Slam Dunk: from the King of Northern Hunan to the Nba's Greatest Killer

I don't really like the idea of ​​changing the name of the protagonist. Either you can directly travel to Slam Dunk in real life, and then rely on cheats to gain talents or something. Since it was Hanamichi Sakuragi who had passed through the soul and took up his body and basketball talent, why did he have to change his name? And your reasons are far-fetched

While writing Japanese anime fan fiction, I also dislike Japanese names. If you want to use original Chinese names, why are you wearing Sakuragi?

If I really want to change the name, I might as well make up a character myself. Suddenly I find that the name is wrong and I have no desire to continue reading. What do you think when I change the name of the protagonist?

Delete comment? There aren't many in the first place, so why delete them? You have no hope. In the national competition, you must reduce the dimensionality, otherwise you will go to the NBA and still be a super giant. It's too fake!

The writing is so bad, I can even think of cherry trees turning into forest trees.

If you are really a genius, there are a few people who are 165cm tall and play in the NBA, so let's not talk about super talent.

Isn't it that Sakuragi's talent is on the line, that is, he is a second-in-command? The template is Rodman. In the PF position, Duncan and Nowitzki are terrible with stable and high scoring in the first gear. Malone, Barkley, and Garnett in the second gear also have MVP-level athletic ability? The nba has never lacked physical talent. Sakuragi's shooting, frame attack, footwork, and defensive awareness are not necessarily lottery bets. They are almost the same in the first round, but there is a high probability that they will not be able to practice. Among the above top PFs, none of them were violent in high school or college.

Since you are writing about guanlan fandom, you should write about basketball, and don't act like an old pervert who has never seen the world or women! It's so open-minded. How can people in this generation be as open-minded as you wrote? (We really don't know or understand the Japanese, but there are not many Japanese devils who read.) We are still in the student days of youth, and being hazy and shy is beautiful. What an innocent girl wants you to write is like something. Wouldn't it be better to write more about young people's high spirits and passionate struggles? If I really wanted to watch porn, I wouldn't be reading what you wrote here!

The names of the protagonists should be unified. Instead of Sakura and Lin Mu, it's very speechless.

My personal suggestion is to write less plots about female teachers and female classmates.

The author has seen Slam Dunk Master and why the height and weight data are wrong. In basketball, physical fitness, mainly height and weight, is the most important, and IQ is more important than technique.

It's not easy, 😭😭I saw the Slam Dunk fanfic again. The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work! 👏👏👏I will keep chasing you! 😄👍

Did the author write pornographic books before?

There are still some slam dunk fans like this

Author, I hope you can update more, so that the foreigner next door sees it and thinks I look down on it.

From being seven points behind to being nine points ahead, how did you prevent this process? Your protagonist has strong scoring ability, but you can't defend everything by yourself! It's too concise, and it doesn't water when it should be watered. The writing rhythm is not well controlled.

The author, a veteran, can write more plots about female classmates and teachers.