Dream of Red Mansions

The writing is very good, most people do not engage in intellectual behavior among themselves, and the protagonist's psychological growth trajectory is very good. The portrayal of the supporting characters is also quite flesh-and-blood The only problem is that I feel that the Lai family's handling of Lai Er is a bit immoral. Lai Er self-destructed as the protagonist and replaced Jia Zhen. It must be made with a commitment, right? And when the protagonist raids Lai's house, if Lai Er reveals this to Lai Da and Lai Da exposes himself, the image of someone scheming against his own family... It should be very damaging to the protagonist. So it would be more reasonable for the protagonist to exchange actions such as protecting the eldest grandson of the Lai family in exchange for Lai Da shutting up.

Many Red Mansions novels seem to have a strange circle, forcibly creating conflicts in order to start the so-called golden three chapters, which is unreasonable and makes readers tired. This one is undoubtedly a good start. There are conflicts, but they are progressive and consistent with the characters' personalities. In terms of character interaction, some recent Red Mansions novels, Jin Chai is undoubtedly a convergent facial makeup. How to extend a new and reasonable character on the inherent basis of the original work is undoubtedly a highlight. In some novels, in the sculpting of the male protagonist, I even feel that this person has the same way of getting along with all the golden hairpins, and his actions, expressions, and actions are the same when he meets different female protagonists. The characters all have their own rich cores, and their external performances are different. They change over time. Appropriate extensions based on the core are what readers want to see. Otherwise, seeing the performance of the maid and Jin Chai's friend is quite speechless... There is also the character's goal, whether it is the imperial examination, joining the army, etc., At least it should give readers a preliminary understanding of it. It is acceptable to change as the main plot progresses midway. Some novels deliberately force the protagonist to do some unnecessary things in order to drive the main line. The protagonist's participation is not high, which will make readers feel that the protagonist is quite useless... Without self-motivation, the protagonist will be portrayed as confused The last thing is to write about how the Red Mansion is related to Jin Chai. If it is too abrupt, it will make people feel like they have seen the Red Mansion. It's a bit like dog-licking plus... The tone of the story is set at the beginning, and the characters will lead the direction of the story. Jin Chai is beautiful, but taking into account everything requires extremely high demands on the author's writing skills. I thought this book was well written. No matter the characters, rhythm, or plot, there were no surprises. After reading it, I put down my phone and thought: Well, these plots can all happen in reality.

There are always some people who think that the Ning family needs to talk about filial piety to Jia Mu. I read the "Book of Filial Piety" again and again, and found that filial piety is not even mentioned in this book even to grandparents, let alone other relatives. The dynasties and folk records do not require filial piety to cousins, let alone cousins ​​and other relatives other than cousins. I'm very confused. The first generations of Ning and Rong were two brothers. They separated into clans after they were granted titles. Ning Guo was the brother, so his family built the Jia family temple, and each generation served as clan leader. In the Jia Baoyu era, how many clan branches did the Jia family have in Beijing and Jinling? Will there be a cousin relationship between the branches? This is a clan relationship that will soon be released in the fifth server! Besides, if the people in the Ning Mansion want to talk about filial piety to Jia Mu, then something interesting will happen. For the people in the Ning Rong Mansion, how can Jia Dairu not be called ancestor? Should we be filial? I didn't even watch Jia He, Jia Zheng, Jia Zhen and other junior men and women go to the morning and dusk to study together!       In this book, the only filial piety of the protagonist is his father. Cousins like Jia Mu are not considered kin, and the protagonist is done in a normal life. If he calls his ancestors every day, I guess Jia Yan and Jia Daihua's coffin boards can't hold it anymore. They have to get up and ask the protagonist, "Whose father are you? If it's Jia He or Jia Zheng, don't blame Jia Jing, and go to Rongguo Mansion to recognize your relatives!"

Take in Grandma Jia's mother Liu

So far, the protagonist is straightforward and decisive, the supporting characters have online IQs, the plot is innocuous, and the writing is not clever but fluent. There are so many books on Red Mansions now, but according to the skills currently displayed in this Red Mansions, historical zoning will definitely have a place in the future.

It's okay, but don't imitate those Red Mansions novels to create an original heroine

I thought it looked awkward, but it turned out that it was set up in the late Northern Song Dynasty, and that Suzhou and Hangzhou were arranged in advance before the Southern Song Dynasty was peaceful. It was a bit interesting! But then there are only two choices. Let's learn from Yue Muwu. The male protagonist doesn't seem to be a loyal and patriotic person. He probably plans to imitate the vassal towns in the late Tang Dynasty, support the troops and respect themselves, then kill the small court and become the emperor himself.

The stallion almost vomited, I hope it can be a single female lead

How should I put it, Jin Chai in the Red Mansion has nothing to sympathize with. He has enjoyed such good treatment since he was a child, but he will have to pay the price when the building is about to fall.

