LOL: Loan Championship Starts with the Commentator Cup

The image of the girl is pretty solid, but the image of the key protagonist is not very good. It made me confused. I don't know what advantages the protagonist has to attract girls. I can't even remember the protagonist after watching it. . This situation has happened to the female protagonists in mindless harem or stud novels before. This is the first time it has happened to the male protagonist, and he is quite speechless. . .

I missed the point. I'm not here to watch the game. I want to watch the live broadcast and daily life. Yes, it's the "daily" life you think of. I'm tired of watching competitions and winning championships. It's hard to write new ideas. You have to open up a new track.

What does it mean to delete a comment? Whether the protagonist goes or not, edg wins the championship with a score of 3:2. What is the role of the protagonist?

Nowadays, if e-sports articles want to get ahead, they have to write about it. If you don't write about it, it will definitely not work. Do more daily work, explain the female host to the female, right? Do it more.

I can see that this book is not an e-sports article, it is purely a fan. The worst thing to say is that it is the author's self-pleasure article The timeline can be messed up (where did the Laotou Cup come from in s11, doinb has not retired yet), the rules can be spelled out (the global BP was only available last year, you can directly settle in the Laotou Cup, 6), and the plot is written wherever I think ( rng fed me a lot💩, and then went to edg. Why can't you, the male protagonist edg, win the championship? What's the point of writing this? What's more, you're an assistant coach) Other jokes are also used randomly. They say they are popular science, but the word count is not mentioned. To be honest, the explanation cup at the beginning is very good, but why is it so awkward when it is put on the shelf? This book has already written 600,000 words. The few female characters written at the beginning are just enough for the heroine (this is also compared to the female supporting role. In fact, it will not be much after the whole book is released). If you don't want to have a harem, it is not impossible to have a single female protagonist, but at least write more? I don't insist on updating. After all, it's good to have this word count for a part-time job, but let's change the idea. At least we have the timeline straightened out? Purely self-motivated writing won't go very far. How many great writers have stepped on the wrong side of things, let alone you?

Dude, I was tricked by your label, and now there is only one Tazi sister. You might as well not add a label.

When I first saw so many girls, I thought they were too many, but I didn't expect them to be singles 🥱

Very good, there are so many girls in the role card. I have to chase up and down.

It's nice, but too little. 🙂

Go to rng and this paragraph you wrote looks like 💩

Update quickly, put it on the shelves as soon as possible 🤓

Mature authors must learn to post their own pictures. I haven't paid attention to the competition for a long time. Except Yu Shuangrita, I don't know anyone else.

The author has thought about the proportion of daily life and games. I think no matter which side has a greater proportion, there will be a problem of boredom, because everyone has the type they want to watch. For example, I really like to watch the male protagonist playing on the court, and the female protagonist giving commentary during the game or post-match interviews. , There is an article next door like this. I really liked reading it at first, but the author listened to other people's opinions and started to write pornographic articles on a daily basis. There was about 20% of the competition left and he was persuaded to quit. So the author can refer to the suggestions but don't be too biased.

Old Tou Cup>Commentary Cup, the strongest players in the Old Tou Cup, Sapphire and the middle lane, can't go to lpl🙂

Dear readers: As a new member, my wish is to become an old member. New author and new book, I also hope that all readers will support me greatly. I hope you will collect it and read it more. Tuesday's follow-up reading is an indicator of new book recommendation. Only with recommendation positions can new books survive in many bookstores. For those of you who think this book can still be read, even if you want to keep reading, please scroll to the last page and stay for 30 seconds before turning to the last page. Thank you dear readers! ... The author said casually: I know very well that reading every day and reading continuously in one breath are completely different experiences. But since it is a new book by a newcomer, the recommendation slot in the new book issue is the only exposure, so it can only update 2 chapters a day, totaling 4,000 words. The author promises a minimum of 8,000 words after it is published. If the more people support it, the author will risk his life to write more!

Let's talk about the conclusion first. The book "Tiger Head 🐯 Snake 🐍 Wave 🌊 Tail". At the beginning, it was really exciting to take the girl in the car and the hero's "return" to the real-life setting. However, after the Commentary Cup, the protagonist went to the World Championship, where he was still a temporary coach and lost his rhythm. There are almost no daily scenes. It was only when I reached the Old Man Cup that I started to improve again. But the daily scenes are only embellishments. The well-portrayed Rita is completely in a hidden state. I feel a little confused when I return to LPL after reaching the latest chapter. Obviously they are together with the heroine, but the decisions they make are not discussed with each other. Are you here to live together? It doesn't look like the description. … Finally, let's talk about my situation. I only played Udyr in 2012-2013, and I have almost never touched it since. … So, I really can't see clearly what the competition is about. Based on the previous part of your content, I thought that was the case. … The protagonist participates in various non-official content (it was the commentary cup at the beginning) →Bringing girls →Then, as a personal commentator, he took Marco to live broadcast in Iceland, and the four of them lived together in a villa. →Start from the Internet cafe league to win the S game (or start from the Internet cafe, hold various informal leagues, and finally end with the "Sister Cup"). … …It feels a bit visual. ... Haha, "The Master"? ? ? … As far as my personal feeling is concerned, the e-sports article you write "with life" is better than writing about urban life "with e-sports", which is the part where you write about the commentary cup. … …I was attracted by the elements of Goldfinger and the daily life of taking care of a girl. As a result, you didn't write anymore and went to write about the competition. It was very sad. … Take a cup with your sister. The number of girls varies, but the calculation of winning points is the number of girls in the winning team minus the number of girls in the losing team. The rest is almost the same as the main game. … There are four girls, and there is also an Internet cafe in Rita, but it is not a copycat of "The Master" and then written as an "urban life with e-sports elements" article, which is a bit disappointing. … If you, the author, want to write in the future, remember to ask me to read it. I really like it. … Well, that's it.

It's almost 500,000 words, and you can only finish one? Is the supporting character just hanging on to fool people?

The writing was good before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, I couldn't control the plot and wrote it. And the author didn't grasp the buying point. The current market of LOL literature has to be a little meaty. The main reason is that it has to be separated between several female protagonists. The previous portrayal was very good. After it was put on the shelves, it gradually became dull and the readability decreased. There was a book about e-sports succubus before. The writing was good but it was blocked. Maybe the author is also worried about this~

Nowadays, you have to bring some meat to the lol articles. Who would read if they are purely about lol? Just take two or three chapters of those competitions and things with you. For the rest, you have to show off, you have to bring girls, and interact more with the audience.

You don't know how disgusting Sister Bu is, right? The boss is still a scumbag.

Can you do it faster? How long did it take to write a final? It's just one chapter in one day.

Faster, faster, more, how can you sleep at your age?

There is a problem with Chapter 82. Chapter 79 is 2021 and should not be 2024. The timeline of Chapter 82 is before the start of S11. At that time, the past events in Iceland hadn't happened yet, and in Chapter 82, there was internal strife in Iceland.