Douluo: My Martial Spirit Is Xiao Yan

In the first chapter, he was persuaded to retreat. Is that something worthy of the master of the Qibao Glazed Sect? It would be easier to say that someone else gave him close instructions.

Children, run, this book is not food and grass, I repeat, this book is not food and grass, this Shennong died of poison in the first chapter 💀💀💀

Brothers, just read this book for fun.

If your parents sacrificed their lives for the country, will someone want to deprive you of your family? But in any normal society, this wouldn't happen, right?

After reading one chapter, I felt like vomiting, and I was force-fed by the author💩💩💩💩

Let me show everyone what you wrote

Can the author explain why the protagonist's martial spirit is a wooden sword? All I can think of is the reason for Lao Wang next door.

This is incredible. The author is so weird. I like Ning Rongrong. It's so annoying.

A bunch of brothers, a pure bunch

I was persuaded to quit after the first chapter. I endured my nausea and read a few more chapters, but I couldn't see any advantages of the time traveler at all. . .

That's fine, there's a book called Douluo Binghuang or something like that. That's really rubbish. You have to subscribe to comment. You can't even comment. You're just a licker.

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This Xiao Yan is not written like Xiao Yan, and he also forcibly weakens Xiao Yan, and how does Xiao Yan know about the Ice and Fire Eyes?

The description in Chapter 1 at the beginning does not look like a time traveler at all, but instead resembles a humanoid creature whose head was hit by a fetal safety injection.

Except that I didn't grasp the middle well at the beginning, it was okay.

It feels pretty good from behind. The first chapter feels like it really doesn't work. It would be okay if it could be written that the main character is affected by his physical age and has a brain problem. Except for the beginning, I feel pretty good about the rest.

It is indeed a bright spot from a creative perspective. Currently, we are still focusing on the level of soul power to upgrade monsters. All that remains is to see when the training system will be updated. After all, the foreshadowing has already been laid.

Come on, author, the author is capable, but he has a big appetite and wants to eat everything. I feel like this book is a failure. Similar to my previous point of view, the author's strength is the characterization of characters and psychological descriptions. The setting does not lie in too much, but in the essence. I suggest the author write more about human nature, don't be afraid to set moral standards, and bring out your strengths. It will still be a good work. Since the original work was written like that, there are a lot of die-hard fans. As new young people who grew up under the red flag, we can definitely write better than the original author. Come on, I look forward to your next work.

The timeline and location are too confusing. The two eyes of ice and fire are in the Star Forest? Dugu Bo dares to enclose territory deep in the Star Dou Forest? Does the protagonist know Xiao Yan? Alchemist + Yandi + Flame Devouring Wave Ruler + Suction Palm and Blowing Palm, you can't even guess this?

Isn't it just a matter of brains to write a book? It's a big mess

I saw it from Kuaishou's tweets. Kuaishou has been blocked and I can't comment. I can only comment in the novel comment area. I can only say it is extremely poisonous.