
Perfect World: Unparalleled Swordsmanship
完美世界之剑道无双
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 834k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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244Chapters
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Shi Hao is annoying, why should he be treated as a piece of food? The strong are respected. If he offends again and again, send him to see the Buddha!
A female channel article, not a male channel female protagonist article
The protagonist is a dog licker and turns to Shi Hao. She has a tendency to join her sister in the harem. Moreover, Shi Hao is also written to be very disgusting. No matter how Shi Hao insults the protagonist, the protagonist chooses to forgive.
Is he a fence-sitter, a little bit of everything in writing, a little bit of transformation, a little bit of Lily? Is there any point in getting married? Men have a little bit of sex, women have a bit of sex, no wonder so many people scolded... Even if you write in one direction, there won't be so many people scolding you. It's just a way of writing that doesn't please both ends.
If others mess with the protagonist, they will be killed. If No. 10 Messes with the protagonist, "he is still a child". And it happens again and again. One day, if the protagonist's sister is raped by No. 10, Should we forget about it? Even if you are bitten by 🐶, you still know how to kick it back.
I was deceived by the editor
How come this is a forced recommendation? It really deceives people and leaves them alone. It's okay to put a book on a female channel on a male channel, but the logic and writing style are not up to standard on a female channel.
The author doesn't pay attention to those sailors and brats with less than two years of reading experience.
As title. I don't understand the classification of male and female videos at all, so I just make random comments here and ruin the book club environment. I don't know how my brain grows. . I haven't read the book yet so I don't know how it is written, but no matter how it is written, I would like to advise the author. The general environment is like this. If the author insists on writing it, he will have a better mentality.
After reading it again, he licked her in disguise and asked her to save people. She could obviously defeat Shi Hao. People said they were going to arrest you, but in the end, she said, "We don't mean any harm..." After being convinced, I also told him the whereabouts of the treasure. I didn't care if my sister was bullied by him. Can't you figure out who the protagonist is, or was this book written just to lick Shi Hao?
Normally, when an author writes a fanfic and befriends the original protagonist or licks the original protagonist, they will focus on describing the advantages of the original protagonist. No matter how bad the situation is, they can still benefit from the original protagonist. This book is the complete opposite. It writes Number Ten as being born. He always wants to capture the protagonist's sister back to the village and takes action. The sister is bullied and he is robbed (attempted), and then he forgets it every time... But everyone else who messes with the protagonist is sharked, and it's not like he can't beat Number Ten. What are you trying to do? Can you imagine that Xie Baoqing robbed Li Yunlong every three days, and then Li Yunlong didn't react at all?
Bengbu, the protagonist of a male video would lick a man like this and then give it to his sister generously? Female videos don't even count, they count as green slave novels 🤭
The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist is inexplicably strong. How can he practice at such a speed? Because the protagonist has a strong swordsmanship! Why can I still leapfrog the challenge in the later stage? Because the protagonist has a strong swordsmanship! Why can the protagonist use his body to breed? Because the protagonist has a strong swordsmanship! Why is the protagonist so good at swordsmanship? I don't know, but the main character has a strong swordsmanship! ! It's better to add a kendo golden finger at the beginning, which increases the speed of kendo practice ten times and the power of kendo a hundred times. How much arm strength does the protagonist have to move the blood realm? Any breakthrough in the Cave Heaven Realm? What is inscribed in the inscription mirror formation? Don't know at all. I read another article. The protagonist is also a master of swordsmanship and becomes powerful in a very short time. But that is because the protagonist has three talents: golden finger (to help deduce restraint techniques), Kunpeng understanding, and sword bones.
A very classic double-standard dog-licking protagonist, with a very subtle female channel flavor. He constantly describes the appearance of the heroine. How come he is so beautiful and full of fairy spirit that his face has been modified through practice?
