Tokyo: Starting from the Grim Reaper as the Mastermind

Where did you do it for me? Still the mastermind? Am I reading a Tokyo-style romance novel?

The author's writing is too bland. Tokyo behind-the-scenes is not Tokyo romance. No one wants to see the protagonist fall in love. The heroine is not important. What is important is the supporting role. It needs conflict, sharpness, extremeness, and bloodshed.

How can the defense of the Hollow be broken by ordinary people? That guy named Yucheng Shingo is too exaggerated. Is this guy's hands made of iron? It seems that the author is just a cloud. The swordsmanship in his childhood was just a scratch in our country. How can he be blown away by the author like this?

Chapter 38 is so poisonous Poison point 1. The Hollow can be physically attacked and seen by mortals Poison point 2. Soul King B has become the Jade of Four Souls No matter how you look at it, this is not the Shinigami system, it is just a trap and it is not good.

A human breaks open the virtual skin with bare hands, is it true or false?

How to say it? Not that cool. To be precise, I suppressed the desire to read more than 50 chapters without wanting to continue reading. I'm not the kind of person with a very picky appetite, but I feel like it's the kind of tasteless food that would be a pity to throw away.

I really don't understand why people in time-traveling and seizing a body like a waste who seizes a body, and why the original character is a waste and the protagonist pretends to be cool as soon as he comes. Does anyone really like this kind of plot?

This is my first time seeing behind-the-scenes themes like Death, come on

A mere low-level virtual energy uses sound to turn...

It's all the same and boring. It's nothing more than doing something dark, creating a few dark people, and then embarrassingly pretending to create a few so-called Justice Leagues.

I'm very confused. All extraordinary things come from the protagonist. The protagonist creates villains and righteousness, and he also suffers. There must be a purpose in doing things. The introduction says to turn everyone into lambs Does it mean to become believers? I think this can only be regarded as the result. How can it be driven without profit? It's fun?

Why are the supporting characters all chuunibyou? Chuunibyou can be a smooth character, but it would be outrageous if you only have one beautiful one.

There is one point that is difficult to grasp in this type of book, that is, the description length of the protagonist is completely inferior to that of the supporting characters, but readers do not want to see too much drama of the supporting characters, so it will be very boring to read.

The control of the plot is too poor, with a hammer here and there. The number of updates hasn't increased yet

No obvious villain, seems a bit boring, no climax

The plot control is not very good, there is no foreshadowing at all, it is just a random hit.

Death is much more difficult to write than Naruto. There really isn't an even battle between Death. If you can't beat me in the first stage, you'll torture me in the second stage, and then I'll torture you in the second stage to see who has more stages. In the early stage, there are those with low spiritual pressure that can cut down those with high spiritual pressure without breaking the defense. Although there are also spells, the problem is that not many of them are used and they are only used to abuse vegetables. There are not many who use their brains to fight, most of them defeat all methods with one force. There is also Aizen who is ridiculously strong. The protagonist still uses his abilities. As long as this character is not written well, it will basically collapse in half.

Death wearing Aizen is like Naruto wearing Orochimaru, Pirate wearing Luffy, One Punch wearing Saitama, Fairy Tail wearing Natsu, Hunter wearing Gon.

After reading more than thirty chapters, I came up with a problem that currently exists in this work The mastermind behind the scenes is only French. If you borrow the super power of Death, Naruto or Pirates, the more important thing is to use this power for your own use, that is, you must have your own right of interpretation. This work still writes about Xu, the Spirit King, which makes people feel that the sense of reality is weakened, giving people a sense of floating. In fact, you can refer to other excellent books of the same type and integrate the abilities of the God of Death into real-life myths and legends, which will make you feel more satisfied.

Has this book been taken off the shelves and put back on the shelves?

Come on, I hope I can write a good story about Tokyo behind-the-scenes. I really like reading this kind of novels. I hope I can write some excellent ones, and then let other authors follow suit and write more novels.

The rhythm of the opening chapter is completely gone. Now it looks like a pure romance novel.

I'm back. The first part is not very good. After getting over it, it's a bit interesting. The author likes to write about Japanese campuses while doing evil things. It's okay. Except for the first part, I can read it.

No, why do I feel like I've read this book?

Brothers, please read it! ! ! ! Just turn to the latest chapter and wait a minute to read it. Thank you, good brothers! It's really important to catch up on new books‼ ️

Before I saw the back, I saw that the Spirit King was trying to steal the Spirit King fragments to suppress the Dark Spirit King. It looked very low. Normally, the level of the Spirit King should only be known in the middle and late stages (unless you have other big bosses). You are a bit... 😅