Return to 1983: My Literary Era

The writing style is like writing prose, which is not the case for writing novels. In addition, don't always be from this time and era, and then have a lot of things like popular science. This causes the plot to be disconnected and stuck. I got stuck while reading, and I learned about the techniques for entraining private goods. Finally, the theme is not clear. You should highlight the theme at the beginning to let readers know what kind of story you want to tell. As for rural children, carrying burdens does not require long and repetitive tasks. It gets annoying until the end.

V                                   What do you think

To be honest, I understand that the author set the protagonist to be a Peking University student and a rural person. This is because he wants to write something new to attract readers. But the author is too far away from 1983 and basically takes the details for granted. No one would laugh at carrying a carrying pole to register at the university. This is not to say that there was no regional discrimination at that time, but it was a common phenomenon to carry a carrying pole to go to school. At that time, materials were scarce and one had to carry a lot of things to go to school, and ordinary families basically did not have such things as suitcases. It was very common to bring two snakeskin bags to school. It was very common for families in rural or county towns to carry a carrying pole to the university (my mother went to the countryside to get admitted to college because her uncle carried a carrying pole to the university). By the way, the author wants to write about a protagonist who is poor and ridiculed. What is more suitable is the clothes. For example, the protagonist is wearing clothes made from fertilizer bags, and the ridicule will only be behind his back. At that time, college students were very valuable, and everyone would still look down on him in person.

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The author wrote that he was admitted to Peking University in 1983 but had no money to go to school! Actually, I am very strange about this matter!                        Let's not talk about it, in some parts of society now, young people who have passed the Peking University exam will be given some rewards by local companies, schools and education bureaus. Do you know that the students who were admitted to Peking University in 1983, the production team, and the villagers were all beating gongs and drums, and they would overcome all difficulties for this student who was admitted to Peking University You have to know that that was Peking University in 1983, not a fourth- or fifth-rate junior college in the modern author's hometown

I felt like vomiting when I went to watch it in my childhood. I skipped through it all. From the beginning, the writing style was plain and natural, which made me feel comfortable reading it. The more I wrote later, the more impetuous it became, and I really couldn't stand it anymore. If you don't want to vomit, please post a comment. I went to Japan to make a bet with someone and wrote x to devote myself to it, and to explore the forests of Norway. What is the author's idea? Thinking of becoming globally famous? How does a world-famous writer go to a country and write several national books? The interview brought the protagonist to a place where the protagonist wrote a book with a Japanese background to spread Japanese culture, and there were also scandals in Japan. Oh my god! I really can't figure out what the idea is. The protagonist wrote about the wishful thinking, and wrote about Red Sorghum. If I were the protagonist's teacher, he would have cleaned up his family. Really awesome works are imported and translated from other countries, instead of the protagonist going to that country to write a few books to show off the protagonist's ability. I read the comments Ou also complained a lot about Japan. I hope the author will change it later. I am really afraid that he will become a director and a singer later on. Can I keep the plain and natural writing style in the opening chapter? The author is great. It is not easy to find a book that is right for me. I don't dare to read the rest of it for fear of giving up. Alas

I don't know why the author keeps carrying a pole to go to college? In the 1980s, at least one-third of people went to college carrying pots, pans, bedding, and rolls. It was very common. Let alone the 1980s, there were many in the 1990s.

It's ridiculous. In 1983, getting admitted to Peking University was an event that the whole village, town and county were proud of. How could Pig's Feet be in trouble because of lack of money? Don't write a chronicle if you don't have any common sense.

The protagonist is from a rural area. He can write poems, songs, play the guitar, and knows symphony. The time in the book is the early 1980s. You can see for yourself if the combination of these things looks awkward.

«The Unknown» is better than «Donkey Gets Water», not that the content is better, but the story is more in line with the protagonist's current state. If "Farewell My Concubine" is really not adapted well, it will be very controversial and may even be banned. And if the movie hadn't won awards abroad, who knows what? It's completely exported to domestic sales, but a bunch of online writers praised the movie and the original work, and they just followed what others said.