The main character's name was given by his mother who had been dependent on him since he was a child. Ji Yetong "remembered" it, hoping that he would remember who he was. Jia Jing, who practiced Taoism and did not care about foreign affairs, also recognized the name himself. Later, he didn't bother to care about the main character when he was still in Ningguo Mansion, so everyone can just treat this as a setting in the book and don't get too entangled. As for not changing the name and not being allowed into the family tree, there is no such thing. Let's not mention that the protagonist is not even entered into the family tree. If the protagonist becomes awesome later, it will be too late for the declining Jia family to curry favor. How can they disgust the protagonist over such a thing? I won't explain this issue anymore.

To be honest, I call the old woman "ancestor" every day. I don't know why. According to the relationship, the protagonist is not from his family. Just call him an old lady. Why call him "ancestor"? I don't understand either. I'm curious if anyone can explain? The more I look at this old woman, the more she looks like Jia Zhang from Siheyuan 😥

I found that the writing is getting better and better. I didn't really like the protagonist's character when I read it before, but after I joined the army, I got a good response, although the style was a bit cool. It easily overwhelms everyone in the Jia family, but the perception is quite good. The characters in this book, Mrs. Jia Mu and Wang, are not that unpleasant, they are normal people, and there are not so many conspirators. In addition, the core garden drama of the Red Mansion is also well written, and there is no procrastination in recruiting girls. Yuanyang Baochai gets started directly, which greatly satisfies the readers. The main theme of the book is the Red Mansion, and there is also a political main line interspersed. It is good that the characters appear one by one. , It doesn't look messy, and it won't be like some previous Red Mansion novels, where you accept one after another. In addition, it is taboo in Red Mansions to originalize all kinds of maids, princesses and princesses that you have never heard of. This book has not yet been discovered. Good reviews

The protagonist is a little high and low, and he feels empathy when he sees Yunyun reborn, and says that there is no place in the world where he can't get a little general. These are the highlights, but the protagonist meets the old man, Wang Ziteng, etc., And the writing is too stiff, you can not agree with them But there is no need to be so straightforward along the way. It will be much more comfortable to watch if you leave some room for it. When you scold Jia Zhen, the language is too straightforward. It would be better to write it according to the cursing method of Wan Tianqing. The better the text and plot are handled, it can be called a masterpiece.

Author, someone in the comment area said that the protagonist is a prince, so don't do it. I'm really tired of reading it. There are a lot of fans who say that the protagonist is a prince, so the emperor is a fool. . .

I hope that the male protagonist will not marry too many. Baochai and Daiyu are both very good. They deserve good husbands, but they are definitely not shared. With two wives, Baochai is originally from a merchant family. With two wives, whether it is Daiyu or not, she will definitely not have the advantage. Moreover, her and the male protagonist's identities do not match. After a long time, even if the male protagonist dotes on her, it will be scary and unrealistic. Judging from this development, the author has made Daiyu dislike Baoyu, and it seems that the remaining lady position is reserved for her. One more question, the emperor decreed that two wives were allowed? Impossible, don't you hear that Bao Qingtian killed the consort? The emperor does not have two wives. There must be someone higher than him, even if it is an equal wife. After all, Jia Rong, the direct descendant of the Rongguo Mansion, is not dead, and in ancient times, there was a system of monogamy and multiple concubines. Most of them adopted their children to their direct descendants. How can there be two wives?

So far, the writing is pretty good, but I still have to say something about updating. Please be more diligent. After all, you have to have more than 100 chapters to get more people to read it.

Let me ask, should I accept all the gold hairpins?🙂

Having said all that, I have never seen a book that collected Jia Mu.

I don't object to either one or more, but I hate stallions 😅.

Dear book friends, please don't keep books in the new book period. Even if you want to keep books, please mark all the chapters updated every day to the end and add your own follow-up data! Follow-up data is very important for new books! Very important! So please be sure to mark updated chapters to the end every day and increase the follow-up data! The recommendation effect of this book is actually very average, so the follow-up data is okay, so please don't keep books and take care of the seedlings. The author would like to thank you in advance.

What about updates? ? ? If you have anything to do, please tell me in advance! I can't get up or down.

When I first read it, I thought it was quite innovative, but unfortunately I saw that it followed the same routine as other Red Mansion novels, and I started to work as a nanny again. I felt that I was good again and could save this and that.

I have caught up to the latest, and so far I feel that it is pretty good. The rhythm and writing are very good. The good point is that the flying fox in the garden is not as high-blood pressure as in other Red Mansion novels. I am more worried about the update issue and the rhythm of some people in the book review area who persuade the author to give Daiyu away. Apart from these two points, it is top-notch in the Red Mansion novel. I would like to ask if the author will really allocate Daiyu to Jia Baoyu.

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It's a bit too much to travel back in time for half a year to learn archery, and to learn killing skills in just one month. Even if you travel back in time for two years and learn two years, it's okay.

Author, where are you? Really no more updates?

There is no news about the author either, which is even more of a pity.

You can write about how the Jin people suddenly went south, the capital fell, and the emperor's court fled south. In the process of the protagonist taking the Ningrong family, friends and subordinates to escape, the protagonist gradually subdued his subordinates and finally fled to a certain place in the capital to accumulate food and slowly become king.

The most taboo thing about writing is being affected by the comment area The author can write whatever he wants.

The merchant girl does not know the hatred of the country's subjugation, but she still sings the flowers in the backyard across the river