Building Shurima from Naruto

Personally, I feel that the writing is okay The Third Ninja War has too many classic plots, and it would not be good if I didn't write it. If I did, the main plot in the early stage would be a little unclear. It depends on whether he pulls it back or not. If he pulls it back, it's still very good.

Chakra? ? ? Even though you are Shurima, you still need to learn chakra. Chakra cannot defeat Otsutsuki.

I am a male, 160cm tall and 130kg in weight. I am slightly fat. I like to travel and explore nature. My current monthly income is about 2,000. I am preparing to take the public exam because I am a face control person. I want to find a girl who is 18cm tall, fair-skinned and good-looking. She should at least look similar to Zhang Ruonan. She should have a house and a car, and a monthly income of more than 60,000 yuan. She should be gentle and considerate, and can take good care of mine. And I must respect men, do not speak pornographically, and do not bother those who are ugly.

The first chapter made me incontinent, it was terrifying

I can't understand it at all. From the very beginning, I just wanted to help others get revenge and complete their tasks. No, other people's hatred has nothing to do with you. If you don't build your own country, you can help others with their mission.

Except for the background story setting where he brags that Aatrox can kill Ornn, the rest is basically the performance of stacked Ornn breaking the continent, so that he can have a continent level. You can say that his defense power is as good as what the soul said. His defense is star level, and his attack power is not that high, so it is purely malicious. It's just awesome This is a high-level performance of fire. Don't be too bragging and belittling. Except for the Dragon King and Void and the skin stories, currently the pilots are not much superior to Naruto

Are you writing about Azir? He doesn't feel like the most powerful ascended person in the empire at all.

After reading nine chapters, I felt like it was a mess. It was obvious that Youying had great strength, but he started to say that he was the emperor, then he said that he was a Senju, and then he said that he was Danzo's subordinate, and his strength dropped again and again.

After reading a few chapters, I thought it was a fellow Azir who, after waking up from his slumber, controls the Kingdom of Wind behind the scenes or openly, and then competes with the five major kingdoms for the world? Unexpectedly, the protagonist is like a holy mother, helping people everywhere And the revenge mission is a bit ridiculous. In the twisted world of Naruto, as long as you kill someone, you will be killed. There is no right or wrong. For example, in the two countries of wind and fire, wind has hatred for fire, but fire only protects the home, can it be wrong? A lot of people died in the Fire Nation. This kind of thing is the hardest to comment on.

Book club group 586983306, the pink author joins the group to ask for torture

There are almost no people who have started writing Tsar. I hope the author can continue to persevere. Come on

The protagonist's sense of presence is too low. He doesn't feel the power of the Ascended Ones' pairing nor the absolute power of the Emperor.

There is a big problem when I see Chapter 44. The protagonist is too marginalized. They are all group portraits from different countries' perspectives. It feels too detailed, which makes me feel happy but not happy at the same time.

How many chapters have you read? I saw Chapter 9! Yo-yo first! Goodbye everyone (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)

Noodles married peanut oil, gave birth to a child, was very rebellious, and got a curly perm. Noodles and peanut oil were so angry that they beat the child. "You want to piss us off to death. Look, we have good noodles and good oil, but you are the only one with curls. Do you want to be a little yellow hair?" The child was extremely wronged. "But I am just instant noodles." ... ... ... Noodles and peanut oil looked at each other, but peanut oil was still clever and gave instant noodles a novel "Super Limit High Martial Arts". After reading it, instant noodles cried even harder. "Kill the noodles, they eat instant noodles!"