I don't know if the author has special feelings for Nakajima Miyuki. Nakajima Miyuki is in her thirties, ten years older than the protagonist. She is not beautiful, has an average figure, and is talented. But what does it have to do with readers like us now? It seems that she is really hungry We got together without any foreshadowing. After only a few meetings in total, you just made pure love with me. And the protagonist is so awesome. I think a Japanese wife is in high school. Is there really no problem in my eyes? I used to tell the author about the heroine's problem, thinking that the author would correct it and gradually downplay her. Now that I have met the parents, the era is basically decided by meeting the parents. Even if I want to write about her in the future, there will be a lot of fiddling In my opinion, the protagonist is twenty, handsome and rich, very talented, with a high status, and is in a special position in that era. Does the author really feel that there were no outstanding, beautiful, or ulterior women in China at that time? I still feel that those big leaders don't have young women in their families, so in the eyes of the leaders, I would be more suitable Anyway, that's it, good luck, let's go

As a time-traveling character, your experience should have reached a certain level. Some of the minor flaws are actually passable, but the Japanese group is really irritating. As a person who has gone abroad for exchanges, and with two lifetimes of experience, he should know what he is doing and what he should do. It is nothing to go out of his way domestically. This kind of thing is not a bit vigilant. Whether it is the author's own strong feelings for Nakajima Miyuki, it should not be imposed on the protagonist. What's more, the writing is really coincidental. It feels that there is no logic at all. It really makes me lose points and abandon the book here.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          I feel that the starting point coins were wasted, it is really not worth the money.

You have copied poems about whatever stupid things you wrote, so you copied them generously, just one poem, pretending not to understand, and playing the guitar, which is what you expected. In the 1980s, you came from the countryside, and you didn't even learn how to play the guitar all of a sudden. You thought everyone else was a fool. After reading more than a dozen chapters, the poisonous hair disappeared.

While writing Fulfillment, I also wrote Farewell My Concubine and The Last Emperor. Don't you feel that they are separated? They all represent different thoughts. In time-travel novels, no protagonist's thoughts are unified. It's like schizophrenia.

There are not so many calculations in life after rebirth. It is all about adapting to the sediment first, then rising to the top, and the tide of the times pushes people away! I think it's well written! The flowers are in full bloom, each one catches the eye, come on!

Is there no heroine to write? Get a Japanese guy who is more than ten years older, good guy, a Chinese genius boy, can't find a wife? I gave up, I'm really frustrated

Miyuki Nakajima really lives in Bengbu, and the author's aesthetics is also convinced. I can't stand it anymore and quit.

I feel like the author is a little bit guilty of literary q. In the chapter where he sings his wish, the protagonist is a copycat, copying and copying to the point where he cried. I found it a bit funny or embarrassing.

Why are some people so picky when reading online articles? I think the author's previous book and this one are both good. The writing is fluent and the story is relatively relevant to the times. Looks very comfortable, come on.

That sentence carries morality and justice on its iron shoulders, and writes articles with its skillful hands. Writing an entertainment article involves this? It's obviously an inappropriate quote. My parents both jumped the queue and settled back in Shanghai to work in the 1980s. Your background in 1983 has nothing to do with the real situation. I advise you to write about parallel worlds or fictional stories in the future, so as not to make people laugh.

I don't understand, why are all Beijing University students never seeing the world? Feel weird picking up a pole? What's so silly about this name? There are still people who suggest that others change their names as soon as they meet? It's really written, I don't know what it means 😅😅

It's a bit too soft. Don't you know that literati were very proud at that time? When you see a woman, you act like a fool. Can you have a temper? It is for others to lick you, not for you to lick others.

Chapter 29 about playing the guitar made me so excited that I couldn't get into the following chapters.

The rhythm of the refreshing article is okay, but it's too empty! In addition, there is a system, and it is impossible for influential people to engage in cross-border love! It is impossible for the truly wealthy class to find jobs in the entertainment industry! In China, the literary and entertainment circles seem to be the same, but in fact the internal divisions are very strict. Actors in the 1990s can still be in the literary and artistic circles! Most of the later ones can only belong to the entertainment industry!

Anyone who knows a little bit about sports events knows that South Korea has been cheating and engaging in all kinds of little tricks without a bottom line! It's been like this for decades. A country or a nation that can be shameless for a long time is also among the best in the world! It's really weird that a nation that claims to be strong and excellent can be shameless in all aspects for decades!

The author's script Farewell My Concubine had the first draft in 1981. Did you write Farewell My Concubine in 1983? , Isn't this looking for death, writing a novel without checking the information?

It's very hard to write, and the pace will be a little slower at the beginning. I hope book friends will support me! Thanks!

What does the author think when the female protagonist is more than 10 years older than the male? If I have to find a foreign wife, can I match her in terms of age?

The heroine looks Japanese and wants to abandon the book

It feels a bit watery. One chapter can skip two-thirds or more. There are too many useless dialogues.