Twin Cities: Rubbing the Mecha by Hand, the Earth Explodes into the Sky

Why don't you just add a transition? How about rewriting the listing part?

The writing is good, and the writing style is comfortable to read. I have already voted for the monthly vote, and I look forward to seeing more updates soon.

No, it's all on the shelves and it's still in the process. Really, I've been working on settings and backgrounds, parallel timelines and so on. Looking at the whole process, I just got a power armor that's a bit useful, but nothing else. You said you're developing, but you can't see any development, and you can't see the troops. The protagonist is always doing this and that, and as a result, you can't see any changes in yourself. Don't you want to build an arsenal? What about aircraft cannons? What about individual weapons? What about the battleship? I want to see technology crushing me, not every family. Where are the mechas? Is there any use in just focusing on the source plan? The people who are on horseback are pursuing development with the aim of winning by quantity and using technology to fight the quality war. Are they still engaged in scientific research and development because they are petty?

It feels like 2 is completely kidnapped by political correctness. None of the problems raised by 1 are solved. They use deus ex machina to solve everything, making all the heroes in the Twin Cities look like clowns.

It must have been cut. Before it was put on the shelves, I told you that the writing was very messy. I suggested one plot after another, but it ended up all mixed together. The author of Ta Ma also deleted my comments and banned me for saying that I would write a book that would produce results, and then I would evaluate his Four Thousand True Pursuits. I don't want to say more. I originally ordered half of it, but then I saw his comments and I was not sure. I will keep it at the top and see how far you can go.

Is there a Kingdom Machine God?

It seems okay so far, but the author pays attention to the extraordinary world, especially the place where one can change the world by oneself. It is unrealistic to promote republic and equality. Changes must be based on the actual situation.

I didn't expect the rankings to be so controversial, so let's explain some of the more controversial heroes in detail (only ranking the hero units of lol and lor). Offside: No need to say more. T0——The Absolute Ceiling of Runeterra Zoe merged with the Twilight Protoss and put an asteroid belt necklace on the Dragon King, and there was no problem in exploding the stars. World Rune created Rune Land, and a cornerstone destroyed a small continent, which was comparable to or even stronger than the top demigod bear. Victor's Battle of Two Cities represents the multiverse (the ranking should actually be higher, but the combat effectiveness is unknown). T0.5——The first level under the peak demigod. Bear's strength has almost recovered, and he recently fought against Orn Hearth for the second time in the timeline. The top ten demons have combat power comparable to the top demigods Belvis is a void cancer that swallowed up a city. Big Eye is the oldest and wisest creation of the void. The top ascendant of Xerath, according to the original background text, it is speculated that the Tsar can be evenly matched with him. T1——Ascension level, a level beyond which ordinary humans cannot intervene. Needless to say the previous ones, the official text of Dog Dagger has designated him as the strongest dark descendant. The power of the Ruined King comes from ancient artifacts and world runes. Atreus stacked up Sword Demon, and the designer claimed that Tetsuo vs. Sword Demon was equivalent to Batman vs. Superman. The angel sisters teamed up to defeat the Sword Demon, but they couldn't defeat him alone. Karma is the will of Ionia and can activate the native power of Ionia to seal Syndra. Nanny's astral spirit body is downgraded and her strength is greatly reduced, and her physical body will be broken by wild wolves. Red Kai destroyed the Juggernaut's door (lor plot, it should be the if line, the official Lan Kai follow-up plot has more) T1.5 - An echelon that masters powerful magic, or has a relatively impressive record. The black dragon killed Bakai (the product of failed ascension). Feng Nu loses her divine power (theoretically it should be lower). Big Tou owns the Hex Tyrannosaurus mecha. Qian Jue is pure bull-headed horse-faced, only for humans who believe in him. Galio competes with Sion (lor). The enchantress and vampire have a 50-50 chance. A weapon master can only lead an elite team to kill a lone ascendant (personal strength is questionable). Other protoss and human body designers are not as good as Atreus. Ordinary demons are far less powerful than the top ten demons. The little fire dragon has a mother (the strongest dragon clan). The Fire Man is a walking world rune fragment. The encounter between a grasshopper and a bigmouth can have extremely serious consequences. T2 - Very powerful, but glass cannon (yes, I'm talking about you Ryze). Ryze killed the Eye of the Void at the upper limit, was stabbed by a bandit at the lower limit, exhausted his mana in a battle with a human mage who couldn't defeat the troll, and barely managed to save his life at the hands of the fire man. Swain may not be able to fully control Ramo's power (the Peerless General skin is an if plot in which Swain is controlled by the devil). Illaoi is theoretically stronger, and Naga Kapoulos is described as the strongest demigod in the lor game (not necessarily the thimble). Theoretically, Thresh should be higher (it absorbs part of the power of the Ruined King and can control the black mist), but in view of the hip-drawing performance and the lack of follow-up CG, it is temporarily ranked here. Sona has an ancient artifact. Jin's background description for Biao Hui is that he is a master of qigong and is proficient in sword and martial arts. He can easily trick Shen and Jie into joining forces and trick Camille to get out of trouble without getting hurt. Lan Kai and Juggernaut are evenly matched. Mages are basically talented players. T3 - Master some magic, or rely on magic equipment, but it will not exceed the peak of human martial arts. The werewolf's recovery power is unparalleled. The shimmer strengthening speed can be equal to that of flash, which is definitely better than Vastaya, which does not have any strong special magic. Barbarian Immortality is on the next level, Wan Hao has weak recovery power but deliberately punches. EZ cannot fully utilize the power of the Ascended Gauntlet. Kassadin is an artifact, and the Blade of the Underworld is matched with EZ. T4——The pinnacle of mortals, far stronger than ordinary humans. There should be no doubt. God King Zhao is the pinnacle of mankind. He can injure or kill hundreds of Demacia soldiers by himself, and can capture the king alive under the nose of the Dauntless Vanguard. Even the official government must make Xin Zhao offline, otherwise the Silas Mage Rebellion will not be able to advance. T5 - The combat ability is limited compared to ordinary people, and it is easy to overturn. Neither of them knows magic, but Lucian, the only one who knows magic, has a special attack on the black mist.

