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Really, the author should revise it. As someone who has been living abroad for a long time and watched live broadcasts, I just want to laugh when I see such a series of harsh words. Stop it, it makes me sick. Foreign countries never live broadcast to compare who is better than who and then directly criticize someone for no reason. I really can't stand it without modification. There are not so many mindless trolls in foreign countries, and they are not the cesspool of domestic lpl. This way of writing CS has no market.
The author would like to give a suggestion. Many players who read the book are new players and are not interested in previous technologies and so on. The writing is too slow and too slow, with many unnecessary scenes included. The rhythm is very bland and readers cannot feel the excitement. The protagonist is also very mediocre. Most of the time, the role of the protagonist cannot be seen after flipping through the book. There are too many descriptions of supporting characters. Learn from donk. The perspective is mainly focused on donk. Kill a few donk and die in the endgame, which is the material for supporting characters. Instead of writing most of a chapter about the plot other than the protagonist. It cannot be substituted.
The real author who went back for the New Year
The author will give me 3 updates tomorrow, and I will give you a monthly pass
Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.
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Author, can you check it after you finish writing? The author may generate electricity for love. Typos and some sentences. Not very clear. Especially in the front, it clearly says 2020, but in the blink of an eye it becomes 2024.
There are too few details, just like looking at data, there is no climax.
Is the writing okay? Can't you stick to it?
It's really fun to write. There are too few updates.
Why is it over? Woohoo😭