Naruto: Red Blood

This protagonist is too cheap. He talks and behaves like a child. He pretends that everyone is drunk and I am sober. But when he goes to the battlefield, it is revealed that he is nothing. He is in a daze on the battlefield. It takes a long time to develop and fight. The whole story is not satisfying. Just watch it. Bye bye.

It's just my personal opinion. First of all, as a fan, the simplest and most reasonable way to write it is to change the skin. Just like the game, the basic frame does not move. Changing the skin is also the special effect of the skill, right? The essence has not changed. Then give yourself a target. That is, what Mingpai wants to do and what he wants to change. Let's talk about Naruto's common ones. They are physical arts, sword arts, throwing, and three body arts. The most mainland version. Pig-footed Sarutobi, his family has no shortage of skills. Right. There are basically 5 attributes of spells. All. The end is where your story ends. It's the fourth battle, still in the late stage. They all have different results. If I were writing about Otsutsuki, I would practice more physical skills and sword skills. There is nothing to say, and add sage mode. It would be different if I didn't write about the later period. You can use several common ninjutsu to improve your own. Basically just my personal opinion. It would be great if you could see it. 65 To 70 points at most.

It looks pretty good, but it feels a little awkward for some reason.

Well, what's going on with this book! There are no messages. . Please tell me what the problem is.