Honglou: I Am Really Not a Han Traitor

Many readers can't even handle modern fairies, and they still imagine that Sister Lin and Sister Lin in the Red Mansion can bring peace and happiness to the whole family. With Sister Lin's temperament, if you take seven or eight concubines, she will choke you to death every day.

The author likes to use classical Chinese. I personally don't know classical Chinese very well, but I always find it uncomfortable to read half-literary and half-white. Then there is the background design. Most fans will add the background, but the author has completely changed it. Not only did he make Wu Sangui an emperor, but he also moved the background to modern history. Moreover, I personally feel that it is not too difficult to write the starting point of the protagonist for the sake of conflict and storytelling. Most of the plots that solve the events cannot be written very well, and many unreasonable places are easily left.

It looks pretty good so far. It's this princess. I don't know how the author went about writing the character. It depends on whether you can grasp it well. Anyway, it is a very good Red Mansion novel so far. I hope the author will work hard. Try to update. Not enough

Why bring a system and a panel? It looked good at first, but it turned out to be like eating a fly in a meal. It was so unappetizing. In addition, the writing style is not bad, just describe it appropriately, don't show off all the time, it will make your teeth hurt when you look at it.

I just read Chapter 10 and found a lot of objections. Some people commented that the protagonist is sentimental and his desire for the golden hairpin is shallow and annoying. I don't feel so happy looking at it myself. I feel like my poor grades are probably due to this problem. I have read several books of Red Mansion. Those protagonists with good rhythm are basically determined and have clear goals. The author of this book is not bad at all, but the literary youth's enthusiasm gives him a toothache when he reads it. Jin Chai is highly praised. I think these female characters are certainly one of the main characters of Red Mansion, but they should never be the only scenery that the protagonist can see. At best, they are the icing on the cake among the flowers. The protagonist is the backbone. He turns into a sycamore and a phoenix comes from him. But if you take them too seriously, it means that there is no distinction between priority and priority. Chapter 10 is, in the author's words, the first 'interview'. At this moment, you are still in a daze, which is really disappointing. The attitude during the interview was too lax, and it didn't look like someone could get anything done.

The writing is very good, and the garden scene is also good, but the plot progress is too slow and too detailed. The protagonist and the sisters only get along for a few days. Guang Daiyu gets misunderstood and gets angry several times, and then the protagonist apologizes and coaxes her. It feels very bad. There is no emotional basis, and it is a bit too abrupt. It would be better to lengthen the timeline and give them some time to get along. The protagonist's age is also a drawback. He is only ten years old. As a result, Mrs. Wang wanted to beat Li Wan because Li Wan was a little close to the protagonist (she just looked at Yu Ci's pocket watch and had a meal with her deskmate). The protagonist is just a ten-year-old kid? Moreover, when people get along with each other on weekdays, it is impossible to tell that the protagonist is a ten-year-old child. It would be more appropriate to change the protagonist's age to fifteen or sixteen years old. After all, in the ancient setting, even if Da Baodai is five or six years old, it is actually okay And then some plots are really unreasonable. For example, a ninth-rank official of Jin Yiwei actually dared to molest and humiliate Aunt Xue, the head wife, in public. Is this really a shameless thing? It wouldn't matter if the two families had a feud and there was someone behind him, but it was just the simplest thing to do, and then he felt that his uncle would support him, and he bet that the four major families of King Xue, the king of Jia Shi, would not dare to go to war. And even if this person is a real person, he can obviously tell the story in a few words, and then the protagonist comes to the rescue. However, the writing is so detailed that I almost thought I was on the wrong website.

After all, Lin Daiyu is also a talented girl from the south of the Yangtze River. She looks like a little girl with every mouthful, but the smell of big dirt hits her face.

The writing is good, but the portrayal of the protagonist is always "obscene", and the plot is not so free and frank. He always looks like he has never seen a woman before. I assume it is not vulgar. Is this the author's self-analysis?

The writing is good, but the background of Wu Sangui and the protagonist is so disgusting, like a piece of chocolate with a little bit in it💩. I really don't understand why you wrote this kind of background?

When I see this 6/7 year old, she looks as beautiful as a fairy! A book that looks ridiculously handsome at the age of 7/8 is really... Anyone who is around 12 years old can barely read it! Do you know what a yellow-haired child is? This is when I was 6/7 years old

I'm tired of watching it. The age setting of the main character is so completely unnecessary? The underdeveloped elementary and high school students feel completely unnecessary. Secondly, perhaps it is because the protagonist is so young that he just licks him blindly in front of Wang Xifeng. He dared not offend Wang Xifeng but dared to intimidate Aunt Xue. Third, regardless of priority, the psychological activities of the n-line supporting actress must also be written repeatedly and non-stop. The same similar psychological activities should appear repeatedly in the same chapter. It seems like a 5k chapter, but the actual plot advancement is 0. But the general background of the setting is that Lu Shen of China is about to arrive.

