You Can Resist the Catastrophe, but You Call This an Iron Shirt?

After reading more than ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. It's like a martial arts drama. The key is that there are a lot of inexplicable things. Maybe the author knew where and who was when he wrote it, but it's very uncomfortable to read. It's only about thirty chapters now. The author will cut it off and re-plan it if he has the energy to publish it.

It doesn't pay any attention to plot connection. Just go up one screen at a time

A bunch of people are inexplicably nice to the protagonist and give him various gifts. The plot is also baffling.

I won't talk about the messy writing. Practicing everything in the name of iron shirt will only harm you!

Xiao Huangqing

It's really baffling. The article I wrote is not on point. Isn't it good to combine the body and soul? Martial arts immortals can build a physique that will last through all tribulations and prove the Tao through strength!

Why does Yakuza have so many female characters? ? ?

Jidao Liu has less than 100 chapters and six women. Are you an anxious person?

Xianyouxian

Wen Ning

Red Snake

Red Snake

Shadow Fox

Miaohu

After getting to the island, I started talking nonsense, Novice Village? ? ?

Good start, later. . Well, a good start.

Nowadays, it seems that the master of martial arts training is still in charge. Why does it feel like anyone can master Taoism and make it into a mass market? There is no threshold.

I want to see if Iron Cloth Shirt is at full level and can be struck by lightning without being hurt, that's a lie. . . .

Overall, it's okay. The description of the fight is also good. The plot and scenes are not coherent enough. Come on.

What should be written, you don't write the details. Read two chapters and briefly mention the key points. Don't talk about writing a book, I ask you to drive screws, but you can't do it well

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The main protagonist is getting stronger, so the story is passable. Come on, author💪

This writing is good 👍. There is something about it. The protagonist is at a very low level. All the people he comes into contact with from the beginning are masters and he is involved in a maelstrom. This kind of writing is difficult. The main reason is that the logic does not make sense. The protagonist is the one who has cultivated Iron Cloth Shirt to great achievements and is favored by others. He is also attracted by so many awesome people. It doesn't make sense 🙂

What Jiba stuff? I have no desire to read any more.

I haven't updated it in two days. The writing is good. I don't want to be a eunuch.