backlashed by cause and effect. Even Daluo is not as good as it. You tell me it is this Pangu. Who is the author reading the "Zhe Tian Trilogy"?

It's such a mess, this book must be a mess

I really don't have a sense of immersion when writing about indigenous protagonists in fan fiction, and the dialogue is also quite white.

The indigenous protagonist is written in the introduction, which is a waste of time

The thing I can't understand the most. As the sister of the Jade Emperor, how did Yao Ji fall in love with a mortal?

It's too messy. Just go through each world. What's the point? Why are you going there if you don't pretend to be 13?

They are not a family, they do not enter a family, gods and mortals are combined, Yang Jian's mother, Yang Jian's sister, these two people, if they are gods, they don't do it... I feel that they are sick

After reading the first chapter, I can't stand it anymore. Firstly, Yang Jian is a native, and secondly, the dialogue looks very childish.

The world he writes about is too complicated and too complicated to be precise.

Why don't all fandoms nowadays love to write about indigenous people? Who would read it?

The dialogue is speechless and the writing is terrible.

Do you know the reason why not many people read it? The updates are too slow, and the writing of each world is too confusing. Most people can't understand it. And the last point is, if you want to write about astronomy, don't write about the indigenous people. There is no sense of immersion in reading. You might as well write a completely original novel.

I originally read the synopsis, "Baolian Lantern in the Wilderness", which is pretty good. But when I turned it over and saw that the protagonist is an indigenous character, there is no sense of immersion. Otherwise, I would write an original novel. Writing about indigenous people is really not good. All readers know the plot, but only the indigenous protagonist does not know it. It is not that fun.

The writing style is so poor that it can't be taken in. It's like a composition rather than a novel.

Looking at the introduction, I thought he was a time traveler, but who knew he was an aborigine?

The structure is too scattered, there is no complete plot, and the settings of multiple worlds are piled up intermittently and it looks very confusing.

When I saw 30, I didn't even know what the point of the protagonist dressing up like this. How about walking around each world and giving an introduction?

It does not reflect Yang Jian's talent and will. Everything except his name has nothing to do with Yang Jian, and there is a lot of water. All astronomical texts can either depose hundreds of schools and only respect one, or cultivate hundreds of classics and form their own family. To be honest, the former is better, because you only need to take a little bit of the essence of inspiration. , The latter, to be honest, I am not optimistic about your writing skills. You can't chew off more than you can chew. In addition, there are problems with Taoism. How can you be so greedy? A suitable Tao has many branches, each with its own splendor, rather than being like an octopus. Aren't you afraid that the various Taoists will fight on their own? Octopus also has eight sub-brains.

A Yangshen system is strong enough, but you are superfluous by doing so many things😤

There is actually someone who is the son of the protagonist of the novel? Shouldn't he be Shi Hao's father?

The way you describe it doesn't feel like a novel. More like some kind of record.

A weirdo who tricked Meng Qi out of nowhere and claimed that he was upright and would not lie.

In fact, after watching Douyin's Bohai Official Tells Journey to the West, I couldn't watch Journey to the West by Yang Jian and the Jade Emperor at all. Yang Jian from Journey to the West is so bad, and the Jade Emperor is so awesome

Originally, what you said was not very good, and my brother's own sense of involvement could not be conveyed. Moreover, the Yang Jian you wrote is obviously the Yang Jian in the Lotus Lamp, and you can't take it with you when traveling between worlds. Obviously if you write about a perfect world, you can write about a perfect world in which you can participate. Then you can throw away the "Zhe Tian Trilogy" and polish it, so that more than 100 pictures will be enough. The level of this book has increased, and its popularity has increased. However, it is tiring to read here and there and then receive nothing.

It's a bit messy and doesn't look interesting.

Is there a copy of Mysterious Resurrection? After all, Yang Jian was written according to Yang Jian