This is the most detailed Red Mansions novel. This kind of detailed writing gives people a feeling of the real world. You can better feel the fun and joy of the people in the article. Compared with most other Red Mansions novels, the difference between 4k and 1080 is the only difference. As long as the plot is not too confusing, I will give it a solid 5-star rating. Monthly votes have been cast.

It's disgusting. Even if the author is Wen Qing, he's still very arrogant.

This book is really not a good read, written by a modern adult who traveled to the past. As if he had never seen a beautiful woman before, he was always stunned. The author refused to listen and just knew how to write about women. He described various women's appearances and clothing. The main story was never reflected. In fact, most of the story lines in The Story of Red Mansions are similar. The author is just grinding, has no writing skills, and suffers from literary youth disease.

​​This book will not be accepted by Grandma Liu, Mrs. Shi will not be accepted, Mrs. Wang will not be accepted, Mrs. Xing will not be accepted, Aunt Zhao will not be accepted, Aunt Xue will not be accepted, and the Three You Sisters will not be accepted... Don't accept it, don't read it. Don't accept it, don't read it.

The protagonist is too emotional. The author is probably an emotional liberal arts student. This is not bad, but given the background of this book, the protagonist is a more rational person.

How to say it? Just like Chen Kaige, the picture is very good, but the story is not told well. If I remember correctly, there are so many chapters, and this is only the second day?

I am a serious fan of Internet literature. Recently, I like to read time-travel Internet articles about the Red Mansion, but I have been struggling to find good-looking and high-quality ones. At first, I always took it for granted that the literary level of the famous book Red Mansions was too high and the style was too unique. The author of the online article could not control the flavor of Red Mansions. But later I found that this is not the case. The higher the level of Red Mansions, the higher the level, but the appreciation level of readers who read online articles is just that (naturally including me). You grasp the character characteristics, shape them like that, and add some in-depth interpretation videos of Red Mansions. In fact, it has already reached the passing level. The bigger reason why high-quality Red Mansion texts cannot be published is. On the one hand, if I come to see Red Mansions, I must come to see the Garden Opera. Isn't it just that there are so many colorful and vivid female characters in Luanhonglou? It's just for pretense, it's just for literary youth, it's just for pulling. If you want to fall in love, don't pick up girls. Emotional scenes are the focus. I've read all the articles online. Do I need a vase? I just want to go to bed, doesn't that fantasy succubus spirit smell good? Why bother to come to Red Mansions to scratch your heart and liver? Then let's write the emotional line seriously. We really can't do it. You must know that no matter which version of Dream of Red Mansions is quoted. Whichever interpretation you adopt, the finale of Red Mansions is not that happy. It's a tragedy. As a time traveler, the protagonist must have a lot of power and strength. Otherwise, we won't be able to protect the flowers and plants in this garden. Then you have to write a Machiavellian drama. It's not just about writing casually, it's to prevent the house from being confiscated and destroyed. You must at least be a feudal official, right? This requires the author to have the ability to control two types of plots at the same time, and such authors are extremely rare. The more serious problem is that these two lines conflict with each other. It's not just a matter of poor distribution of writing energy and scenes. Poor distribution means difficult balance. I think the two are mutually exclusive. Let me give two examples. Within the framework of the Garden Opera, if we can win Wang Xifeng, it will be enough to make people lose sleep. But if the male protagonist has become a powerful official. Under the setting of feudal society, if it is closed slowly, it is considered poisonous. Feng Lazi? Refined instantly! I am busy here fighting against powerful officials, making revolutions, and pleading for the people. Lin Daiyu, a sensitive literary young woman like you, has been asking me for emotional value all day long. It is really annoying to cry and cry! Although there has been some joke news recently. But the main body of Qidian must still be a male video platform. If you don't write about power and power, that's it. If everyone pretends to be stupid and eats sweets, they will not bring trouble to themselves. Once you write, the readership group will naturally become divided. Love and love still seem a bit small in the face of machinations. If you don't pay attention, one day you will be Lin Daiyu, tomorrow you will be a little fairy. There will inevitably be some excitement in the book review area that the author does not want to see. There is a high probability that it is not a sunspot, and maybe the palms and backs of the hands are all old readers The above problems will continue to break out. This is a structural contradiction and has nothing to do with the author's level, if the author's level is very good. The writing style is very, very high, and it may be able to cover up this contradiction, but this is a fundamental problem, and it is difficult to imagine that anyone can solve this contradiction. I speak from the bottom of my heart, author, you have only written 200,000 words, and I am publishing this now. It should be helpful to you, or at least allow you to consider these issues in advance. If you have already written 2 million words and the framework has been decided, then I will not post this. It will do no good except disturb your mind At least from the reader's perspective, I can't think of a solution. I look forward to your answer! At least judging from the quality of the first 200,000 words, you are qualified to answer this question. Judging from the name of the book, you also want to answer this question. Come on!

