Mysterious Resurrection: the Starving Ghost's Reincarnation

After reading many chapters, there are several obvious problems. First, this is a mysterious resurrection. Ghost masters basically have no emotions, and most of them are negative. The ghost master you wrote has too many emotions. Second, the protagonist is useless. Mysterious revival only has dead protagonists and strong protagonists. Without a useless protagonist, a useless protagonist equals the death of the book. Third, you wrote that the protagonist is a time traveler + understand the setting of mysterious resurrection, so you still haven't settled on the three most basic abilities of the Starving Ghost. Row, the nail in the coffin is just a tack. The reason why the starving ghost is strong is that it can unlimitedly devour ghosts that are not more terrifying than itself. After swallowing, it will increase its own terror level. Moreover, the ghost domain is very large and the intensity is not low. The effect is good. If you haven't written it, then why do you write about starving ghost? I personally suggest that you delete the outline and rewrite it, or write fantasy. The protagonist of the mysterious resurgence is useless only when he does not control the evil ghost. Once he controls the evil ghost, he will be useless from that moment on. You have to become stronger, and being a dog to the headquarters is very poisonous. In the beginning of Starving Ghost + Coffin Nail, you can go directly to the ghosts to eat. Later, you can find a way to kill Zhang Lei and get the puzzle. The well-written plot is messed up by you. Fourthly, the protagonist is a ghost, without emotions and no physical reactions. You have written too many emotional descriptions now. The protagonist is not decisive enough to kill. If you can't kill the mysterious resurrection, it is the Holy Mother. It doesn't matter if you are the person in charge. You become a direct bloodbath. I don't know how to write about interstitial organizations and ghosts. I don't understand what you are writing. I don't write about ghosts and ghosts. The swallowing of ghosts also adds digestion restrictions. The starving ghost can't swallow the coffin nails because it is nailed. If it is eaten directly, it is no problem.

6. Devoured a starving ghost + a ghost + two coffin nails + a dozen ghosts. With this configuration, he was almost killed by two middle-level ghosts? Author, you really know how to write. Normally these two ghosts can't even break defenses, right? ! And when did the starving ghost have the disadvantage of being swallowed and digested by the fierce ghost to break through the body's shortcomings? The essence of the starving ghost's ability is that it can turn all ghosts into puzzle pieces of itself. Even the supernatural derivative Ghost Boy has this ability, and Ghost Boy didn't see this shortcoming when it was devouring ghosts crazily in Baiyang Town! As a result, you suddenly have a flaw. Once you have this flaw, it means that the protagonist has a limit. Even this limit can only touch the bottom of the Seven Elders. The protagonist with this flaw is no longer worthy of being called a starving ghost. He does not even have the essential ability of a starving ghost (turning swallowed ghosts into his own puzzle). This is already a fraud in the title of the book. After all, we basically clicked in just to see the protagonist of Starving Death.

Generally speaking, the protagonist is a real ghost who is more emotional than a human being. He develops slowly. After swallowing a coffin nail, the protagonist is full and unable to digest it. The ability of the starving ghost is basically not seen. He swallowed a coffin nail and took a shovel in the supernatural place and then came out. The most poisonous plot is the old blind man. He found the protagonist inexplicably and then tricked the protagonist to work there. The key protagonist actually followed him. Looking at the interaction between the protagonist and the old blind man, do you want to write a nonsensical and funny plot? I don't know if it's funny or not, but it's quite embarrassing and makes me uncomfortable to watch.

Nowadays, fans of Mysterious Resurrection can't write anything after leaving the headquarters, so they must join the headquarters. For a ghost as independent and powerful as the Starving Ghost, you have to join the headquarters. No wonder people say that you treat the headquarters as a dog. The original headquarters actually does not regard the ghost controller as a human being. The author said that the Starving Ghost does not need to be developed in one step. So if you want to develop, you can add a chicken-feather headquarters. Will the headquarters provide you with ghosts? Is there anything in the headquarters that must be obtained? You haven't even joined the headquarters. Aren't you just being a dog to the headquarters? Then there is the classic mysterious revival, the protagonist is very emotional, whether he is a ghost controller or not, the protagonist has become a ghost, a group of people with strong emotions Mysterious Resurrection is a very difficult fanfic to write about. The character of the protagonist must be very strong, because both the weaklings and the middle ones are already dead. In addition, this is not an ordinary cultivation of immortality. You go step by step. Mysterious Resurrection is a classic one-step approach to reaching the sky, so the combat power is very difficult to control. Then there is the classic start of Tianhu and then he starts to suppress the combat power. I don't know how many books I have read. This is another one.

