Military Camp: Failed Students Become Officers

See the first four chapters. The advantage is that it looks very real, there is no awkward plot with simplistic or brainless ideas, and it is very smooth and not embarrassing to watch. This is great. The shortcoming is that it is too realistic, especially in the first chapter where the strength of the college entrance examination is very detailed. I, who has not yet taken the college entrance examination, felt like Fan Jin before the college entrance examination. But overall, it is still very good. Come on, author, and look forward to the follow-up!

This book is not bad, but there is a problem in it. Two new trainees who are not new recruits go to the army by themselves? No cadres to lead the troops? No unified departure for the area? The government didn't organize a farewell for such an honorable thing as being a soldier? And the most outrageous thing is that the recruiter is waiting for someone at the station? Even if it is not a unified special train, there is not even a special carriage? So unorganized and undisciplined? What is the logic of this?

Generally I can't read 20,000 words. There is a question in the first chapter. If you failed in the college entrance examination, you have to give an explanation. The cause, process and result of writing a novel, time, place and characters. Unless you want to pave the way for the future and exchange this failure for a golden finger or something, but this doesn't make sense. At least explain the reason in one sentence. The first line is 500 and up, but he got a score of 440, which is quite a difference. If it doesn't make sense logically, the characters won't stand up. This thing must fit the character's personality. If the protagonist is calm and composed, then he will not be nervous in the exam. They are all related. The second thing is that there is currently no golden finger. Your writing is too real and no one will read it. Everyone does like military themes, but it's fun. Even if it's slightly refreshing. The shortest way to achieve success in the army is through military skills. Anyone who has been a soldier knows that practicing basic subjects makes a difference, but compared with those talented monsters participating in the competition, ordinary people have no advantage. It's hard to get ahead. The protagonist's intelligence is currently close to average, but no other advantages are apparent. The word count is too few. It's a lot of nonsense. If you think it's useful, just think about it. If it's not, just delete the comment.

I really like military themes, so please give it a thumbs up to the author! Already invested! There are no recommendation tickets today! Will definitely make it up tomorrow!

I have been a pla, but to be honest, I am tired of reading novels about the army. I have read so many military novels and there are very few about armed police. I have only read three of them which are quite good, but they basically end with nearly 400 chapters. If you want to write about armed police maneuvers, it would be good to write more novels about armed police. 😁

You definitely have to go to a military academy. If you don't go to a military academy, you definitely won't be able to do it.

There is a book called "I asked you to repeat your senior year of high school, did you miss out on entering the military academy?" The author is Li Jun. Although there are some poisonous points, overall it is not bad. Don't write about the King of Soldiers style, which is no longer possible now. You can make an acceptable side story. After all, the protagonist is, for example, because the reborn physique is far better than ordinary people. A person with a strong memory and a photographic memory can graduate from a military academy and be promoted to captain for some reason, or he can graduate from high school and become a soldier because of his outstanding military achievements and then enter the military academy. In terms of background, the protagonist may come from a well-off family or his parents may have done some small things. Don't write about poor families if you have a little money in business. You can also arrange a heroine with some background in the military school. After she has the ability and background to be a special lieutenant colonel who is difficult to be promoted in the military camp, you can follow the outline of Li Jun's book and write new content yourself. Remove the poisonous points, such as acquiring tens of billions of Bitcoins, or helping classmates make drone drawings, and other mentally retarded plots. Just don't think about making money for a richer family. As long as the writing is not bad, it will definitely become popular. Of course, I let you learn from the outline, not copy the content and plot.

The author personally recommends that if you plan to make the book longer, add a female protagonist. The role could be reduced. I feel that it would not be good for the future protagonist, an officer, to remain unmarried for a long time.

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival

The blood and tears of the past cannot be forgotten, dare not forget! Remember the history and we will strengthen ourselves!

Military people most like to read novels about rising from a soldier to a general step by step. Don't engage in special forces. It's better to command thousands of troops.

Brother, you have to write that you have a wife. If you reach a certain position in the organization and you don't have a family, they won't consider you for promotion.

I am really grateful to so many people who support this book

A new author, writing a book for the first time, please support me! This book is more realistic, so the plot advances slowly. I want to present the most realistic military career to everyone 😁. I hope all readers will support 😄

This kind of book usually has to be written by someone who has served in the military to be authentic, and it can only be photographed but not published, and it has to come up with new ideas. Unlike the Anti-Japanese War book, as long as you have a big enough brain, know how to make trouble, and have decent writing skills, there will always be people reading it.

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Keeping history in mind, we should strengthen ourselves!

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The next series is coming soon. If you want the protagonist to be dull, you still want to have more military training. After it becomes dull, you will go to the political side, and if you want more war, you will go to the military side! Currently there are five squadrons to choose from: Service Support, Duty, Mobile, Special Warfare, and Security You can also leave your comments in the comment area!

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It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!