What does the author think? At this point in time, if you want to liberate your sisters, they can't stay with you! If you want to go against it and become the emperor yourself, then you are not going against the trend of the times. You cannot be a warlord.

The writing is okay. But I don't understand why the protagonist is still 10 years old in chapter 208...

The problem is also huge. In order to pursue the taste, the author emphasizes details and textual research. The book has been revised again and again, and now it is updated every day, which is half dead. . . But at least it can be followed. Your Huameng at the same time is already a eunuch. Feng Ya doesn't know what the author is writing. The more he writes, the more crooked he is, and he uses the political struggle of Pi Sheng in the Red Mansion, but the writing is just average. Since he wrote the original heroine, few people have read it. The batch of Red Mansions that seemed to be okay at the beginning have just begun to get better after only a few hundred thousand words. In an instant, you are the only one left. I hope the author can stand up and think about the update speed, okay?

Shi Xiangyun is not so exaggerated. Her innocent character cannot be cultivated through such harsh treatment. The probability of her being born is too low. This matter was originally said by Xue Baochai himself, and it happened after Xiren asked Shi Xiangyun to make something for Jia Baoyu. It is difficult to say that this was not a knock on Xiren. Moreover, Shi Xiangyun once told Lin Daiyu that if he wanted to summon a boatman to row a boat in the middle of the night, he could row a boat. Besides, take a closer look at Shi Xiangyun's social circle. She often meets the concubine of Nan'an and the like. Sanchun and Lin Daiyu have always stayed in the Jia Mansion. Everyone should have the ring that Shi Xiangyun gave him. When I came to Jia's house as a guest, I brought many wives and maids with me. Being taken back to the Shi's Mansion and crying was more like a little girl going home to do her homework and having no friends to play with. Working as a female worker until midnight, I felt that she was secretly reminding Shi Xiangyun not to make things for Jia Baoyu, so Xiren was really cheating. , Not to mention how many wronged descriptions were given by Cao Gong, the Shifu did not treat Shi Xiangyun badly in his training. The marriage was also decided well in advance. Don't say that this is done by the official matchmaker, the elders must have taken a good look first. You just look at Sichun's ghost marriage. She doesn't treat her like a real daughter. She just goes out and laughs to death. Yuanchun just goes to gamble and Tanchun makes political sacrifices. Yingchun and her father go to exchange money. There may be some factors that want to marry a military general, but it is very suspicious to bring money into the marriage, so I still tend to think that Jia She just wants to exchange money. After all, it is in his private account. , Xichun, that will be discussed later. . In reality, it was difficult for women in ancient society to survive without marrying. Marrying into a good family is the guarantee of life for the next few decades. The Jia family is completely messy and not like the daughter of a public family at all.

It only took 2 days after I wrote more than 80 pieces... I saw that she was still a 10-year-old child before the update was discontinued. She only accepted 2 maids in 12, and she only changed the title of Lin Daiyu to Xiaobaizi. As a result, the whole article was Xiaobaize.

Shennong does not recommend 😐😐

I'm convinced. It's been more than a month since I competed with the princes. I finally finished pretending and went to the palace to see the princess, but I haven't seen her yet. The next two or three chapters are all kinds of messy things. I can write half a chapter with a little eunuch walking, Li Shangyi has to write more than half a chapter, and then Jia Zheng's office, who is riding a horse, also writes half a chapter. What on earth do you think? I am slow to write and write about irrelevant things. Who wants to read these? Then the princess didn't know whether she had seen her, but she suddenly jumped to the Xue family again. In another two or three chapters, inexplicably, the protagonist went back directly. It was simply outrageous. Not only was it not fun, it was also very anxious and even frustrating to watch. The girls couldn't even appear once every half a month, because it takes more than a month to write about one day in the book. I really couldn't follow it anymore. That's it. That's why.

There are some things to watch before it is released, but the rest is purely about picking up girls mixed with the main plot, one comes out in the east and the other comes out in the west, and the content is superficial.

It's one thing to be cautious, but it's another thing to be slavish and slavish from the bottom of your heart.

The entire VIP chapter has a low word count. Don't look too ugly when you eat

The author's writing style is good and I can read it, but firstly, the writing is too trivial and secondly, the protagonist is a bit licky and makes me feel uncomfortable. The Red Mansion is too limited. If you adjust it, you can write historical articles. It should be very good.

The protagonist shows a 10-year-old child a lustful demon who can't sit still after a year.