
Dou Po: Parallel World, Genius Xiao Yan
斗破:平行世界,天才萧炎
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- Ongoing
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- 178k Words
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Regarding Xiao Yan's attitude towards people in the original work
Several book friends have asked a question these days. In the original book, wasn't Xiao Yan very arrogant when his talent had not disappeared? To be honest, I don't know why my first impression seemed to be like this, but when I was writing the book, I read the original work several times and found that it was not like this at all. 1. Xiao Yan is arrogant and domineering, which is not mentioned at all in the original work. Instead, there is a passage saying that Xiao Yan has always been very gentle in his treatment of others. As shown below. There is only one paragraph about Xiao Yan's past publicity, as shown below. Furthermore, Xiao Yan's publicity is measured in a certain way. He won't just show off his skills everywhere. He himself has said that this kind of behavior is **, and there is evidence here, as shown in the picture below. 2. Why did others ignore Xiao Yan after his talent disappeared? The original work states that it was because Xiao Yan chose to make rapid progress in public as a genius, which made others jealous and licked Xiao Yan. After his talent disappeared, they all began to ridicule him to satisfy their own vanity and regain face. As shown below. There are also psychological descriptions similar to those of Xiao Mei and Xiao Ning that I am too lazy to post. They are all like this. I was jealous that Xiao Yan was once stronger than them, and later started to mock Xiao Yan, but did not mention how arrogant Xiao Yan used to be and looked down on them. Summary: Xiao Yan once acted extremely arrogantly. It is a rumor that spread from nowhere and has no basis. He is just not low-key and follows the high-profile path of genius, but he does not say that he looks down on others, bullies others, or how arrogant and domineering he is. Generally speaking, Lao Xiao's character is okay, and there are some shortcomings, but in the online article, it is considered to be generally good. Maybe this rumor was released by fans of San Cut to smear Lao Xiao, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha 😂 ps: The author's energy is limited, and there may be some omissions in so many words and pictures. You are welcome to add any corrections and post them below this post. I will read it carefully.
Xun'er really looks like a reborn supporting actress. I feel like I've figured out Xiao Yan's character well in advance. If she didn't have the life-and-death experiences of Little Medical Fairy and Xiao Yan, she would be the heroine.
Introduction to the cover of the work
Let me share the meaning of this cover. It seems very abstract hahahahaha. Two little people, I deliberately drew the limbs to be simple, so that they are "fire" and "fire", which form the word "yan", which represents Xiao Yan. Then one holds the Fire Lotus in his left hand, and the other holds the Xuanzhong Ruler in his right hand. These are Xiao Yan's two major vocations, and they are quite representative. (Please ignore the author's abstract painting skills) If you have any comments or suggestions, you can post them under this post, and the author will take a serious look at them.
If you don't have the ability to describe the heroine's original charm and charm, you might as well not write it. Forcibly writing it will give people the impression that she is another person with the same name. After all, no one would be satisfied with just looking at a name, right? If you just want porn, it's better to go to the Yin Sect. You can't do it here at all.
There is a high probability of Yin Yang Yan in Yunlan Sect's Gate of Life and Death. You can go and see it
Xiao Yan: The teacher was kidnapped by the Soul Palace, his father was kidnapped by the Soul Clan, Cailin needs seventh-grade elixirs within two years, the eldest brother is disabled, the second brother must break through the Dou Huang within 10 years or he will die, the little medical fairy will have a poisonous body that breaks out in two years, and he has demon poison spots on his body, which needs Dou Zun or strange fire to resolve, Xun'er is still waiting for me in the ancient tribe, do you still think it is a cool article? I just feel like it's such a huge burden
Why is the other one also a eunuch?
I have to say, it is indeed a good grass, come on
Those who fight enter the inner courtyard. Aren't all the inner courtyards full of fighting masters or great fighting masters? It took me a few months to catch up with my strength.
Some suggestions for authors
It feels too watery, why not just jump for a while And is the author obsessed with genius and keeping the protagonist's age down? Wouldn't it be okay to directly write about the male protagonist and Xun'er cultivating in the academy until they are thirteen or fourteen years old, and then write some interactive plots between the male and female protagonists to cultivate their relationship, and then directly go out to travel the mainland after collecting the alien fire? The most important thing now is that the male protagonist is too young, and the female protagonist's emotional line is not very good. In my opinion, at least one third of the plot must be used to make up for the lack of emotional line.
Author, what you wrote is not a genius, it feels like it is not as good as the original work
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Hang out with the Soul Palace and survive nine meals in three days.
The update is stable, feel free to check it out.
Just like the title, you can rest assured to read it. I am writing every day and have saved manuscripts. It is updated regularly at 8 o'clock every morning to ensure a stable starting point of 4,000.
Yes, yes, look at Xiao Yan from another perspective and look forward to his growth
The biggest scourge of the Xiao Clan is Xiao Xuan and the Hun Clan. Xiao Xuan drained Dou Emperor's blood to attack Dou Emperor, and the Hun Clan exterminated the Xiao Clan. In the end, the Hun Clan is the one who directly robbed the family. Without the protection of the Ancient Clan, it wouldn't be difficult for the Soul Clan + the Soul Palace to search for a remaining Xiao family across the continent, right? Ancient Emperor Jade can only be a trouble to the Xiao family. In addition, if anyone thinks that the ancient clan should accept the declining Xiao family and live in the ancient world, then just pretend that I didn't say so.
About the heroine
There is no need to say more about these three people. As for the others, Qinglin Ziyan and Yunyun Nalan Yanran are worth doing. I personally prefer to accept all four of them. The little maid and snack food are very good. Yun Yun is also a big regret. If there is no Yunlan Sect, they may not be able to be together. Nalan Yanran blames the description in the original work for being too shabby, and there is also the matter of breaking off the engagement. Even if Xiao Yan forgives, the relationship can only stop as friends. This plot does not exist in this book, so falling in love is OK. As for the unpopular Fenyan Valley one (let's just puss this one, it's too cold), Feng Qing'er and Yao Ling, they can be included, depending on whether the author wants to (the two of them can just go to Bushi). As for the emotional line, Xun'er will be fine as long as it flows according to the original work, and there is no need to change it too much. The same goes for Cai Lin. Anyway, we have to find the strange fire. Then we can optimize the plot. As for the Little Medical Fairy, the original book is about going to experience it, but with Xiao Yan's strength, you have no reason to go there, so you can have a different fire (but it's for the different fire 😡) I forgot about Qinglin, but according to the original work, we can also talk about it, Zi Yan... I doubt whether she has the ability to fall in love with this kind of dumb, will she bully fools too much? Yun Yun can be inserted into the plot of the Little Doctor Fairy, and then use classic aphrodisiacs (provided that Xiao Yan is old enough, too young would be too weird, a small horse pulling a big cart?) Nalan Yanran, follow the plot of the original work, and the experience of breaking off the engagement is enough to fall in love. After all, this family is rebelling against an arranged marriage. Only you can conquer others with your personality charm and arrange it. Since Feng Qing'er and Yao Ling are both Star Fury reserve members, they can just follow the training requirements. Finally, if you want to advance the love line, Xiao Yan must be old enough, at least 15 years old. This is only reasonable. Otherwise, if a 12-year-old Guawazi does this, are you prepared to be reported and banned?
Well, it's a subject I've always wanted to see