I really can't stand it any longer. You've been exposed to both of the two major poisonous points in the fanfic: giving girls away and licking the protagonist (Shi Hao). Then I'll watch another 🐶eight fanfic.
I would advise normal people not to look at it.
I was a little mentally prepared when I read the comment section, but I couldn't help myself when I saw Chapter 25. . . He licked Shi Hao at least 4 times, and for the first time he spoke rudely to his twin sister in front of the suspected protagonist of this book. He endured it because he was still a child. The second time a hostage was captured, and the protagonist went to save it. After Shi lost, he had to push the rules even further. He endured it. The third time he repeatedly rudely spoke to the protagonist, but he endured it, and he was still a child. The fourth time, Shi went to knock on a sap to rob the kid, but the protagonist failed. He endured it, and there was no loss anyway. He was still a child. Then in the next chapter, someone else came to snatch the protagonist and killed them all. . . It's inappropriate to pretend that you can't see it anymore. I am a level 4 Tianquan who can barely be considered a middle V, and I can be considered an old book reader. In this forum, except for one person who is level 4 and above, all the others are scolding. Doesn't that explain the problem? The public's eyes are sharp, and there are not a few game copywriters that have been criticized in recent years. The licking dog, the turtle man, and the bull head must be praised, and they are the same as anti-humanity.
Lick, come on, lick! Giving a girl to the harem, Number 10 has also been blessed recently
The most speechless setting is that I was a man in my previous life and reincarnated as a woman in this life. There is also the world of low martial arts. I reincarnated into the perfect world. It is too unreliable to just rely on low martial arts to surpass many geniuses.
This heroine feels too pretentious to me, and she doesn't pretend to be smooth at all. Everyone is not born with knowledge and has to draw nutrients from the outside world. In the end, this protagonist is good. She doesn't fight for this and doesn't compete for that. She is so strong behind closed doors. Is it reasonable?
In the latest chapter, Shi Hao starts to be licked again. There is a high probability that the protagonist's sister will marry Shi Hao 😅
I think it's better not to portray the original work as too annoying, otherwise it will be difficult for you, the author, to deal with it. If some people say that you have killed fans who like the original work, or ran away or complained about it, you can only deal with it by portraying the popular characters better.
Female channels come to male channels, are they here to collect money? ! It's still so rubbish, what's the female channel like? We all know it! I remember a novel in which the heroine of a sect was a monk who was in the tribulation period. The supporting character slandered her, followed by a lot of nonsense and a lot of big principles, and then the supporting character asked the heroine to commit suicide and cultivate herself at her own expense, and the heroine actually did it! Female videos are basically like this. I mean basically, they are usually like this! Let alone this one
There is no such thing as a perfect fanfic, and the setting is not clear at all. The fanfic is based on the chance treasure technique. In this setting, detachment becomes stronger. Lingbao Tianzun uses formations to perform killing swordsmanship. It is just that the realm of humanity is extremely high and he cannot embark on the path of immortality. Does he not know the path of immortality in the world of mortals? Cao Yusheng used the sword formation to enter the body to practice, but he was unable to keep up with Huang, and the trio died in the battle in the end! Huang Yijian has been able to dominate the world for a long time. What is the basis of his sword? The basic method is only because he is strong, so he has such killing power! Just relying on swordsmanship, what the hell, it's nonsense!
{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210526193342829","UserId":366856974} Let's write the protagonist Yue Chan in the next book
{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210526193342829","UserId":366856974}Continue to update
I feel like reading the comments is more exciting than reading the book
{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210526193342829","UserId":366856974}Don't finish, keep writing
What's wrong with the author? It's been a few days and there's still no update.
{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210526193342829","UserId":366856974}The author's next article about the protagonist Yue Chan or An Miaoyi will definitely be popular
Introduction to a master of swordsmanship. It's no use even if you have a swordsman who is perfect.
Yunying in Glory
Repeatedly describing appearance too many times
666, I thought it was discontinued. My mentality is really stable. Come on, author.