Start Beast Control with the Bodhi Branch Contract

The story pace and plot are both good. But from the perspective of a female reader, it is full of poisonous points. First of all, the ratio of men to women is uneven. Men are either villains or just for slaps in the face. Boys of this age usually have a few good friends, right? The friend is Bai Fumei who has a crush on the protagonist. The policeman he befriends is a woman, the doctor is also a woman, and the teacher is a woman. Basically all the characters (who I feel will reappear) are female. Secondly, there are too many descriptions of the appearance of the female characters, too superficial, and it feels like they are all waiting to be included in the harem.

Very good, but details are very important. You have to write out the details yourself and write down the settings clearly, otherwise you will definitely be scolded by the audience in the end.

At present, the main character and the people around him have a sense of existence, but the country and society are almost blank. It is really just one person who saves the world, right?

The current protagonist plug-in is obviously related to Buddha. Buddha means an enlightened person. Having realized one's own path and the truth of the world is becoming a Buddha.

An assessment is of no benefit, so don't choose a difficult one. It's already a cheat for the protagonist, and his strength will change soon. Choosing a difficult assessment here is just a pretense and not a good one.

Buddha means enlightenment, enlightenment. In summary, it is enlightenment, an enlightened person.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

Your plug-in is beyond the standard. Upgrade the plug-in, which is useless. The two water types you have temporarily contracted with me now feel something is wrong (I don't know if it is considered a deception, or it is too silly and sweet). I want to go home and leave, but it clearly feels that the author wants to recruit the sharks and uses cheats to keep them. I am too anxious. The two little ones haven't finished writing yet, and they come again. .

Come on, I think the author wrote well 😆