The sense of immersion provided by this book is too poor, especially after it was put on the shelves, all the messy TVs and mobile phones came out at once. The characters in the plot had no doubts about how the protagonist invented so many things. The author himself did not give the protagonist a reasonable explanation for these abilities. In addition, the protagonist's behavior as a time traveler does not hide his identity. When he sees a familiar character, he directly posts it There are no spoilers, and the spoiled characters have little tempers and do not believe what the protagonist says. Novels that rely solely on the reader's imagination are indeed uncommon. The climax before the release of the novel, the Gray Lady, did not do anything at all. She did not directly change from a mastermind secretly controlling the twin cities to a stupid young man. She easily brainwashed a character who was at least on the same level as Nosei. It looks like there is Mondo waiting later. . . It doesn't matter if there are some minor flaws before it goes on the shelves. The problem is that the holes are still not filled after it goes on the shelves? How many people can be retained by doing this? There's no sense of immersion at all, so I'll just read it for a fresh look. How long will this book last after it's released?

No? With the runes on you, aren't you afraid that Old Man Zi will blow you up?

Twin Cities? 2 I'm too lazy to finish it. They are not the values ​​of normal people. What I mean by normal people is the values ​​of people in Shuangcheng. It feels very politically correct.

To be honest, I can't get used to the style of the anime Battle of Two Cities. Give me a 3D one, like a Chinese comic, or a two-dimensional animation, like an oil painting. I really can't get used to it. I can only say that I am a Westerner.

Ryze and Bright Sentinel shouldn't appear. If you do this, the Twin Cities Line will be over, and there's nothing to write about.

I started deleting comments and covering my mouth 🙂

Is this a new book? I remember watching it on Qidian before. The beginning is exactly the same. I remember that the protagonist was with the policewoman later on. There was also a scene where the policewoman's parents and some officials were stunned by the gas, and then the protagonist wore a mecha to save people.

After these chapters were published, it felt difficult to finish them as soon as I wrote them.

What's wrong with the latest two chapters? There are a lot of things to write about in the Twin Cities, and the protagonist is becoming more and more invincible. Since it is enlightenment, it is enlightenment slowly. Why does it give people the feeling that everything is missing? It will be on the shelves soon. How will you finish it? This book has tens of thousands of subscriptions, so be careful

It's a pity that the Twin Cities are set to be Victor's experimental ground after he becomes a god. No matter how hard the protagonist struggles, he can't resist the power of the deified Victor to control time.

What is the definition of military? A regular armed organization that serves political purposes of a country or political group. It is the main component of state power, an armed group that performs political tasks, and the main violent tool for resisting or committing aggression externally and consolidating political power internally. The main character who relies on violence to maintain his political power and who can plow the entire twin city from three floors to the third floor actually needs to find ways to please and satisfy the needs of various members of parliament before he can join the parliament? Did I enter a female channel by mistake? America, who has just killed the Soviet revisionists, needs to humbly request to join the United Nations General Assembly? Don't understand.

I haven't read such an eye-catching book in a long time.

The seedlings in the new book period need to be cared for. I beg all readers to read it. Tuesday is especially critical, as it will directly affect the subsequent performance of the book! Because the editor said that too many updates before it goes on the shelves will affect exposure and recommendations, so we can only update two chapters a day, but we will definitely update it after it goes on the shelves! Kneel down and thank you!

There are only a few Twin Cities fanfics left that are being updated, and I have the impression that this one is the first one to hit the shelves. Is the Alliance Universe so popular?😭

It's well written, even someone like me who doesn't play games can read it, but it's just a little lacking.

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Very well written.