Immortality Martial Arts: Starting from Nine Yang Fist

Author, to be honest, your first chapter is too discouraging. He is a son of a rich family, his father is the best master, and the Taoist priest has been the same for hundreds of years. He has been holding the golden finger and added some points. The result... It has been three years and he has stopped learning. He didn't learn until his sister's family was killed. The reason is that he is weak and can't practice martial arts. It seems like the golden finger is eating dry food.

Look at the first chapter. Three years in time, a son from a rich family and his father is the best master, but he hasn't learned any martial arts in three years?

The data, especially the life span increase, is messy. The third change of qi and blood is said to have been improved by two and a half years, but the data is only improved by one year. The third level of Jiu Yang Gong is raised to the fifth level, and it is said to be a one-year increase in life span, but the data has not changed. I won't talk about the mess, but the key point is that the setting is unreasonable. Jiuyang increases the first level to 20, the second level to 20.5, The third level to 23, the fourth level to the fifth level and the two levels to one year... Are you talking about the martial arts of longevity or the martial arts of shortening your life? If you are afraid that the data will skyrocket in the later period, you can't write about the martial arts of longevity. It's disgusting.

That's outrageous. The first chapter is the arrival of the sister, the second chapter is the death of the sister, and the third chapter is the cremation. It's not written like this

After reading the previous chapters, I can see that you can increase your realm at will by learning the exercises. There is nothing else but physical weakness that affects your realm improvement. Then why not just complete the exercises in one go? How great would it be to be directly invincible?

After reading a few chapters, what the hell is the Five Elements missing?

Brother, let's just deal with some of your poisonous points in the first few chapters. After all, you are an old bookworm with high poison resistance, and your logic barely makes sense. For example, you are too weak to practice martial arts. But when I read Chapter 6, the protagonist already knew that the innate treachery would engulf the two counties in a few days. Since the book did not show the protagonist's ability to not be afraid of treachery, he should leave early. It's like knowing that a bomb is going to fly in two days, but I won't leave, just because the bomb won't kill me, and your family is also here, and you don't tell them to leave. Even if you say that these two counties have been trapped by tricks and cannot get out, no matter how vicious the logic is, you still have to have one. Reality often does not follow logic, but in novels, it must be explained and justified. Come on!

I found that some readers are not willing to read it carefully before commenting. There is nothing wrong with the appearance of the golden finger in the first chapter of this book and the setting of the protagonist. I suspect that this little author has offended someone and started to criticize. At least, it is okay to read a few more chapters and summarize the really bad points before criticizing. There are a lot of people who thank Shen Nong for testing the poison, but they don't think about whether the reviewer is really Shennong.

The writing is good. Although the background is average, the narrative, plot advancement, and the protagonist's growth trajectory are very clear. It is step by step, and the reading is relatively smooth.

Crazy abuser, sister died in the first chapter

No comments, I'm going to try some poison.

Seedlings beg for care, book friends who raise books. I hope you can turn to the last page and give the newbie a follow-up read. If you don't follow up, it will be difficult for the author to make subsequent recommendations. As long as you are satisfied with the follow-up reading, there will definitely be a lot of hits! Thank you, everyone!

How should I put it, the protagonist is shaped by the author into a person whose success is more valuable for research than his own person.

This protagonist, with his mouth, has the feeling of a "strong man" with strength but no heart, as in Internet articles 😰

I have been reading this book for three months, so I should be considered an old bookworm and qualified to comment on this book. Each character is very full-bodied, the economic system is very rigorous, and it does not overwhelm the combat power. The fighting scenes are as immersive as they are. The most important thing is that the plot is interlocking. The protagonist uses absolute IQ to crush the enemy. There is no on-the-spot breakthrough and no short-term plot. I really don't know how the author wrote such a masterpiece. It can be called a fantasy version of the epic. In reality, even an ordinary supporting actor has an IQ far higher than Hawking and comparable to Zhuge Liang.

I'm curious, these books that don't even have subscriptions have hundreds of monthly passes. Where do these monthly passes come from?

The pig's feet look like two haha ​​at the critical moment

The writing is not good. It is best for the author to read it himself. Many places do not look like they were written by humans. It is weird.