Peninsula: Starting from My Childhood Girlfriend

Celebrating my first time writing a book and reading it for more than ten years, I finally published it I hope someone will read it and leave a message

The best little girlfriend, the irreplaceable captain in the eyes of buddy

Let me tell you, the next update will be around 7:40 pm Not interrupted, not interrupted I'm afraid that everyone will read it and forget about this book without updating😭 Although I don't know if anyone will check to see the update (I personally am the kind of person who will check it out as soon as the update time comes, so... I hope everyone can support it. If you have any comments, you can send them, and I will answer them one by one. Thank you again, if someone reads my book.

Wari Good, finally found a book of the same type as Asteroids! Chase to death! ! !

If Liu's house hadn't collapsed. I guess the entire starting point is her writing. . . How many houses can collapse?

Can the author and heroine add Bae Joo-hyun and Minatozaki Sasha?

Everyone

I feel like there is too much content in the opening men's team draft. This is a men's video.

I like these pictures, they look so good

When the author looks at this face, he must give more pictures

I feel like it's very well written. Don't give up. Recently, it feels even less and slower. I feel like I'm becoming a eunuch. Keep at it.

I deleted most of it and reviewed it. I will modify it tomorrow

It didn't pass the review and I changed it several times I'll change it again tomorrow. If it still doesn't pass, I'll post it in the group.

I found this book later. How should I put it? It is the first time for the author to write a book and the writing is understandable even for a young person. However, some details and logic need to be strengthened, and the choice of heroine is very important. It is very important. Choosing the right heroine in entertainment novels is the beginning of success. The author is a power generation for love. At the beginning, he writes about his favorite fried relatives, plus The writing style that is not very good should have dissuaded some people. This kind of writing is best written with high traffic and topicality, and you have to pay attention to those old-fashioned female protagonists who are bad at writing. Nowadays, the second generation of heroine hymns have basically been eliminated. There are very few people writing them. They are all the world of the fourth and fifth generations. In the same way, the world of Huayu 85 flowers is outdated, and now it is the world of 95 flowers.

Come on. Update soon. The more you write later, the better it gets. Don't imitate sweet potato water. The timeline is just a bit tight. More than 200 chapters only a few months ago. Will you add some European and American catwalk shows or copy some songs in the future? Improve the lower B cell

I have just finished reading this book in its entirety recently. It is a book that I have supported from the very beginning. However, I was too busy at the end so I just stopped reading it. Catching bugs and grammatical issues in the seedling stage became better and smoother later on. It is a pity that the ending was rather hasty, and the emotional descriptions were more comfortable and delicate to read. After finishing Huayu, I hope to read another longer and more complete Korean entertainment.

Fully booked Anyway, if you can keep reading, it is of a good standard. I don't know why the results are not very good But I did persuade a lot of people to quit at the beginning. In fact, if you stick to it, you will find that it is pretty good.

The writing is very good, but from the pacing, I feel that it is not finished. There may be other reasons for the ending. In fact, I feel that the plot has just begun. The limited group has not been disbanded. There is a lot to write about in terms of music and film and television solo projects, and there are several emotional lines that have not yet been released. In short, I hope the author's next one will be better.

Apart from the weird writing at the beginning, it's really pretty at the end.