Elf, a Genius Scientist Who Traveled from Time to Time as a Pirate

You can write less emotional scenes. I really like the comic setting in front of it! But later on, Hua Xia Su Sheng Xie Guo Feng Wang tasted too strong!

Vegapunk is a technology developer who relies on the brain fruit. He does not have the exploratory spirit of a scientist but is a stickman who is addicted to prophecies and played as a savior.

Isn't it right? The protagonist is a scientist, and he has to arrest people by himself? Just ask the Rockets to catch it for you. You recognize Sakaki and have cooperated with him. You must be siding with the Rockets by default. Don't do such a small thing yourself. It looks very cheap.

Conscientious Boss

Know a little bit about boxing and kicking

Bu Fei said you are from next door, look at this ID, it can't be a milk tea potato, right?

The front part is pretty good, especially using the theme of Rogue to advance the plot. But since the invention of the skill machine, it has become more and more off-topic. What kind of consortia and alliances are seducing and robbing people? There are also reinforcements for the lineup, instead of relying on the consortium to conquer them directly, and now they have asked the Rockets to help conquer the legends... This is far away from the theme of Pokémon encounters and bonds. Even the only difference between your small group and that consortium is that you don't rob the owned Pokémon... It's not that the protagonist can't make money and increase influence through technology, but don't use this method to reinforce the Pokémon of the protagonist's team.

To be honest, this book is really not that good, far from the Pokemon in Lu, and this one is not good either. You wrote in Lu's cool articles before, which I thought was pretty good, but when you think about it, you want to rely on Qidian's writing, but you really don't have the writing skills. You might as well write exactly like Lu's, and maybe you can attract some people.

It feels like it's not fun to get, it's a little bit toxic. Why do the technical personnel fight in battles? You won't issue tasks, hire others to help you, and have to do it yourself?

The front is okay, the back is fine. . . . What I want to see is the imagination and cool operations, and I feel like the main character is nicknamed the Joker. Um, the character is so bad.

No, is the dream part necessary? Give the protagonist a reason to pick up girls? Didn't you say that you are good at writing about harems? Is this how your harem came to be? Write well, and it would be better not to fix it than to fix it.

1. Although Pokémon is younger, the people who watch it are all in their thirties. But the way the protagonist of this novel handles things is too fairy tale (childish). For example, make a clown to catch criminals at random on the street. He uses the same Yue Eevee for both his surface and hidden identities. Even a ten-year-old child, Ashu, can detect it. 2. Go to other people's houses to save Pokémon at a party. You say you saved it quietly, and then it's fine to expose it later. But why did you make a big fuss, fight against several king trainers, watch a few onlookers, use props to leave in front of the boss, and then be chased by a few silly dogs afterwards? The plot here is quite unreasonable. Is there no Pokémon with a good sense of smell in the alliance? (Carty dog, shall I leave?) 3. After rescuing the little pear flower, you didn't escape? I don't believe that all the League's special chapters are good people. The protagonist himself said before that neither the League nor the Rockets are necessarily good people. The League will definitely not find out in other ways? Finally, I have to recruit Lihua into the group. (Wouldn't it be easier to find her if she had more contacts?) A group of children pretending not to pretend to play role-playing with original Pokémon? Conclusion, no, brothers and sisters, I really want to bring the two former Rockets into the group (Rika and Kazuki), but the logic of the book needs to be carefully polished, and the overall structure of the book is good. Many people think the same as me, don't let yourself go, you deserve better results.

That's why you're 500 years ahead of the world. . . . . .

Is this still a scientist? There were always fights in the back, or they were flirting with girls.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the article is not right. Where is the brain reflected after 500 years?

Having children is not a disadvantage

In this materialistic society, people are cold and heartless, but this novel is still a little warm.

You don't have a child. You don't have a devil fruit... How do you remember so many memories?

The plot is quite interesting, but the writing is so poor

Brushing dy, I got a moon-shaped Ibrahimovic So handsome😎😎😎

Chapter 59, I feel that the protagonist is still very weak. If I don't have the strength, I can make equipment. If I can't get it permanently, I can make consumables. If it doesn't work, I can borrow an elf. The protagonist now looks like he is ready to fight the boss just after leaving the novice village.

Why didn't you say anything when you came to Qidian? I've been waiting on the stove for you to update your new book.

Must be refined

No wonder the writing looks so familiar. It turned out to be potatoes, and I was still waiting patiently over there.

I feel like it's almost over. The evil forces in each region have been dealt with. What's left is the championship plot, the red road to the championship and Xiaozhi. The male protagonist's strength and reputation have reached the peak, unless he breaks away from the Rockets and manages a territory to form a new alliance.

It feels like this fight is about to be over. Are there any other big events that can be done in the future?

Isn't it that no one has said anything about the plot of Itagi revealing his identity? It feels like it was written by someone else. The writing is so abnormal. If I hadn't read the author's previous books, I didn't want to read them. Why did the writing in a different place still have problems?

Finished with flowers~ Overall, it's pretty good. The protagonist is probably the one with the fewest elves I've ever seen. The first and middle stages are okay, but the plot is too tight, and the time is actually quite confusing. Suddenly, a few months later, sometimes I look back and realize that two years have passed since the previous plot. Actually, looking at the title of the book, I thought it would vigorously develop technology. I have only seen the first few books, but there is basically no plot about technology in the back, which is a bit disappointing.

Recommend a pirate fan novel: "Pirates: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" [Decisive Killing + Dominance + Great Swordsman + Pirate Group + Age of Rocks + World Domination] Return to the Age of Rocks, join the Rocks Pirate Group and become a cadre, grab the gold from the sky, massacre the Celestial Dragons during the Battle of the Valley of Gods, and form a pirate group after Rocks' death to dominate one side. During the second celebration of the Celestial Dragons, all the pirate groups in the new world of the Alliance once again launched the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, snatching the Celestial Dragons' treasures and devil fruits, massacring the Celestial Dragons again, killing Lord Garin, Army General, and CP0 Chief... Hawkeye Homick: The world's greatest swordsman? No, no, no, this is not me, but Li Yuan. Ever since I started learning swordsmanship, I have been pursuing his path of swordsmanship. Whitebeard: The strongest man in the world is not me, but Li Yuan. That guy is so outrageous that even my ability to awaken the Shock Fruit cannot defeat him! Five Old Stars: Obviously I am immortal and can passively teleport to save my life. Why am I still being killed?

Isn't the new book written here? Why can't I find it?