It's been written to pieces. The main character must have never read the original work. The main character is a starving ghost + a deceitful ghost + a ghost. The result was that he couldn't digest ghosts and needed to release the ghosts in his body. Moreover, the protagonist of the original ghost has never used the skill or didn't know it existed (infinite clones).

The pressure on the starving ghosts is too severe. If you write about the starving ghosts, you will definitely grow up very quickly. Maybe you will worry about writing too fast, but you were already suppressed in the early stage. Are you afraid that you will have no room to write? You can write more ghosts, but there is no need to be like this. I am not in the mood to read it. Mysterious recovery itself is about rapid growth or death. Look at what you wrote.

It's inexplicable to watch. He joined the headquarters inexplicably. He was obliterated if he didn't join. Is the headquarters so strong? If you don't have Mr. Qin, you really don't know how strong it is just by reading the original work, and Mr. Qin generally won't take action. Moreover, the protagonist is set to be a starving ghost. A ghost will be afraid of the headquarters. I really don't mean to criticize it. The protagonist's status as a starving ghost is invincible on the human side in the early stage. He even joins the headquarters and then wipes it out. It's really disgusting. You want to write like this. Why are there so many clubs in the country in the early stage? Why didn't you erase it? If you really want to bully the weak and fear the strong, the protagonist is a ghost and won't resist? Written one by one.

Rubbish novel, what level of existence is a tattoo parlor? Can the captain at that time enter it at will? Moreover, the protagonist can't wait to climb up the pole after just threatening him. It's understandable that Gui Yingxiao can't digest the coffin nails at first, but there are so many stupid operations that people instantly lose interest. Tianhu's opening and stupid operations are the same 💩

A strange smell, using the name of mysterious recovery to insult the mysterious recovery, disgusting readers

This is a piece of shit

A wonderful mysterious resurgence is written as a story about how happy two-part youths are.

It is better for the starving ghost to have a well-planned development route at the beginning. The starving ghost who lets go of food has already been shown in Baishui Town, but the protagonist turned out to be a rotten fish and a rotten shrimp. The supernatural land and bus at the beginning, why do you have to go to reality and just leave the bus to eat and eat, eat to the point of eating the bus, and then play house with humans? I read a book before about plotting to starve ghosts to death. After the success, it quickly became indescribable. After that, I started writing about how to solve supernatural problems and deal with some unsolvable ghosts that appeared later and even the seventh elder shook his head. Creating some unsolvable ghosts that even Zhang Dong would be afraid of is better than playing house with the headquarters. Your plot is like Superman not going out to bask in the sun and running underground to play spy house with a group of underground people.

When I was an ordinary person, it was okay to work as a cow or a horse for others. Now I have turned into an immortal starving ghost, and I am still threatened by the headquarters to be a dog. The more I look at it, the more frustrated I am.

Just like that book, the dream is lost, a waste of time

What is written here? Want to be funny in Mysterious Resurrection? Does the author think he is humorous? Moreover, the ghost is written with an evil smile and gentle eyes 😵😵😵

Based on my ten years of experience in reading books, this book is 100% eunuch

If you don't know how to write, you don't have to write it. What you write is the same as history.

Wouldn't it be better to find a place to hide and develop slowly, or join the headquarters in a low-key manner without exposing your strength and secretly eat ghosts, and wait until the older generation is dead to develop like crazy? Be a dog

I'm not good at writing. It's a good thing that I want to write a book.

If you have any ghost abilities that you think are novel, interesting or fun, please share them here.

Very well written and enjoyable to read!

It feels so messy, I can only say that my skills are not good enough.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Come on, press the protagonist, otherwise it will be over with 400 pictures at most. Press water and water to reach 5,600 pictures.