Cultivation of Immortality: Beginning to Become a Taoist from Time Travel to Become a Bird

I feel like the author really just fills in the numbers. In the previous level of Qi training, a bubble shoots out several thousand meters, and a tree hole is several thousand meters above the ground. A water cannon from behind blew the outrageous tree hundreds of meters away. You say that in the early stage of Qi refining, your expressive power is that of other mortals at the level of golden elixir. A tree that is at least several thousand meters high can be blown up several hundred meters, converted into TNT to blow up a mountain, and it can easily flatten a small mountain.

I took a rough look at it and came back to talk about what I think is problematic. The realms are too finely divided, and the level of Qi training is divided into early and middle stages. What's more, luck has such a fine level. It becomes difficult to write like this for a long time. Also, Devouring Evolution is generally prone to collapse in the later stages. There should be a restriction on improving cultivation level that can only increase energy. You can only advance by yourself.

The writing is average, but the plot logic is very poor The protagonist has no deep thinking There is no coherence from beginning to end It's like writing a diary, What are you going to do today? What are you going to do tomorrow? What's next? It's all written down But why? But he didn't mention a word There was no goal at all, and his thoughts were uncertain Wherever Chunchun went, he looked, and the character design did not conform to the logical thinking of normal people

Female Kingfisher - Him? She? It?

To be honest, it was quite boring to write...

After reading the first twenty chapters and the comment area, I personally feel that changing into a female bird is not a bad point. The problem is that the author's writing style is too white and is seriously homogeneous with other alien beast novels. It is said that cultivating immortals has no sense of immortality except for levels.

The only reason why I haven't retreated yet is because of your transformation and alien nature.

Female kingfisher? Not only a strange beast, but also a transformation? Your profile seems to have too many elements. I don't understand what the point of the alien beast is still a female? Shape or not? In short, the introduction successfully persuaded me to quit.

The author personally admits that Bai Yan is one of the spouses of the five-clawed eagle So, to a certain extent, this novel is a story about changing marriages. I said later that things from the Qi Refining Stage should not be brought to the Foundation Building Stage. From a side perspective, it is also recognized as one of the spouses. After all, everyone knows that if you have something, you have it, and if you don't have it, you don't have it. After all, people know that if you say so, don't bring those things from junior high school to high school, then it means that something must have happened to the original intention. So when it comes to things during the Qi training period, don't bring them into the foundation building period. This sentence follows the issue of spouse. The more you avoid something, the more it proves that it is true. The summary is the article about changing marriage

I originally wanted to read it as a child, but now it seems that this novel has completely changed its flavor, including the behavior of changing marriages, the behavior of brotherly love, the behavior of subduing intelligence, etc. I can't figure it out again. I just can't figure it out. Why is there such a big difference between your previous plot and the plot where you met Lin Fan? The first one created a relatively cold and firm label for people, but the later one gradually became like Lin Fan's nanny, like Lin Fan's adoptive mother, like one of Lin Fan's future harems. The more I read, the more frustrated I became.